2022年貴州省畢節(jié)地區(qū)大學英語6級大學英語六級測試卷(含答案)

（2022年）貴州省畢節(jié)地區(qū)大學英語6級

大學英語六級測試卷（含答案）

學校:班級:姓名:考號:

一、l.Writing（10題）

1.1.大家希望構建一個和諧社會，但社會上存在一些與和諧社會不相符

合的現(xiàn)象

2.分析造成這種現(xiàn)象的不良影響

3.從自身應如何做起

2.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledToWorkatHome?Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingthe

outlinegivenbelow.

-隨著高科技的發(fā)展，越來越多的人選擇在家工作

-選擇在家工作的利與弊

-結論

ToWorkatHome?

3.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowritealetter-on

behalfoftheStudents*UnionandtheAcademicLecturesAssociation—to

inviteavisitingforeignprofessor,David,todeliverapresentationtothe

studentsinyouruniversity.YouareNOTallowedtoincludethenameofyour

universityinthisletter.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingthe

outlinegivenbelow.

1.對這位知名的外籍教授的到來表示歡迎

2.表達希望該教授就某個話題在學校進行講座的希望和對講座的一些

基本設想

3.希望教授可以接受邀請，并對教授的寶貴時間表示感謝

4.聽力原文:ShouldForeignAbbreviationsBeBannedonTV?

Recently,CCTVbannedtheuseofborrowedEnglishabbreviationssuchas

NBA,WTOandCPIinallitsprograms.Somepeopleapplaudthemove,

maintainingthatithelpspreservethepurityoftheChineselanguage.The

mediaisdeeplyengagedintheongoingWesternizationofChineselanguage.

Ifthephenomenonisnotstopped,Chinesewillbegraduallyreducedfroman

independentexpressionsystemtoamixtureoflanguages.

Others,however,shaketheirheads.Itisnotpersuasive,theysay,thatthe

mediashyawayfromforeignabbreviationstopreservethepurityofthe

Chineselanguageandculture.Afterall,languages*integrationisavery

complicatedprocessandit'sirrationaltoimposeasimplebanoncertainwords.

Besides,theuseofforeignabbreviationswon'tshakethestatusofChineseas

anembodimentofandthebasisofthe5,000-year-oldChineseculture.

AsfarasIamconcerned,thereisnoneedtobantheuseofforeign

abbreviationsonTV.Alanguageisgreat,notbecauseofitspurity,butbecause

ofitstolerancetootherlanguages.Chineseissorichandbeautifulbecauseit

constantlyabsorbswords,abbreviationsandphrasesfromotherlanguages.

It'stotallyunnecessarytofearaboutthedisappearanceofChineseifweallow

EnglishtomixwithChinese.

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopic

ofShouldForeignAbbreviationsBeBannedonTV?.Youshouldwriteat

least150wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelow.

目前有些電視臺禁止在節(jié)目中使用外來縮略語

1.對這種做法有人表示支持

2.有人并不贊成

3.我認為……

ShouldForeignAbbreviationsBeBannedonTV?

5.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledTheAdvantagesandDisadvantagesofGoingAbroadforHolidays.

Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

-出國旅游悄然興起

-出國旅游的種種好處

-出國旅游的種種弊端

--你的選擇

TheAdvantagesandDisadvantagesofGoingAbroadforHolidays

6.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthe

topicStudyunderaWork-StudyProgram.Youshouldwriteatleast150words

accordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

1.在大學校園中，有的大學生是因為生活困難而勤工儉學，有的大學生

是為鍛煉實際能力

2.作為一名在校大學生，你如何看待勤工儉學問題

StudyunderaWork-StudyProgram

7.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledThe

PopularityofWesternHolidays.Youshouldwriteatleast150words

followingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.一些“洋”節(jié)日在中國越來越流行

2.一些中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日反倒無人問津

3.你如何看待這種現(xiàn)象

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30口比值

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1.簡要分析圖表

2.分析觀眾喜歡看體育節(jié)目的原因

WhyDotheViewersLikeWatchingSportPrograms?

