《高中備考指南-英語(yǔ)必修1》課件-4.5Unit 3 Sports and Fitness-Period Ⅴ Writing - Writing a Story

Unit

3

Sports

and

FitnessPeriod

Ⅴ

Writing

—

Writing

a

Story寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)【話題技巧總析】

本單元的寫(xiě)作任務(wù)是讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)中的“健康故事”主題。讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)是閱讀理解和書(shū)面表達(dá)的溝通橋梁。讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)考查的是學(xué)生在閱讀文章的基礎(chǔ)上，通過(guò)分析文章的邏輯，運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確豐富的語(yǔ)言，展現(xiàn)創(chuàng)造力和想象力。一、解題步驟

讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)一般遵循以下四個(gè)解題步驟：1.準(zhǔn)確理解材料，理清人物事件。2.根據(jù)段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)，確定續(xù)寫(xiě)方向。3.根據(jù)關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)，確定續(xù)寫(xiě)細(xì)節(jié)。4.調(diào)整寫(xiě)作語(yǔ)言，完成讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)。二、注意事項(xiàng)1.仔細(xì)揣摩原材料作者所表達(dá)的意圖和主題。注意前后照應(yīng)，注意隱含的情感因素。2.一定要注意與所給短文及段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)的銜接。千萬(wàn)不可忽略所提供的段落首句的限制而肆意創(chuàng)作。3.切忌大篇幅對(duì)白；應(yīng)盡可能巧妙地設(shè)置情節(jié)，多關(guān)注動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)和心理描述。4.在完成續(xù)寫(xiě)后，務(wù)必用關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；不要因此而失分。【關(guān)鍵句型舉例】一、常用開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)1.

People

are

beginning

to

attach

much

more

importance

to

their

health

these

days

than

ever

before.現(xiàn)在人們開(kāi)始比以往任何時(shí)候都更加重視自己的健康。2.

In

current

society,

people

have

known

the

importance

of

keeping

healthy

and

good

life

habit.在當(dāng)今社會(huì)，人們已經(jīng)意識(shí)到健康和良好生活習(xí)慣的重要性。3.

When

it

comes

to

health,

everybody

has

his

own

way

to

keep

healthy,

doing

exercise,

keeping

a

balanced

diet,

etc.說(shuō)到健康，每個(gè)人都有自己的方式來(lái)保持健康，鍛煉身體，保持均衡的飲食等。二、正文部分1.

To

begin

with,

exercise

is

the

most

important

factor.

Doing

exercise

can

not

only

build

people’s

body

but

also

relax

themselves.首先，鍛煉是最重要的因素。鍛煉不僅可以保持身體健康也可以放松自己。2.

Regular

exercise

strengthens

our

hearts

and

lungs.

In

addition,

it

prevents

us

from

putting

on

weight.有規(guī)律的運(yùn)動(dòng)能強(qiáng)壯我們的心臟和肺。此外,還能防止我們?cè)黾芋w重。3.

It

is

also

necessary

to

keep

a

good

diet.

There

is

a

saying,

“An

apple

a

day

keeps

the

doctor

away.”還必須保持一個(gè)良好的飲食習(xí)慣。俗話說(shuō)，“一天一蘋(píng)果，醫(yī)生遠(yuǎn)離我”。4.

Avoid

foods

with

lots

of

sugar

and

fat.

Eat

plenty

of

high

protein

foods,

vegetables

and

fruits.避免高糖高脂肪的食物。多吃高蛋白食物、蔬菜和水果。5.

We

should

get

proper

amount

of

sleep,

because

without

enough

sleep,

we

will

often

feel

tired

and

irritable.

我們應(yīng)該保持適量的睡眠，因?yàn)闆](méi)有足夠的睡眠，我們會(huì)經(jīng)常感到疲倦和易怒。三、結(jié)尾部分1.

So

if

you

keep

those

ways

you

will

be

more

and

more

healthy.因此如果你能保持那些方式，你會(huì)越來(lái)越健康。2.

