Unit3Immoreoutgoingthanmysister.-2023-2024學(xué)年八年級英語上冊單元寫作深度指導(dǎo)（人教版）（學(xué)生版）

Unit3I’mmoreoutgoingthanmysister.單元寫作指導(dǎo)與演練近三年考情分析話題考查熱度談?wù)撊宋锏膫€性特征人物的外貌和個性特征本單元的話題是談?wù)撊宋锏膫€性特征，本單元的寫作題目與描寫人物的個性特征相關(guān)。寫此類短文時，要抓住所比較的人物的特點，從外貌特征(如tall,short,thin,fat,long/shorthair等)、個性特點(如outgoing,funny,friendly,hardworking,smart等)等方面來描述。若要進行人物個性特征的比較，則要寫出他們的相同點和不同點，并能夠正確使用比較級進行表達。語言要精煉、準確，行文要流暢。重點考查學(xué)生以下能力：掌握并熟練使用一般現(xiàn)在時；能使用一般現(xiàn)在時造句；能熟練運用形容詞及形容詞比較級句型。1.總分總結(jié)構(gòu)。短文通常分為三個部分：總第一部分：開篇點題，引出話題。分第二部分：介紹相同之處與不同之處?？偂谌糠郑喊l(fā)表看法。2.人稱：第一人稱，第三人稱。3.時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時（注意單三）。【詞匯積累】tall/thin/heavy/longhair/shorthair高的/瘦的/長發(fā)/短發(fā)funny/friendly/outgoing/hardworking/smart/lazy搞笑的/友好的/外向的/努力的/聰明的/懶惰的besimilarto與.......相似betalentedin在.......有天賦likedoingsth.喜歡做beseriousabout對.......認真careabout關(guān)心workhard努力學(xué)習playsports做體育運動begoodat擅長as...as與.......一樣bedifferentfrom與.......不同bringout使顯示thesameas和.......相同aslongas只要【句式積累】1.Ihaveabestfriend.His/hernameis...我有一個好朋友，她/他的名字是....2.Shehaslonghair/shorthair...她留著長發(fā)/短發(fā)......3.Butwehavesomedifferences...但是我們有一些不同.......4.Iammoreoutgoingthanhim.我比他外向。5.Sheisnotas...asIam.她不如我....6.Heisgoodat...他很擅長.......7.Webothlike...我們都喜歡........8.Iworkharderthanher.我比她學(xué)習努力。9.Sheistalentedinmusic.她在音樂方面有天賦。10.Helikestodothesamethingsasme.他喜歡做和我一樣的事情。11.Myfriendtrulycaresaboutme.我的朋友真地很關(guān)心我。12.Wecantalkaboutandshareeverything.我們可以互相交談并且分享一切。13.Weenjoystudyingtogether.我們喜歡在一起學(xué)習。14.Ithinkfriendsarelikebooksyoudon’tneedalotofthemaslongastheyaregood.我覺得朋友像書不需要太多只要足夠好。15.It’snotnecessarytobethesame沒必要一樣。16.Ibelievewewillbeebetterandbetter.我相信我們會變得越來越好。17.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患難見真情。18.Truefriendsarealwaysthereforyou.真正的朋友會一直陪在你身邊。19.Iwillmisshim.我會想念他。20.Ihopewewillbegoodfriendsforever.我希望我們將永遠是好朋友?！_頭句①MybestfriendisLiYun./LiYunismybestfriend. ②MyfriendsandIhavealotinmon，butwestillhavesomedifferences.③Asthesayinggoes，“Youdon'tneedalotoffriendsaslongasthey'regood.”※中間句①Sheoftenwearsapinkshirtandbluetrousers.②Ithinksheisverykindhearted.③Sheisoutgoingandalwaysmakespeoplearoundherhappyandrelaxed.④Bothofusliketomakenewfriendsandwealsolovetohelpotherpeople.※結(jié)尾句①Eventhoughwehavedifferences，wearestillverygoodfriends.②Ifeelhappytohavesuchagoodfriend.③Ihopeourfriendshipwilllastforever.【諺語積累】1．Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患難見真情。2．Afriendiseasierlostthanfound.得朋友難，失朋友易?！救f能寫作模板】我和我最好的朋友介紹自己和朋友：MybestfriendisLinda.Webecamefriendsthreeyearsago.比較自己和好朋友的異同：Insomewayswearethesame.Insomewayswearedifferent.總結(jié)：Althoughwehavedifferences,wearegoodfriends.真正的朋友,在你獲得成功的時候,會為你高興;在你遇到不幸或悲傷的時候,會給你及時的支持;在你犯錯誤的時候,會給你正確的批評和幫助.這樣的友誼才是真正可貴的.請你寫一篇短文介紹一下你和你最好的朋友,80詞左右.體裁:記敘文人稱:以第三人稱和第一人稱為主要求:1.簡要說明你的擇友觀;2.