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20232024學(xué)年初中書面表達(dá)主題分類訓(xùn)練10篇日常生活1.(2023·江蘇省無錫市·歷年真題)青少年在成長(zhǎng)過程中會(huì)遇到各種問題,為此《21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)》開設(shè)了TeensTalk專欄,傾聽讀者的心聲,并由"少年之友"SigmundFriend予以回復(fù)。假設(shè)你是李華,最近也遇上了些煩心事,請(qǐng)給該專欄發(fā)一封英文郵件,講述你的煩惱并尋求建議。注意事項(xiàng):(1)郵件內(nèi)容須自擬,要求語句通順、意思連貫、符合題意;(2)詞數(shù)在100左右,郵件開頭與結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);(3)郵件中不得使用真實(shí)的個(gè)人姓名或?qū)W校名稱。DearMr.Friend,I'mwritingtoyouabouttheproblemI'mfacingatthemoment.I'mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】Dear
Mr.Friend,
I'm
writing
to
you
about
the
problem
I'm
facing
at
the
moment.
Firstofall,myparentsonlycareaboutmystudy.Theyarrangedalotofafterschoolclassesformeonweekends.Theydon'tallowmetowatchTVorputergamesinmysparetime.【高分句型一】Secondly,theydon'tallowmetohangoutwithmyfriendsonschooldays.IfIgooutonweekends,Ihavetobehomeby9pm.【高分句型二】Finally,Ican'tdothethingsIlike.(我的煩惱)Theserulesmakemeunfortable,sometimesIfeelalotofpressure,Idon'tknowwhattodo?Canyougivemesomeadvice?(尋求建議)
I'm
looking
forward
to
hearing
from
you
soon.Yours
sincerely,Li
Hua【解析】【高分句型一】Theydon'tallowmetowatchTVorputergamesinmysparetime.他們不允許我在業(yè)余時(shí)間看電視或玩電腦游戲。watchTV看電視?!靖叻志湫投縄fIgooutonweekends,Ihavetobehomeby9pm.周末如果我外出,我晚上9點(diǎn)之前必須回家。if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句。能夠根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá),能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等,清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想,進(jìn)而完成寫作任務(wù)。2.(2023·山東省濰坊市·歷年真題)TeensAroundtheWorld是一個(gè)國(guó)際青少年交流網(wǎng)站,近日有人發(fā)了一個(gè)關(guān)于電影的帖子。假設(shè)你是李華,請(qǐng)閱讀原帖后,結(jié)合自己的觀影經(jīng)歷,用英語跟帖。注意:(1)電影名字可用漢語拼音;(2)禁止抄襲本試卷中所有語篇內(nèi)容;(3)不要出現(xiàn)考生本人信息;(4)80詞左右。TeensAroundtheWorldSubject:moviesHey,guys!Wehaveseenmanymovies.Goodmoviescanteachussomethingandmakeuslaughorcry.Whichmoviedoyoulike?Whatisitabout?Andwhydoyoulikeit?Lookingforwardtoyourreplies.Eric,CanadaLiHua,China【答案】
ForrestGumpisoneofthemostinspirationalfilmsthatleaveadeepimpressiononme.(是什么)
ForrestGumpisanAmericanfilm,whichisadaptedfromthenovelwrittenbyWinstonGroom.TomHanksstarsinthefilm.【高分句型一】
ForrestGump,themaincharacter.wasunfortunatelybornwithalower1
Q,butheisanopenmindedpersonwithstrongdetermination.Itisunbelievablethathehasachievedgreatsuccessatlast.Notonlyisheafootballstar,butheisalsoawarheroandlateramillionaire.(關(guān)于什么)
Thefilmisfilledwithatenderfeelingandkindness.What'smore,itconveysamessagethatweshouldtakeapositiveattitudetowardslife.Nomatterwhatdifficultywemeetinlife,weshouldnotgiveup.Besides,theuseofthelanguageisstriking,whichalsomakesthefilmasuccess.【高分句型二】(為什么喜歡)Li
Hua,China【解析】【高分句型一】ForrestGumpisanAmericanfilm,whichisadaptedfromthenovelwrittenbyWinstonGroom.TomHanksstarsinthefilm.《阿甘正傳》是一部美國(guó)電影,改編自溫斯頓?格魯姆的小說。湯姆?漢克斯主演了這部電影。which引導(dǎo)的定語從句?!靖叻志湫投緽esides,theuseofthelanguageisstriking,whichalsomakesthefilmasuccess.此外,語言的使用是驚人的,這也使電影取得了成功。which引導(dǎo)的定語從句。能夠根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá),能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等,清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想,進(jìn)而完成寫作任務(wù)。3.(2023·吉林省長(zhǎng)春市·歷年真題)某報(bào)正在以"Challenge"為主題,舉辦英語征文比賽。請(qǐng)你寫一篇不少于80詞的英語故事及體會(huì)來投稿。要求:(1)寫一個(gè)自身或其他人的故事;(2)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),行文連貫;(3)文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名和校名?!敬鸢浮緾hallenge
Withtherapiddevelopmentoftheworld,wewillfacemorechallenges.Thechallengeisnotonlydifficult,butalsohavetheopportunityto.Challengescaninspirepeople'screativity,makeussuccess.Themostimportantthingistodealwiththechallengesofthecorrect.Iusedtobeafraidofswimming,alwaysadmireothersswimmingtechnique,butdidnotdaretotry,friendsoftenswiminthewater,saidtome:"edown,weplaytogether,"butIwasalwaysrefused,gradually,nofriendsandIplaytogether,chattogether.Iamverysad,soIstartedswimming.