I

think

a

strong

will

is

necessary

if

we

want

to

keep

healthy.我認(rèn)為如果想要健康，強(qiáng)大的意愿是必需的。3.

We

have

to

get

rid

of

those

bad

habits

that

damage

our

health,

such

as

drinking

and

smoking.我們必須戒掉那些損害我們健康的壞習(xí)慣，比如喝酒和抽煙。4.

Last

but

not

least,

always

keeping

a

good

mood

can

make

half

the

work

with

double

results.

最后但并非不重要的是，要經(jīng)常保持一個(gè)好心情，這樣做起事來(lái)才可以事半功倍。5.

If

you

really

love

life,

follow

these

suggestions

and

start

a

healthy

lifestyle.如果你真的熱愛(ài)生活，那就遵循這些建議，開(kāi)始健康的生活方式吧。寫(xiě)作演練

閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(xiě)，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。

Michelle

was

8

years

old

when

she

heard

her

mom

and

dad

talking

about

her

little

brother

Jack,

now,

only

an

infant

（嬰兒）.

He

was

very

sick

and

they

were

completely

out

of

money.

Only

a

very

costly

operation

could

save

Jack

now,

but

there

was

no

one

to

whom

they

could

turn

for

the

money

needed.

She

heard

her

daddy

say

to

her

tearful

mom,

“Only

a

miracle

can

save

him

now.”

Hearing

the

words,

Michelle

went

to

her

bedroom

and

took

all

the

coins

from

her

little

money

box.

After

counting

the

coins

three

times,

she

slipped

out

of

the

back

door

and

made

her

way

to

the

drug

store

6

blocks

away…

She

waited

for

a

long

time

before

the

pharmacist

（藥劑師）

turned

around

and

asked

her,

“And

what

do

you

want?”

“Well,

it’s

about

my

brother,”

Michelle

answered,

“he’s

really

really

sick.

And

I

want

to

buy

a

miracle.”

“I

beg

your

pardon?”

said

the

pharmacist.

“His

name

is

Jack.

And

he

has

something

very

bad

growing

inside

his

body.

And

my

daddy

says

only

a

miracle

can

save

him

now.

So

how

much

does

a

miracle

cost?”

“We

don’t

sell

miracles

here,

little

girl.

I

am

sorry.

But

I

can’t

help

you，”

the

pharmacist

said.

“Listen,

I

have

the

money

to

pay

for

it.”

With

these

words,

Michelle

poured

out

all

the

coins

from

her

pocket.

At

this

time,

a

well-dressed

man

behind

Michelle

stooped

down

and

asked

the

little

girl,

“I

am

selling

the

miracle

you

want.

Tell

me

how

much

money

you

have.”

“One

dollar

and

eleven

cents,”

Michelle

answered

in

a

low

voice,

“That’s

all

the

money

I

have.

But

I

can

get

some

more

if

I

need

to.”

“Well,”

smiled

the

man,

“a

dollar

and

eleven

cents.

The

exact

price

of

a

miracle

for

your

little

brother.

Show

me

the

place

where

your

brother

lives.”P(pán)aragraph

1:

Holding

the

man’s

hand

firmly,

Michelle

took

him

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1:

Holding

the

man’s

hand

firmly,

Michelle

took

him

home.

The

little

girl

walked

in

such

a

hurry

that

she

even

forgot

to

introduce

herself

to

the

man.

Her

parents

were

too

surprised

to

believe

their

eyes.

That

well-dressed

man

turned

out

to

be

a

surgeon,

specializing

in

neural

surgery.

Later,

the

little

brother

was

taken

away.

The

operation

was

completed

with

payment

of

one

dollar

and

eleven

cents.

And

it

wasn’t

long

before

Jack

was

home

again

and

doing

well.

Michelle

was

more

than

happy.

Now

she

knew

the

exact

price

of

a

miracle:one

dollar

and

eleven

cents,

plus

the

faith

of

a

little

child.Paragraph

2:

When

asked

why

he

chose

to

help

the

family,

the

man

detailed,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________