9.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledTheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternet.Youshouldwriteat

least150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.隨著社會和經(jīng)濟發(fā)展.網(wǎng)絡成為了每個人必不可少的獲取信息的工具

2.但是，在網(wǎng)絡上也出現(xiàn)了一些不健康的因素，如垃圾信息、黃色網(wǎng)

站、虛假新聞、網(wǎng)絡炒作等

3.我們應采取措施制止這些，并建立一個健康的網(wǎng)絡環(huán)境

TheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternet

10.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthe

topicofPoorStudents'RunningErrands.Youshouldwriteatleast150words

accordingtotheoutlinegivenbelow.

目前有些大學校園出現(xiàn)貧困大學生“跑腿族”

1.對于這種做法有人表示支持

2.有人并不贊成

3.我的看法

PoorStudents*RunningErrands

二、2.ReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)(10題)

11.

Accordingtothepassage,forthosewhoaregoodattellingliesanddon'tget

caught,thequestionofwhetherornottoliecanbeahardandserious.

12.

Inthe17th,France'snationallibrarywasfoundedinParis.

A.YB.NC.NG

13.

SigmundFreudlivedmostofhislifeinVienna,,butheendedhis

daysin.

14.

MostofAntarcticaappearstobeimmunetothebigmeltfornowbecauseifs

largelyinsulatedfromglobaltrendsandit'ssobigasmgenerate.

15.

islargelyresponsiblefortheslightslowdowninthegrowthofthe

laborforce.

16.

TheAmazondroughtshowsextremeratherthanclimaticchange.

17.

Onereasonwhycollegesincreasetuitionandfeesisthatthestatesupportis

shrinking.

A.YB.NC.NG

18.

Ifyonfailtosay"thankyou"tothereceptionists,theywillhavenegative

impressionsofyou.

A.YB.NC.NG

19.

Whytheconstantbombardmentofinformationaboutfoodisbadforpeople

whohavetheeatingdisorderorthorexianervosa?

A.Becausetheywillfollowtheinformationseriously.

B.Becausetheywillaimtobecomethinner.

C.Becausetheywon'tmakesuitableplans.

□.Becausetheywon'tenjoyeating.

20.

Afteryoukeyinthemaximumamountforanitem,eBaybidsforyouuntil

thebiddingreachesthe.

三、J

21.聽力原文：M:Ihearyou'retakingapaintingclass.Ididn*tknowyouwere

anartist.

W:Oh,I'mnot.ButFveneverhadanartcoursebefore,soIdecidedtotake

theplungenow.

Q:Whatdoesthewomansayshehasdone?

(13)

A.Shehasavoidedtalkingtoartists.

B.Shehasmadethedecisiontostudyart.

C.Shehastakenapaintingtoherartclass.

D.Shehasmadethepunchfortheartist'spary.

22.

[B8]

23.聽力原文M:Mysister'sbirthdayisonthe9th.We'regoingtohavedinner

ataMexicanrestaurant,andthenmaybegooutdancing.Wouldyouliketo

come?

W:Soundslikefun.Youcancountmein.

Q:Whatdoesthewomanmean?

(17)

A.ShelikesMexicanfoodverymuch.

B.Shelikestogooutdancing.

C.Shewillcelebratehisbirthday.

D.Sheacceptstheman'sinvitation.

24.

[B3]

25.(29)

A.People,regardlessoftheirage,arecrazyaboutvideogames.

B.Thoseover15canusethemachinesduringthedayinmostcountries.

C.Schoolchildreninuniformsarenotallowedintoamusementcentersin

manycountries.

0.Youngstersarenotprohibitedtousevideogamemachinesplacedin

amusementcenters.

26.

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27.

[B7]

28.聽力原文：W:Pmsofired.IcanftkeepmymindonwhatPmdoing.You

knowtomorrowismyEnglishtestandI'mnervous.

M:Whydon'tyoutakeafewminutesoff?Haveacupofcoffeeandyoucan

relaxyourarmsandlegs.

W:Itsoundsgood.I'mfeelingalittletired.Andcoffeehelpsmetoovercome

worries.

Whydidthemaninvitethewomanforcoffee?

(19)

A.Tohavealittletalk.

B.Toletbelievesabreak.

C.TohelpherwithherEnglish.

D.Hewantedacupofcoffee.

29.[BIO]

30.聽力原文：ComputerprogrammerDavidJonesearns35,000ayear

designingnewcomputergames,yethecannotfindabankpreparedtolethim

haveacheckcard.Instead,hehasbeentoldtowaitanothertwoyearsuntilhe

is18.