【高分句型一】Finally,tostudyhard,Iaminagame,withexcellentperformancetowin,atthatmoment,thepeoplearoundmeasIapplaud,cheer,thereforeIhavealsoachievedsuccess,alsoreturnedtofriendsandfriendship.(經(jīng)歷)Alwaystrytochallengeyourself,conqueryourself.Onlythroughthiscanachievetheirowngoals,tosucceed.
【高分句型二】(體會(huì))【解析】
【高分句型一】Iamverysad,soIstartedswimming.我很傷心,所以我開始游泳。so表結(jié)果?!靖叻志湫投縊nlythroughthiscanachievetheirowngoals,tosucceed.只有這樣才能達(dá)到自己的目標(biāo),取得成功。倒裝句。能夠根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá),能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等,清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想,進(jìn)而完成寫作任務(wù)。4.(2023·廣東省廣州市·歷年真題)你是校志愿隊(duì)隊(duì)長(zhǎng)李華。你校將于下周六組織主題(theme)為"健康你和我"的志愿服務(wù)活動(dòng),交換生Sam也報(bào)名參加。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容寫一封電子郵件,向他介紹活動(dòng)的安排。ThemeHealthyYouandMeTime8::30a.m.PlaceSportsCenterActivities...Purpose...注意:(1)可在內(nèi)容提示的基礎(chǔ)上適當(dāng)拓展信息;(2)詞數(shù)80詞左右(郵件的開頭已給出,不計(jì)入詞數(shù));(3)不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息,否則不予評(píng)分。DearSam,ThankyouforjoiningusinourvoluntaryworknextSaturday.Yours,LiHua【答案】Dear
Sam,
Thank
you
for
joining
us
in
our
voluntary
work
next
Saturday.OurschoolwillgototheSportsCenternextSaturdayfrom8:30a.m.to11:30a.m.,toparticipateinthevolunteerserviceactivitywiththethemeofHealthyYouandMe.(主題,時(shí)間和地點(diǎn))Wewillwatchthepropagandafilmtheretounderstandtheimportanceofhealthtous.
【高分句型一】Atthesametime,wewillgiveoutleafletstohelppeoplekeephealthy.Wewillalsowatchsomeperformances.We'llendupcleaningupthere.(活動(dòng))Wehopethatthroughthisactivity,wecanhaveabetterunderstandingofhealth.
【高分句型二】(目的)Yours,Li
Hua【解析】
【高分句型一】
Wewillwatchthepropagandafilmtheretounderstandtheimportanceofhealthtous.我們將在那里觀看宣傳片,了解健康對(duì)我們的重要性。tounderstandtheimportanceofhealthtous不定式作目的狀語?!靖叻志湫投?/p>
Wehopethatthroughthisactivity,wecanhaveabetterunderstandingofhealth.希望通過本次活動(dòng),讓我們對(duì)健康有更好的了解。Wehopethat+賓語從句。能夠根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá),能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等,清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想,進(jìn)而完成寫作任務(wù)。5.(2023·全國(guó)·歷年真題)每個(gè)人的成長(zhǎng),都經(jīng)歷過很多次嘗試,有成功、有失敗、有欣喜、有淚水……請(qǐng)以"MyFirstTry"為題,用英語寫一篇短文,記錄你成長(zhǎng)中的第一次嘗試。要求:(1)語句通順,意思連貫,內(nèi)容詳實(shí),語法正確,書寫規(guī)范;(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息;(3)詞數(shù)80120。開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。MyFirstTryWhenitestothetopicof"MyFirstTry",【答案】My
First
Try
When
it
es
to
the
topic
of"My
First
Try",Iamhappy.Iwasborninavillage.IhadneverleftmyvillageuntillastSunday.LastSunday,IhadatriptoShangDongwithmyparents.Wewenttherebyatrain.Wegotupontheearlymorning.Itwasnotverybrightwhenwecametothestation.【高分句型一】Thereweretenwindowstoselltickets,sowedidn'twaitforalongtime.WeboughtthreeticketstoQingdao.Abouttwentyminuteslater,thetraincameandwegotonit.Woo!Howlongthetrainwas!【高分句型二】Itcantakealotofpeople.(經(jīng)歷)Trainsaresofun.Iwasveryexcited.Itoldmyparentstotakeatrainagainwhenwecameback.(感受)【解析】【高分句型一】Itwasnotverybrightwhenwecametothestation.我們到車站時(shí)天不太亮。時(shí)間狀語從句?!靖叻志湫投縃owlongthetrainwas!火車真長(zhǎng)?。ow引導(dǎo)的感嘆句。能夠根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá),能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等,清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想,進(jìn)而完成寫作任務(wù)。6.(2023·內(nèi)蒙古自治區(qū)赤峰市·歷年真題)假如你是李華,你校英文??习l(fā)布了一則暑期夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)信息,請(qǐng)你給愛爾蘭筆友Karry寫一封信,從以下三個(gè)夏令營(yíng)中選擇一個(gè)向他推薦,并邀請(qǐng)他參加。