2020高三英語作文精品課 含新冠疫情作文課件

1、,板塊三 寫作板塊 應用文寫作 讀后續(xù)寫/ 概要寫作,一、滿分寫作不可不知的閱卷老師的秘密,閱卷老師的關注點 1閱卷老師首看卷面 你必須明白，你的考卷是給閱卷老師看的，讓老師看得舒服、方便、清楚，這是非常重要的。不可書寫過小、過密或過稀，更不可字跡潦草，亂涂亂改，標點不清。在高強度閱卷中沒有誰會辨認書寫得亂七八糟的內(nèi)容，所以你應該呈現(xiàn)一份美觀清晰的答卷。,2閱卷老師次抓要點 閱卷老師對語言內(nèi)容描述全面與否要求嚴格，答題時應找準找全寫作要點。同時，要注意文章需條理分明，邏輯結構合理。,3閱卷老師緊盯錯誤 主謂不一致、動詞形式(時態(tài)和語態(tài))不對、詞組搭配不當、句子結構錯誤、詞序不當、關鍵詞用錯等都

2、屬于大錯； 小錯主要是指常用詞的拼寫錯誤，介詞、冠詞、標點等的錯用； 3個小錯等于1個大錯。雖然有些錯誤被界定為小錯誤，但卻影響得分檔次。時間再緊也要認真復查，盡量減少詞匯和句式錯誤。,4閱卷老師眼中的滿分卷 書寫整潔漂亮；覆蓋所有要點，內(nèi)容充實；詞匯豐富，文筆流暢，銜接連貫。 同樣的內(nèi)容，卷面整齊至少多給35分；如果寫得整齊美觀而且條理清晰，再多給幾分；如果開頭和結尾句式高級就可以穩(wěn)拿滿分！,閱卷老師的評分要求 1按5個檔次給分。評分時，先根據(jù)文章內(nèi)容和語言表達初步確定所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求衡量文章，確定或調(diào)整檔次。 2評分時注意的主要內(nèi)容：內(nèi)容要點、詞匯應用、語法結構是否準確、上下文

3、是否連貫以及語言是否得體。 3如書寫較差，影響識讀，其得分將降低一個檔次。,4拼寫和標點符號是影響分數(shù)的一個方面。英式英語和美式英語拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。 5內(nèi)容要點可用不同方式表達，對緊扣主題的適當發(fā)揮不予扣分。,板塊三 寫作板塊 應用文寫作 讀后續(xù)寫/ 概要寫作,二、提升作文檔次的技巧讓作文靚起來,(一)要點呈現(xiàn)多樣化，適當擴充要點 1追加成分 在要點基礎上適當增加合乎邏輯的附加成分，如定語(從句)、狀語(從句)、非謂語動詞、獨立主格結構等。不僅增加了詞數(shù)，而且使表達更清晰、準確，主題更突出。,住在中國十六年，一直學英語。(2019高考全國卷) First of all, having

4、lived in China for sixteen years and having learnt English since I was a child, I have a good command of English and Chinese, which is beneficial to introducing Chinese paintings.,2補加語句 根據(jù)行文走向，適當增加一些與主題相關的語句，或由要點衍生的句子，既能起到前引后聯(lián)的作用，又能補充一些相關信息，幫助讀者理解所寫內(nèi)容。,每一支參賽隊伍都非常出色，為比賽做好了準備。(2019高考全國卷) Every partici

5、pating team is great and ready for the game. It can be predicted that this is a close match（勢均力敵的比賽）.,3添加過渡 根據(jù)行文或段落需要，在句與句或段與段之間適當增加過渡詞語，甚至過渡句，可以使文章渾然一體，同時能充實文章。,first and most important; whats more; in addition; last but not least,話題：對西方繪畫藝術感興趣的原因(2019高考天津卷) Personally，Id want to learn about wester

6、n painting.Several reasons may account for my preference.For one thing，Im interested to learn how western painting has developed into what it is today through history，and the most influential artists in each period of its development.Additionally，Im crazy to learn how to appreciate western paintings

7、，and it cant be better if you can tell us some tricks about how to paint.,話題：學生體育運動情況 (2018高考全國卷) I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch. To begin with, a fabulo

8、us new stadium has been built, which has become the new landmark in our school. As for me, Im intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life. All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.,4不忘收尾 書信中“適當?shù)慕Y尾”也是必需的，它

9、不僅符合書信習慣，而且還可增加詞數(shù)。缺失就會影響文章結構，從而影響得分。書信常用的結束語如下： Im looking forward to ./Looking forward to ./Look forward to . Im waiting for your early reply. Best wishes to you. I would be grateful if you./Id appreciate it if you.,(二)詞句表達靚一靚 何為高級詞匯？眾所周知，詞匯本來并沒有“高低貴賤”之分，但某個詞一旦得到使用，放在了具體語境中，使用得極為得當，體現(xiàn)了該詞的美妙價值，為句子增色