HeworksforasmallfirminLiverpool,wheremostyoungpeopleofhisage

arefindingjobs.David'sbiggestheadacheis

whattodowithhismoney.Thoughhehashighpayment,hecannotdrivea

car,orgetcreditcards.

Davidgothisjobfourmonthsago,ayearafterleavingschoolwithsixO-

levelsandworkingforatimeinacomputershop.nIgotthejobbecausethe

peoplewhorunthefirmknewIhadalreadywrittensomeprograms/'hesaid.

“1suppose35,000soundslikealotbutIhopeitwillcometomorethanthat

thisyear.1'HespendssomeofIrismoneyonrecordsandclothes,andgives

hismother20aweekasheliveswithhisparents.Butmostofhissparetime

isspentworking.

"Unfortunately,computingwasnotpartofourstudiesatschool,"hesaid."But

Ihadbeenstudyingitinbooksandmagazinesfbrfouryearsinmysparetime.

IknewwhatIwantedtodoandneverconsideredstayingonatschool.Most

peopleinthisbusinessarefairlyyoung,anyway.Iwouldliketoearnamillion

andIsupposeearlyretirementisapossibility.Youneverknowwhenthe

marketmightdisappear.*'

(33)

A.Heearnsanextremelyhighpayment.

B.Hehasgotajob.

C.Helivesathomewithhisparents.

D.Hedoesnotgooutmuch.

四、4.ReadingComprehension(ReadinginDepth)(3題)

31.

Accordingtotheresearchers,issignificantlydifferentfromonedrink

toanother.

32.

Welearnourculturalsigns.

A.whenwekeepourpeaceofmind

B.whenweareunconscious

C.whenwegrowup

D.whenweacceptthebeliefsofourculture

33.

Theauthorseesthereform,ofBolivia'sindustryasasignof

A.lessoilsupplyandhighoilpriceintheworld

B.nationalizationofindustryinothercountries

C.smallershareofoilreservesinstate-ownedcompanies

D.moreefficiencyinexploitationandprocessingofoil

五、5.ErrorCorrection。題)

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六、6.ErrorCorrection^題)

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參考答案

l.HowtoConstructtheHarmoniousSociety?Thereismuchdiscussion

todayabouthowtoconstructaharmonioussociety.Alongwiththe

developmentofscienceandtechnologyoursocietybecomesmoreandmore

beautifulandcomfortable.②Howevertherearesomethingsthatarein

contrastwiththeharmonioussocietysuchasspittingeverywhereno

awarenessofpublicsanitationbreakingflowersrudelyandsoon.(3)