要點(diǎn)如下:1.介紹你選擇的夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)內(nèi)容,并說明推薦理由;2.邀請(qǐng)Karry參加。SummerCampsReadingCampJulyl6thtoJuly20th●learnaboutChinesepoemsandpoets●readclassicnovels●performshortplaysChineseTraditionalCultureCampJuly17thtoJuly21st●makelanterns●performChinesefolkdance●visitplacesofinterestClothesDesignCampJulyl9thtoJuly23rd●watchfashionshows●haveclassesgivenbyfamousdesigners●designadressforyourmother注意:1.詞數(shù)為80詞左右(信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù));2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使內(nèi)容充實(shí),行文連貫;3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱。DearKarry,Howareyoudoing?__________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】Dear
Karry,
How
are
you
doing?OurschoolpublishedasummercampactivityinformationintheEnglishschoolmagazine.I'dliketoinviteyoutoReading
Camp.ItrunsfromJuly16toJuly20.(夏令營(yíng)名稱和時(shí)間)Wecanlearn
about
Chinese
poems
and
poets.Wecanread
classic
novels.Wecanperform
short
plays.(活動(dòng))Ithinkreadingcannotonlyincreaseourknowledge,butalsoopenoureyes.【高分句型一】SoI
amhopingyoucanjoinme.Ifyouhaveanyquestions,pleasewritetome.【高分句型二】Yours,Li
Hua【解析】【高分句型一】I
thinkreadingcannotonlyincreaseourknowledge,butalsoopenoureyes.我認(rèn)為讀書不僅能增加我們的知識(shí),還能開闊我們的眼界。I
think+賓語從句?!靖叻志湫投?/p>
Ifyouhaveanyquestions,pleasewritetome.如果你有任何問題,請(qǐng)寫信給我。if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句。能夠根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá),能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等,清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想,進(jìn)而完成寫作任務(wù)。7.(2023·黑龍江省鶴崗市·歷年真題)(B)圖示作文:仔細(xì)觀察圖片,展開合理想象,然后寫一篇短文。提示詞:rainheavily,umbrella,bethankfulto……要求:(1)話題作文和圖示作文任選其一。(2)詞數(shù):80100之間。(3)字跡工整,語法正確,意思連貫,合乎邏輯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮?!敬鸢浮?/p>
Asweknow,nomatterwhenwecanconveywarmth.ItrainedheavilylastFriday.Iwasonmywayhome.SuddenlyIsawinfrontofanoldman,hedidnottakeanumbrella.Theoldman,whichleanedonacaneintherain,trudgedalong.【高分句型一】SoIdidnothesitatetogototheoldman,andthenIsenthimhome.Theoldmanwasverythankfultomyhelpwhenhearrivedhome,wealllaughedhappily.【高分句型二】(描述經(jīng)過)
Nothingismorevaluabletomethanhelpingothers,andIwillcontinuetodoso.(表達(dá)感受)【解析】【高分句型一】Theoldman,whichleanedonacaneintherain,trudgedalong.翻譯:那位老人在雨中拄著拐杖,步履艱難地向前走著。分析:句子中which引導(dǎo)定語從句?!靖叻志湫投縏heoldmanwasverythankfultomyhelpwhenhearrivedhome,wealllaughedhappily.翻譯:老人到家時(shí)非常感謝我的幫助,我們都笑得很開心分析:句子中when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句。能夠根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá),能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等,清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想,進(jìn)而完成寫作任務(wù)。8.(2023·廣東省·歷年真題)假設(shè)你叫李明,你打算向某學(xué)生英文網(wǎng)站投稿,分享你做過的一個(gè)有趣的夢(mèng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下思維導(dǎo)圖內(nèi)容提示用英文寫一篇短文。注意:(1)可在思維導(dǎo)圖內(nèi)容提示的基礎(chǔ)上適當(dāng)拓展信息。(2)不能照抄原文:不得在作文中出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名、地名和考生的真實(shí)姓名。(3)語句連貫,詞數(shù)80左右。作文的標(biāo)題和開頭已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù),也不必抄寫在答題卡上。AnInterestingDreamByLiMingIhaveaninterestingdreamtosharewithyou.【答案】AnInterestingDreamByLiMing
Ihaveaninterestingdreamtosharewithyou.Inmydream,Ibecameascientist.(成為一名科學(xué)家)ThereasonwhyIhadthisdreammaybebecauseIparticipatedinScienceWeekactivities.【高分句型一】Ithadapositiveimpactonme,asitmadememoreinterestedinscience.