簡單比較一下你和好友之間的外貌、性格、愛好的異同點(要求使用比較級);3.簡述一件你們共同經(jīng)歷的事(如學(xué)校郊游、才藝表演等),體現(xiàn)好友對你的幫助.注意:短文中不允許出現(xiàn)與考生本人相關(guān)的真實姓名和校名等信息.Mybestfriend_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________思路導(dǎo)引表明自己的擇友觀→Idon'tthinkit'snecessaryforfriendstobethesame.比較自己和好友之間的外貌、性格、愛好的異同點Differences:Linda:quieter,taller,longhair,doeswellinEnglishandChineseMe:noisier,shorter,shorthair,begoodatmathSimilarities:likedoinghomeworktogether,helpeachother,likeplayingtennis簡述一件和好友共同經(jīng)歷的事,表達對好友的感情Itookpartintheschooltalentshow,feltsonervousLindaencouragedmeandkepthelpingmedidmybestandwonfirstprizebringoutthebestinme,feelsoluckytohavesuchafriend詞句積累詞匯bethesameas和······相同bedifferentfrom與······不同begoodat擅長······dowellin在······方面做得好helpeachother互相幫助feellucky感到幸運bringoutthebestinme把我最好的一面表現(xiàn)出來winfirstprize獲得一等獎句子1.Idon'tthinkit'snecessaryforfriendstobethesame.我認為朋友沒有必要一樣.2.Weliketodoourhomeworktogetherafterschoolandwealwayshelpeachother.我們喜歡放學(xué)后一起做作業(yè),我們總是互相幫助.3.I'mgoodat...butLindadoeswellin...我擅長·····而琳達在······方面做得好.4.IstillrememberwhenI...,Ifelt..,atfirst.我仍然記得當我·····時,一開始我感到·······5.AssoonasLindaknewmyproblem,sheencouragedmeandkepthelpingme.琳達一知道我的問題,就鼓勵我并一直幫助我.6.Atlast,Ididmybestandwonfirstprize.最終,我盡了最大的努力,并獲得了一等獎.7.Sheoftenhelpstobringoutthebestinme.她經(jīng)常幫我把最好的一面表現(xiàn)出來.8.Ifeelluckytohavesuchafriend.我很幸運有這樣一個朋友.9.諺Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患難見真情.佳作展示MybestfriendLinda①Idon'tthinkit'snecessaryforfriendstobethesame.MybestfriendisLinda.②Sheisverydifferentfromme.②Sheismuchquieterandtallerthanme.ShealwayshaslonghairbutIlikeshorthair.③I'mgoodatmathbutLindadoeswellinEnglishandChinese.Welikedoingourhomeworktogetherafterschoolandwealwayshelpeachother.Webothlikeplayingtennis.IstillrememberwhenItookpartintheschooltalentshow,Ifeltsonervousatfirst.Icouldn'tdomybestonstage.④AssoonasLindaknewmyproblem,sheencouragedmeandkepthelpingme.Atlast,Ididmybestandwonfirstprize.⑤Sheoftenhelpstobringoutthebestinme,andIfeelsoluckytohavesuchafriend.名師點評本文符合寫作要求,條理清晰、結(jié)構(gòu)嚴謹,運用了豐富的短語和句式,表明了自己的擇友觀以及自己最好的朋友Linda的情況.①用＂it's(not)+adj.+todosth."句式言簡意賅地表明了自己的擇友觀.②用bedifferentfrom短語和＂比較級＋than"結(jié)構(gòu)表明了作者和朋友的外貌以及性格差異.③用begoodat和dowellin短語表明了自己和Linda各自擅長的學(xué)科.④用含有assoonas引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句的復(fù)合句,強調(diào)Linda對自己的關(guān)心和幫助.⑤用bringout短語表明Linda對自己的幫助很大,同時體現(xiàn)了作者活學(xué)活用的能力.一、詞匯積累(一)人物對比類短語1.與……不同________________________________2.與……相像的________________________________3.和……相同________________________________4.和……一樣高________________________________(二)人物描述類短語1.在某方面有天賦________________________________2.擅長于________________________________(三)朋友相處類短語1.和某人相處得好________________________________2.真正關(guān)心我________________________________3.分享一切________________________________4.