10、，讓文章添彩，它就是高級詞匯；相反，使用時體現(xiàn)的價值平平，沒有創(chuàng)意，它就是低級詞匯。 巧用4招，以實現(xiàn)由低級向高級的轉化。,1“語”眾不同，避免人云亦云 寫作時恰當?shù)皿w地使用別人可能想不到的詞匯來表達，會給閱卷老師耳目一新的感覺。 I learn English and Chinese well, which is good for introducing Chinese paintings. I have a good command of English and Chinese, which is beneficial to introducing Chinese paintings.(2

11、019高考全國卷),2更新?lián)Q代，避免重復 寫作時應盡量避免重復使用相同的詞語，要用貼切多樣的詞語來展示自己的水平。用詞不同、表達方式迥異，也是高級用法。,The team will hold many activities, some of which will appeal to you, including many matches. The team will hold a range of activities, some of which will appeal to you, including many matches. (2017高考全國卷),3單詞與短語巧妙互用 一般情況下短

12、語優(yōu)先，應多使用詞組、習語來代替一些單詞，以增加文采。但有時單詞比短語更生動，亦可“一詞傳神”。,However, we should still prepare for the match, and try to be the winner. However, we should still make preparations for the match, and take pains to be the winner.(2019高考全國卷),短語高于單詞，盡量用短語替代動詞,注意 高級詞匯的使用一定要遵循“準確、恰當”的原則，一定要注意詞匯使用是否合適，并不一定難詞就是高級詞匯，例如： 一

13、大早我們買了一些圣誕禮物。 Early in the morning we purchased some Christmas presents. (purchased太過于書面化，改為bought更地道),(三)句式要“高”，句子要“鮮” 一、利用復合句式，提升文章檔次 (一)增加亮點的定語從句 1定語從句的應用可以非常有效地提升表達檔次，在寫作中如果我們可以把兩個簡單句合并為一個定語從句，就是從低級到高級的表達。,Firstly, the festival will start at 9：00 am.on August 15th，and it will last 3 hours. First

14、ly, the festival will start at 9：00 am.on August 15th, which will last 3 hours.(2019高考全國卷),2定語從句有多種形式，引導詞也有若干，但最常用、最能增加亮點的是as和which引導的非限制性定語從句以及“介詞which”引導的定語從句。,(1)在表達“正如”這一含義時，我們常用as引導的非限制性定語從句。常見的句式有： As we all know./As is known to all. As he pointed out. As we can see from. As the famous saying

15、goes.,As we all know, friendship always comes first.(2019高考全國卷),(2)which引導定語從句時，可以指代某個詞，也可以指代整個主句。 Further, it is necessary for you to take a good rest, which will provide enough energy for you.(2019高考全國卷),(3)“介詞which” 引導的定語從句。 It makes no difference from ordinary voting events, in which candidates

16、go around to seek supports.,(二)吸引眼球的狀語從句 在英語寫作中，狀語從句是經(jīng)常被用到的，它的靈活運用能使作文更具吸引力。 When it comes to the season I like best, spring will always occur to me in no time. We can set out early so that we will have more time to read and select books.,(三)提升檔次的名詞性從句 1名詞性從句包括主語從句、賓語從句、表語從句和同位語從句。尤其what, that所引導的名詞

17、性從句是寫作中常見的高級表達方式。,I have good news to tell you that an outstanding movie will be shown in our campus. (同位語從句)(2018高考全國卷 ) Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do what we want to do.(賓語從句) What we need most are popular science books. (主語從句) Today is what we can hold and make use of.(表語從句),

18、2在寫作中我們?nèi)绻軌虬褍蓚€簡單句合并為一個含有名詞性從句的復合句，或者把一個簡單句擴展成為含有名詞性從句的復合句，對寫作都是一種質的升華。 He said a lot at the meeting. His words were very attractive. What he said at the meeting was very attractive. One mans meat is another mans poison. What is one mans meat is another mans poison.,二、常用8大句式，考場駕輕就熟 1強調(diào)句型,強調(diào)句型的使用是為了強調(diào)

19、句子的某一成分，其構成為：It is/was被強調(diào)部分that/who其他。 在寫作中，我們可以通過強調(diào)句型將句子提高到一個新的層次。,It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere. 注意 被強調(diào)的是時間或地點狀語時，不要用when或where，而應用that。 It was in the park that (不用where) I came across my previous English teacher.,2倒裝句 在寫作中倒裝句應用比較廣泛，涉及的句型也比較多，包括部分倒裝

20、和全部倒裝。常見的有： (1)“only狀語(從句)”置于句首時，句子用部分倒裝。 Only in this way can we students study happily and effectively.,(2)由none, neither, nor, not, never, hardly, little, seldom等否定詞，以及no構成的否定短語如at no time, by no means等置于句首時，句子用部分倒裝。 Not only does it affect our daily life, but it also puts peoples lives at risk.,

21、(3)在so/such . that .結構中，當so/such .位于句首時，其后的句子用部分倒裝。 So excited was I that I couldnt wait to try my hand at riding it.,(4)由here, there, now, then, out, in, up, down, on the wall, in the room等表示地點、時間或方位的副詞或介詞短語置于句首，且主語是名詞而不是代詞時，句子用全部倒裝。 In that picture, around the table with three books on it sit thre