(可能的原因)
Inmydream,Iwasconductingexperimentsinalaboratoryanddiscoveringnewthingsthatcouldhelpimprovetheworld.【高分句型二】Althoughitwasjustadream,ithasinspiredmetopursueacareerinscienceandmakeadifferenceintheworld.IamgratefulfortheScienceWeekeventforsparkingmyinterestinthisfield.(積極的影響)【解析】【高分句型一】ThereasonwhyIhadthisdreammaybebecauseIparticipatedinScienceWeekactivities.我做這個(gè)夢(mèng)的原因可能是因?yàn)槲覅⒓恿丝茖W(xué)周的活動(dòng)。because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句?!靖叻志湫投縄nmydream,Iwasconductingexperimentsinalaboratoryanddiscoveringnewthingsthatcouldhelpimprovetheworld.在我的夢(mèng)里,我在實(shí)驗(yàn)室里做實(shí)驗(yàn),發(fā)現(xiàn)可以幫助改善世界的新事物。that引導(dǎo)的定語從句。能夠根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá),能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等,清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想,進(jìn)而完成寫作任務(wù)。9.(2023·湖北省武漢市·歷年真題)你的英語老師布置了一項(xiàng)體驗(yàn)式作業(yè),希望你和家人假期時(shí)去一次公園,然后寫一篇英文短文,向同學(xué)們介紹公園離你家有多遠(yuǎn),能在公園內(nèi)體驗(yàn)的活動(dòng)項(xiàng)目及公園周邊生活設(shè)施,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示完成短文。內(nèi)容提示:Howfarisitfromyourhometothepark?Whatactivitiescanyoudointhepark?Istherearestaurant,alibraryorsomethingelsenearthepark?Howisit?Somethingmoreaboutthepark.注意:文中不得遭露個(gè)人真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校:詞數(shù)6080;標(biāo)題和開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。etoHappyPark!HappyParkisapublicparkinourhometown.【答案】etoHappyPark!
HappyParkisapublicparkinourhometown.(引入話題)It'sverynice.Itisnotfarformmyhome.Ittakesmyfamily30
minutestogettherebybus.【高分句型一】(從家到公園有多遠(yuǎn))There'remanytreesandflowersinit.Wecanwalkand
enjoythenaturalbeautythere.There'sabiglake.Wecangoboatingonit.Itisveryrelaxing.Peoplecan
camporhaveapicnicbythelake.Also,it'scooltotryparagliding.【高分句型二】It'smyfavorite.(能在公園里做的活動(dòng))Afterthat,wecan
haveamealintherestaurantnearthepark.It'sagreatplaceforafamilytohavefun
there.(周圍設(shè)施)【解析】【高分句型一】Ittakesmyfamily30
minutestogettherebybus.我的家人坐公共汽車花費(fèi)30分鐘到那里。Ittakessb.sometimetodosth.(某人花費(fèi)……時(shí)間干某事),固定句型?!靖叻志湫投緼lso,it'scooltotryparagliding.此外,嘗試滑翔傘也很酷。it作形式主語,真正的主語是動(dòng)詞不定式。能夠根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá),能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等,清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想,進(jìn)而完成寫作任務(wù)。10.(2023·江西省·歷年真題)通過閱讀理解A篇我們感受到戶外活動(dòng)的有趣。本月底你校將舉辦一次戶外活動(dòng),為了更好地開展這次活動(dòng),校英語社團(tuán)正在向?qū)W生征集意見。假設(shè)你是張華,請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容寫一篇短文(先介紹你喜歡的戶外活動(dòng),再說明理由,最后就活動(dòng)安排提出合理的建議),向社團(tuán)投稿。寫作要點(diǎn)參考句型1)Whatoutdooractivitydoyoulike?We'dbetter…Maybewecan…It'llbebetterif……2)Whydoy
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