使我笑________________________________(四)寫出下列形容詞或副詞的比較級和最高級形式1.tall→____________________→____________________2.short→____________________→____________________3.late→____________________→____________________4.lazy→____________________→____________________5.funny→____________________→____________________6.early→____________________→____________________7.thin→____________________→____________________8.popular→____________________→____________________9.good→____________________→____________________10.bad→____________________→____________________二、句子積累(一)佳句欣賞與模擬1.MybestfriendLarryisquitedifferentfromme.【quite為副詞，可以用來修飾形容詞，表示程度，意為＂十分＂】我十分擅長英語。________________________________________________________________________2.I’mshysoit’snoteasyformetomakefriends.【it’s＋adj.＋forsb.＋todosth.做某事對某人來說怎么樣】取得好成績對我來說很容易。________________________________________________________________________3.Larryismuchlesshardworking,though.【much/alittle/alot＋比較級】事實上，李明跑步比我快得多。________________________________________________________________________(二)表達個人的擇友觀1.在我看來，有相同點是必要的。Inmyview,it’s____________________tobethesame.2.我真的不介意朋友是與我相同或是不同。Idon’t________________________________________iffriendsarethesameasmeordifferent.3.我認為朋友就該像書——你不需要很多，只要他們好就行。Ithinkfriends________________________________________books—youdon’tneedalotofthem____________________________________________________________they’regood.(三)寫作微技能：比較級的巧用形容詞和副詞的比較級，能幫助你更具體、生動、形象地描述所要描寫的人物，寫出評價人物的文章。如：I’mmoreoutgoingthanmysister.Iworkashardasmysister.你可以根據(jù)你的需要，用＂than，as...as＂等更具體、生動地描述人物間的相同點與不同點。1.Lisa唱得比Sam好。Lisasings________________________________________Sam.2.他和我一樣外向。Heis____________________outgoing____________________me.3.Peter學(xué)習不如Tom努力。Peterdoesn’twork____________________hard____________________Tom.三、以讀促寫根據(jù)所給漢語或首字母提示，寫出空白處所缺單詞的正確形式。每空限填一詞。完成后請找出文中的比較級并思考其在文中的用法。MyBestFriendandIMyfavorite1(諺語)is＂FriendsareGod’swayoftakingcareofus.＂ItmakesmethinkaboutmybestfriendLinda.Wehaveknowneachothersincewewerein2(最初的)school.Insomeways,welook3(相像的),andinsomeways,welookdifferent.B4ofushaveblackeyesandlongblackhair,butsheisalittletallerthanI.I’mquietand5(嚴肅的),soit’snoteasyformetomakefriendsandgetonwithother6(小孩).However,Lindaisnotasquietasme.Sheis7(外向的).Sheisso8(有才能的)intellingjokesthatshealwaysmakesmel9.It’ssoluckytohaveafriendlikeher.Asforstudy,bothofusare10(辛勤的)andliketolearneverythingnew.Weenjoystudyingtogether.ButLindaisbetteratstudyandgetsbetterg11thanIdo.Shealwaystriesherbesttohelpmeasl12asIhaveproblems.Withherhelp,Imadegreatprogressinmylessons.I’mverythankfulforallthatshehasdoneforme.IthinkI13(應(yīng)該)learnfromherandtrytohelpothersjustlikeher.Inourfreetime,weoftentalkaboutand14(分享)everything.Inf15,IthinkI’magoodlistenerandalwaystheretolisten.16(雖然)Lindaisquitedifferentfromme,Idon’treally17(在意)ifmyfriendsarethesameasmeordifferent.I18(真正)understandthatalifewithoutfriendshipislikeadaywithoutsunshine.Lindaismytruefriendwhoreachesmyhandandtouchesmy19(內(nèi)心).