Althoughthiskindofphenomenaisseldomyetitinfluencesourqualitiesof

lives.@Foronethingtosomeextentwecannotenjoyagoodenvironment

andIbelievethatthereisnoonewhowanttoliveinascrapheap.Foranother

itinfluencesourfiguresinfrontofourforeignfriendsthattheymaylaughat

us.Lastbutnotleastinthequality-orientededucationtodayitbreachesthe

standardofusbeingawelcomeperson.⑤Fromwhathasbeendiscussed

abovewemayreasonablyarriveattheconclusionthatthedevelopmentofour

societyalsoneedsourspiritsreinforceharmonyelementwhichmakesour

wholesocietylikeafamily.@Itneedsustochangefromourselvesandfrom

nowon;itrequiresustodoeasythingsagainandagain;itdemandsusto

influencethepeoplearoundus.?Themorewedothenearerwearetoour

harmonioussociety.HowtoConstructtheHarmoniousSociety①Thereis

muchdiscussiontodayabouthowtoconstructaharmonioussociety.Along

withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,oursocietybecomesmore

andmorebeautifulandcomfortable.?However,therearesomethingsthat

areincontrastwiththeharmonioussocietysuchasspittingeverywhere,no

awarenessofpublicsanitation,breakingflowersrudelyandsoon.③

Althoughthiskindofphenomenaisseldom,yetitinfluencesourqualitiesof

lives.@Foronething,tosomeextent,wecannotenjoyagoodenvironment,

andIbelievethatthereisnoonewhowanttoliveinascrapheap.Foranother,

itinfluencesourfiguresinfrontofourforeignfriendsthattheymaylaughat

us.Lastbutnotleast,inthequality-orientededucationtoday,itbreachesthe

standardofusbeingawelcomeperson.⑤Fromwhathasbeendiscussed

above,wemayreasonablyarriveattheconclusionthatthedevelopmentof

oursocietyalsoneedsourspiritsreinforceharmonyelement,whichmakes

ourwholesocietylikeafamily.@Itneedsustochangefromourselvesand

fromnowon;itrequiresustodoeasythingsagainandagain;itdemandsus

toinfluencethepeoplearoundus.⑦Themorewedo,thenearerweareto

ourharmonioussociety.解析：①簡要說明構建和諧社會是當今社會關注

的一個話題,Thereismuchdiscussionabout議淪文常用句型，值得模仿。

②用兩個表轉(zhuǎn)折的詞語轉(zhuǎn)折，說明社會上還存在一些與和諧社會不相符

的現(xiàn)象，并舉出實例。noawarenessof為高分短語。

③讓步狀語從句使文章句式富于變化，說明不良現(xiàn)象雖不多，卻影響生

活質(zhì)量。

④從不良現(xiàn)象對生存環(huán)境、中國人的國際形象及素質(zhì)教育要求三方面闡

述不和諧現(xiàn)象的影響。Foronething...Foranother...Lastbutnotleast使文

章銜接自然，有條理。

⑤總結全文，點明主題，wemayreasonablyarriveattheconclusionthat為

亮點結構。

⑥用三個排比句說明我們應該如何從自身做起，為本文閃光點。

⑦表達自己的觀點，Themore...thenearer為亮點句型。

2.ToWorkatHome?Withthedevelopmentofhightechnologymoreand

morepeoplechoosetoworkathome.Everydaytheysitinfrontofthe

computerexchanginginformationwiththeircolleaguessendingmessages

andpicturesbackandforthallovertheglobe.Whydomanypeoplechoose

toworkathome?Theremustbesomethinggoodwithit.Ontheonehandyou

maysavemoneyoncommutingandeatingoutbecauseyouareworkingat

home.Therearefewerinterruptionsinyourdayasthereisnobodytochatto.

Inadditionyoucanorganizeyourtimebettertosuittheneedsofyourfamily.

Howeveryoumayfeelisolatedandfinditdifficulttoworkwellwithoutthe

stimulusofcolleagues*thoughtsandopinions.Whileyoumaysavemoneyon

fareandeatingoutyoumayspendmoreongasandelectricityathome.

Besidesyoumayneedtoinvestincomputersandcommunicationsequipment.

Furthermoreitcanbedifficulttomakeadistinctionbetweenworkandhome

lifeandyoumayfindyourselfworking18hoursadayatalowerraterather

than8hoursmoreintensely.Inconclusionworkingathomedoesnotsuit

everybody.Howeverforthosewhoenjoyitthereismorefreedomand

flexibilityintheworkingday.ToWorkatHome?Withthedevelopmentof

hightechnology,moreandmorepeoplechoosetoworkathome.Everyday

theysitinfrontofthecomputer,exchanginginformationwiththeircolleagues,

sendingmessagesandpicturesbackandforthallovertheglobe.Whydo

manypeoplechoosetoworkathome?Theremustbesomethinggoodwithit.

Ontheonehand,youmaysavemoneyoncommutingandeatingoutbecause

youareworkingathome.Therearefewerinterruptionsinyourdayasthere

isnobodytochatto.Inaddition,youcanorganizeyourtimebettertosuitthe

needsofyourfamily.However,youmayfeelisolatedandfinditdifficultto

workwellwithoutthestimulusofcolleagues'thoughtsandopinions.While

youmaysavemoneyonfareandeatingout,youmayspendmoreongasand

electricityathome.Besides,youmayneedtoinvestincomputersand

communicationsequipment.Furthermore,itcanbedifficulttomakea

distinctionbetweenworkandhomelife,andyoumayfindyourselfworking

18hoursadayatalowerrateratherthan8hoursmoreintensely.Inconclusion,

workingathomedoesnotsuiteverybody.However,forthosewhoenjoyit,

thereismorefreedomandflexibilityintheworkingday.