（一）1．根據(jù)表格中提供的信息，寫一篇短文介紹你和你的好朋友Tina的相同和不同之處。要求：1)文章內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含所有要點，并適當發(fā)揮；2)開頭已給，結(jié)尾自行補充；3)條理清楚，語義連貫，字跡工整。詞數(shù)80左右。DifferencesSimilarities(相似點)Tina1.funny(***);serious(*)2.dosports(everyday)3.like...1.tallandthin2.begoodatmathandEnglish3....I1.funny(*);serious(***)2.dosports(hardlyever)3.love…Tinaismybestfriend.Wehavemanysimilarities._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．假如你叫劉星。你擇友的標準是：性格外向；擅長打乒乓球，并可以教你打乒乓球。最近你就結(jié)交了這樣一位新朋友——趙鵬。請根據(jù)表格提示，介紹一下你自己、你的新朋友以及你的擇友觀。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假如你是張亮，請根據(jù)下面的表格信息，寫一篇英語短文，介紹你和弟弟張翔的相同之處和不同之處，以便你們的美國朋友加深對你們的了解。要求：1.語句通順，符合邏輯;2.包含表格信息的所有內(nèi)容;3.70詞左右，可適當發(fā)揮。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．今天網(wǎng)上討論的主題是“MybestfriendandI”。假如你有一個最好的朋友Lucy，請根據(jù)表格所提供的信息進行跟帖，對你和Lucy的相同之處和不同之處做一個簡單的描述。70詞左右。NameLucyAge1213Height1.5m1.55mCharacterquiet,smart,calmoutgoing,goodatsportsInmonenjoygoingtoparties____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．《學(xué)習周報》聯(lián)袂陽光中學(xué)正在舉行“我的閨蜜我來談”活動。請你根據(jù)下面表格中提供的信息，寫一篇短文介紹你和你最好的朋友Nancy的相同之處和不同之處。要求：1.包括表格中提及的所有內(nèi)容，語句通順，條理清楚；2.80詞左右（開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)），可適當發(fā)揮。人物不同點相同點Nancy1.比我高得多，更外向2.更擅長唱歌、跳舞3.喜歡去聽音樂會1.喜歡運動2.學(xué)習努力，各門功課都學(xué)得好3.喜歡閱讀，通常在周末一起去圖書館Ⅰ1.喜歡上網(wǎng)2.喜歡旅游對朋友之間異同點的看法：……（至少兩點）Nancyismybestfriend.Insomeways,wearethesame.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．你們學(xué)校英語俱樂部擬招聘一名學(xué)生助手，幫助一些小學(xué)生學(xué)習英語。蘇珊和朱迪想去應(yīng)聘。請你根據(jù)下面表格中的信息寫一篇短文，介紹她們的情況并對二者進行比較，說一說你認為誰更適合這份工作以及你選擇她的理由。要求：1.短文應(yīng)包括表格中的所有內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮；2.80詞左右。參考詞匯：bepatientwith對……有耐心Susan:quietpatient（耐心的）hasgoodgradesinEnglishJudy:outgoinggoodwithchildrenstayedinEnglandforayeargoodatspeakingEnglish________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________1.（2023·福建·統(tǒng)考中考真題）某地“美麗鄉(xiāng)村（BeautifulVillage）”項目吸引了不少外賓，暑假期間需要數(shù)名擅長英語的小導(dǎo)游。假定你是李華，希望成為其中的一員。請你結(jié)合以下表格提示，給該項目的外事負責人王先生寫一封英文自薦信。詞數(shù)80左右。Whatkindofpersonyouarefriendly,active…WhatyouaregoodatspeakEnglish,tellstories…Whatyoucandointroducelocalculture,helpforeigners…注意事項：1.必須包含所有提示信息，可適當發(fā)揮，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.意思清楚，表達通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；3.請勿在文中使用真實的姓名、校名和地名。DearMr.Wang,IamLiHua.Iamgladtoknowthatyouareinneedofsometourguides.

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua2.（2022·四川·統(tǒng)考中考真題）假設(shè)你叫李平，你的姐姐李蓉今年七月要去倫敦Linda家住一段時間。請你根據(jù)表格信息，用英語給Linda寫一封郵件，介紹你姐姐的基本情況。姓名LiRong年齡16外貌中等身高、黑色短發(fā)性格隨和、外向、友好愛好歷史、博物館、烹飪、打籃球衣著T恤、牛仔褲注意：(1)文中不得出現(xiàn)個人真實