3.April42007DearProfessorDavidFirstpleaseacceptourwarmwelcome

foryourvisitingouruniversityduringyouracademicexchangeprogramsin

China.Youcannotimaginehowflatteredwefeeltohavetheopportunityto

meettheauthorofseveralofourtextbooks.Wearewritingthislettertoinvite

youtodeliverapresentationduringyourone-weekvisitinChinaonthetopic

oftheLaborMovementinDevelopingCountriesandItsImplicationfor

China.Wewouldreallyappreciateitifyoucanuseyourexpertisetoshowus

somerolesoftheimmigrationworkersinsomedevelopingcountries

preferablyAsiancountriesforthatwouldprobablygiveusmoretolearnfrom.

Ifyoucanincludeinyourpresentationtheproblemsthesecountriesfaceand

theirmeasurestosolvetheseproblemsitwouldbeevenbetter.Thankyoufor

yourtimeandpatience.Weeagerlywaittohearfromyou.Students*Unionof

****AcademicLecturesAssociationof****April4,2007DearProfessor

David,Firstpleaseacceptourwarmwelcomeforyourvisitingouruniversity

duringyouracademicexchangeprogramsinChina.Youcannotimaginehow

flatteredwefeeltohavetheopportunitytomeettheauthorofseveralofour

textbooks.Wearewritingthislettertoinviteyoutodeliverapresentation

duringyourone-weekvisitinChina,onthetopicoftheLaborMovementin

DevelopingCountriesandItsImplicationforChina.Wewouldreally

appreciateitifyoucanuseyourexpertisetoshowussomerolesofthe

immigrationworkersinsomedevelopingcountries,preferablyAsian

countries,fbrthatwouldprobablygiveusmoretolearnfrom.Ifyoucan

includeinyourpresentationtheproblemsthesecountriesfaceandtheir

measurestosolvetheseproblems,itwouldbeevenbetter.Thankyouforyour

timeandpatience.Weeagerlywaittohearfromyou.Students1Unionof**

**AcademicLecturesAssociationof****

4.

5.TheAdvantagesandDisadvantagesofGoingAbroadfbrHolidaysMany

peoplenowhavejoinedthenewtrendoftravelingabroadfortheirholidays

sothattheycanenjoymoreexcitingtripsandvisitmomwonderfulplaces.

Andmanymorepeoplearestilltryingeverymeanstosaveforrealizingtheir

dreamoftravelingabroadtospendaholidayinafarawayquaintland.There

areseveraladvantagesofhavingaholidayabroad.Firstofallyoucanlearn

moreofthegeographycustomscultureandlifestyleofdifferentnationsand

countries.Youcanmakemorefriendsandexperienceanewlifesomewhat

strangetoyou.Alsoyoucanpracticeyourforeignlanguageproficiency.In

additionyoucanvisitauniqueplaceorplaceswhichareknownfortheir

specialadventuresandinterestssuchasscubadivingorwildlifeobserving.

Howevertravelingabroadhasdisadvantagestoo.Althoughyoumayenjoy

beautifulsightseeingandniceclimateyoumaycatchalocalillnessesthatis

unusualinyournativeland.Whiletravelingworldwideyoumaynotbeable

tospeakthelocallanguagesanditwillbedifficultforyoutocommunicate

withthelocalresidents.What'smoreyoumayevenfindcustomshostileto

youforexamplestrongdiscriminationagainstwomen.Goodorbadtraveling

abroadfbrholidaysismyfirstchoice.Why?Theanswerissimple:theoutside

worldisthrilling!TheAdvantagesandDisadvantagesofGoingAbroadfor

HolidaysManypeoplenowhavejoinedthenewtrendoftravelingabroadfbr

theirholidayssothattheycanenjoymoreexcitingtripsandvisitmom

wonderfulplaces.Andmanymorepeoplearestilltryingeverymeanstosave

forrealizingtheirdreamoftravelingabroadtospendaholidayinafaraway

quaintland.Thereareseveraladvantagesofhavingaholidayabroad.Firstof

all,youcanleammoreofthegeography,customs,culture,andlifestyle,of

differentnationsandcountries.Youcanmakemorefriendsandexperiencea

newlifesomewhatstrangetoyou.Also,youcanpracticeyourforeign

languageproficiency.Inaddition,youcanvisitauniqueplaceorplaceswhich

areknownfortheirspecialadventuresandinterests,suchasscubadivingor

wildlifeobserving.However,travelingabroadhasdisadvantages,too.

Althoughyoumayenjoybeautifulsightseeingandniceclimate,youmay

catchalocalillnessesthatisunusualinyournativeland.Whiletraveling

worldwide,youmaynotbeabletospeakthelocallanguagesanditwillbe

difficultforyoutocommunicatewiththelocalresidents.Whafsmore,you

mayevenfindcustomshostiletoyou,fbrexample,strongdiscrimination

againstwomen.Goodorbad,travelingabroadforholidaysismyfirstchoice.

Why?Theanswerissimple:theoutsideworldisthrilling!

6.StudyunderaWork-StudyProgramNowadaysmoreandmorecollege

studentsarctakingpart-timejobsastheyhavemoretimeattheirdisposal.

Someareeagertogainexperienceandimprovetheirpracticalskills.Others

wantStudyunderaWork-StudyProgramNowadaysmoreandmorecollege

studentsaretakingpart-timejobsastheyhavemoretimeattheirdisposal.

Someareeagertogainexperienceandimprovetheirpracticalskills.Others

want

7.ThePopularityofWesternHolidaysItseemsthatsomewesternholidays

aregettingmoreandmorepopularinChina.Forexampleweeksbefore

Christmascountlessshopsrestaurantsandhotelshavegotreadywith

ChristmasdeThePopularityofWesternHolidaysItseemsthatsomewestern

holidaysaregettingmoreandmorepopularinChina.Forexample,weeks

beforeChristmas,countlessshops,restaurantsandhotelshavegotreadywith

Christmasde

8.WhyDotheViewersLikeWatchingSportPrograms?Thesportprograms

havebeenenjoyingaboomamongTVviewers.Accordingtotheabovegraph

78percentofTVviewersfrequentlywatchsportswhichisobviouslyfar

aheadofothertelevisedevents.Newsfollowssecondv/ith68percentof

viewerscomparedwith54percentmovieswatchers.Documentariesseem

preferableamongpeoplethanthespecialsdowith42percentand20percent

respectively.Apassionforsportshastakenpossessionofthousandsofpeople.

Oneofthereasonsperhapsisthatsportsprovideanoutletforopen-up

emotions.Peopleextractthemselvesfromroutinelifeendfullyexpresstheir

feelingstowardssports.Stimulatedbytheexcitementtheyapplaudforthe

victoryandholdtheirbreathfortheexhilaratingcompetition.Inasensesports

areaheavenforpeopletoescapefromboredomendtension.Enthusiasmfor

sportsalsoreflectspeople'sdesiretotranscendgeographicalandcultural

limits.Freedfromborderandlanguagedifferencesportsareaccessibleto

everyone.Peoplewillnolongerbeconfinedtoacertainlivingcircle.They

cansharethesamefantasywiththeviewersatanotherhemisphere.Takenby

sportstheycanroamfromcountrytocountrycontinenttocontinent.Sports

thusbecomeacommonlanguagefbrallthepeoplethroughouttheworld.Why

DotheViewersLikeWatchingSportPrograms?Thesportprogramshave

beenenjoyingaboomamongTVviewers.Accordingtotheabovegraph,78

percentofTVviewersfrequentlywatchsports,whichisobviouslyfarahead

ofothertelevisedevents.Newsfollowssecondwith68percentofviewers,

comparedwith54percentmovieswatchers.Documentariesseempreferable

amongpeoplethanthespecialsdo,with42percentand20percent

respectively.Apassionforsportshastakenpossessionofthousandsofpeople.

Oneofthereasonsperhapsisthatsportsprovideanoutletforopen-up

emotions.Peopleextractthemselvesfromroutinelifeendfullyexpresstheir

feelingstowardssports.Stimulatedbytheexcitement,theyapplaudforthe

victoryandholdtheirbreathfortheexhilaratingcompetition.Inasense,

sportsareaheavenforpeopletoescapefromboredomendtension.

Enthusiasmforsportsalsoreflectspeople'sdesiretotranscendgeographical

andculturallimits.Freedfromborderandlanguagedifference,sportsarc

accessibletoeveryone.Peoplewillnolongerbeconfinedtoacertainliving

circle.Theycansharethesamefantasywiththeviewersatanother

hemisphere.Takenbysports,theycanroamfromcountrytocountry,

continenttocontinent.Sportsthusbecomeacommonlanguageforallthe

peoplethroughouttheworld.

9.TheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternet[1]Withthedevelopmentof

oursocietyandeconomytheInternetbecomesanecessar)rtoolfbreveryone

toobtaininformation.12JHowevertherearealsosomeunhealthycontentsin

tTheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternet[1]Withthedevelopmentof

oursocietyandeconomy,theInternetbecomesanecessarytoolfbreveryone

toobtaininformation.[2]However,therearealsosomeunhealthycontentsin

t解析：作文標題是“創(chuàng)建健康網(wǎng)絡環(huán)境的重要性”，這已經(jīng)表明，寫作

的重點是說明“為什么要創(chuàng)建健康的網(wǎng)絡環(huán)境”。但所給出的。utline沒有

體現(xiàn)這一點。僅僅根據(jù)outline動筆，恐怕寫不出好作文來。

提綱的第1點和第2點都址說背景，是為我們要論述的論點服務的；第

3點指向“措施”，也與論點有關。但是，以這三點中的任何一條為中心，

都有可能偏題。

那么該如何做這篇文章呢。不僅要把提綱中的內(nèi)容納入，而且還要特別

淪述“創(chuàng)建健康網(wǎng)絡環(huán)境的重要性要思考那么兒條“重要性”出來，才

能有話可說，切合中心主旨。洲練從不同的角度考慮健康網(wǎng)絡的重要忤，

培養(yǎng)良好的思維能力，是寫好此類作文的關鍵。

Analysis

[1]對應outline的第1條

[2]對應outline的第2條。如果不知道怎么用英潔表達“炒

作”(drumbeating),不說就是。反正僅僅是不良現(xiàn)象中的一個例子而已。

[3]主題句，對應作文標題。

[41[5][6]三條理由。健康的網(wǎng)絡可以：預防網(wǎng)絡犯罪：保護兒童不受

不良信息的影響；方便我們更好地利用網(wǎng)絡資源。(這部分可以八仙過海,

各顯神通)

⑺總結全文.照應outline的第3條。

lO.PoorStudents*RunningErrandsInrecentyearsmanypoorstudentsare

paidbytheirrichclassmatesforrunningerrands.Astowhetheritisgoodor

notopinionsvaryfrompersontoperson.Somepeoplebelievethatitisagood

wayfortheneedystudentstolivethroughthe4yearsofcollegelife.Withthe

moneytheyearnfromrunningerrandsforotherstudentsthefinancialburden

ofthepoorstudentscanberelieved.Howeversomeotherpeopleholda

differentopinion.Asallstudentsoncampusareequalitsnotrightforstudents

withfinancialproblemstodoinferiorjobsforotherclassmatesformoney.If

theschooldoesn'tstopthisstudentsoncampuswillbedividedintotwo

classessoonerorlater.Inmyopinionschoolsshouldforbidthiskindofthings

forthesakeofbothrichstudentsandpoorstudents.Bypayingtheirpoor

classmatesfordoingwhattheyshoulddothemselvestherichstudentswill

getusedtoidleness.Atthesametimedoingtiringerrandseverydaycan

influencethepoorstudents'healthandstudy.PoorStudents'RunningErrands

Inrecentyears,manypoorstudentsarepaidbytheirrichclassmatesfor

runningerrands.Astowhetheritisgoodornot,opinionsvaryfrompersonto

person.Somepeoplebelievethatitisagoodwayfortheneedystudentsto

livethroughthe4yearsofcollegelife.Withthemoneytheyearnfrom

runningerrandsforotherstudents,thefinancialburdenofthepoorstudents

canberelieved.However,someotherpeopleholdadifferentopinion.Asall

studentsoncampusareequal,it'snotrightforstudentswithfinancial

problemstodoinferiorjobsfbrotherclassmatesformoney.Iftheschool

doesn'tstopthis,studentsoncampuswillbedividedintotwoclassessooner

orlater.Inmyopinion,schoolsshouldforbidthiskindofthingsforthesake

ofbothrichstudentsandpoorstudents.Bypayingtheirpoorclassmatesfor

doingwhattheyshoulddothemselves,therichstudentswillgetusedto

idleness.Atthesametime,doingtiringerrandseverydaycaninfluencethe

poorstudent