22、e students. 在寫作中，我們可以通過倒裝讓句子更高級。,3省略句 省略句的應用可以使句子更簡潔明快。寫作中主要用到的有狀語從句的省略和不定式to后成分的省略。 If (it is) not, let me know what time suits you best. As (it is) scheduled, it will be held on the playground from 5 pm.to 8 pm.next Sunday.(2019高考全國卷),4虛擬語氣 寫作中虛擬語氣的使用可以使表達更委婉，更具可讀性。寫作中常見的有以下幾種： (1)wish型虛擬語氣 Beside

23、s, I wish there wouldnt be too many students in a class. (2)if only型虛擬語氣 If only I could go back and reset my goals.,(3)Its (high/about) time (that) .型虛擬語氣 It is high time that both children and parents took/should take action to make small changes.,5非謂語動詞 寫作中非謂語動詞的應用標志著寫作水平上升了一個檔次，寫作中常用到的是非謂語動詞作狀語和

24、定語。,(1)非謂語動詞作狀語 To get some working experience, I plan to find a parttime job in a foreign capital company. So Im writing you a letter, hoping to get your guide and suggestions. Faced with difficulties, we need friends to give us comfort and help.,(2)非謂語動詞作定語 It carries articles written by foreign f

25、riends about the cultures of their home countries.,6with復合結構 with復合結構可以使文章簡潔緊湊，一篇文章如果能恰當?shù)厥褂靡粌蓚€with復合結構，可以使文章增色不少。 Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held.(2018高考全國卷) With English words getting popular in both media and daily life, a Chinese dictionary has

26、 included 239 of them.,7并列句型 并列句型是用連詞把兩個或兩個以上的簡單句連接起來，在這一句型中要注意連接并列主語時，有些句型采取“就近原則”。寫作中常用到的有以下幾種：,(1)while表示對比關系，意為“然而，可是” It is beneficial to some people, while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not. (2)not only.but (also).“不僅而且” It is believed that the movie will be not only me

27、aningful but also interesting. (2018高考全國卷),(3)not.but.“不是，而是” To be honest, voters sometimes feel annoyed, not because they hate voting, but because they are divided between emotion and fairness.,8it句型 it的應用可以使句子更平衡，更符合英語習慣。常見的有以下幾種： (1)it作形式主語 Everyone in our society should help those in need, but

28、it is more important to be sincere and earnest（認真、熱心）.,(2)it作形式賓語 And you also should keep it in mind that comparing notes with your classmates frequently is a good way to improve your study. (3)it在某些固定句式中的應用 I would appreciate it if you could agree to my request.(2019高考全國卷),(四)銜接要“巧”，過渡要“妙” 創(chuàng)造良好開端

29、常用開頭詞匯 表示“啟”的詞匯常用在段落或文章的開頭，用于開篇引出擴展句。常見的詞匯有：first/firstly, first of all, at first, in the first place, above all, to begin/start with, today, now, nowadays, at present, currently, recently, generally speaking, according to等。,First of all, we must make full use of every 45minute lesson. Nowadays/Rece

30、ntly, people in many big cities are complaining about the heavy traffic. In the first place, she can read at the rate of 100 words a minute. To begin/start with, smoking should be banned in public areas.,As the proverb says/As the saying goes, “Time is money.” With the development of the Internet, c

31、omputers play an important role in peoples life. It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours. There is no denying that successful business lies in a healthy body and mind. It is believed that health is above wealth.,常用開頭句式,滿分作文選粹,First and foremost, the competition to be held in our scho

32、ol stadium will begin at 2 pm.and last for roughly 3 hours.(2019高考全國卷) Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. First of all, Id like to know when the class will start and how many students there will be in a class. As is known to all, shoes play an important role in

33、 our life, for it can protect our feet from being hurt.,順勢承上啟下 常用順承詞匯 表示“承”的詞匯常用于承接主題句或第一個擴展句。常見的詞匯有：second/secondly, also, besides, in addition, soon afterwards, after that, whats more, furthermore, moreover, whats worse, still less, to make matters worse, worse still, for example, in other words,

34、especially, particularly, obviously, meanwhile, at the same time等。,Besides, developing a good habit of learning can help you improve your learning effectively. Whats more, good books can help us to develop good characters. In addition, we shouldnt neglect that everyone wants a friendly and peaceful

35、society. Meanwhile/At the same time, I will regard it as my duty to keep our environment clean and healthy.,What is more serious is that we dont cherish wildlife. As far as I am concerned, they stand for love, friendship and unity.,常用順承句式,To begin with, according to our tradition, you are supposed t

36、o arrive early, so that you can help the family prepare the dinner, which is not only meaningful but also interesting. Besides, youd better bring some gifts, such as a special food or drink from your country. Whats more, when you are enjoying the meal, you need to avoid making noises while chewing f

37、ood.(2018高考全國卷),滿分作文選粹,Worse still, I dont even know much about the word and format（格式） of the enclosure（附件）. In addition, sitting on the grass and enjoying the tasty food and drinks provided by sponsors, we will be fully absorbed in the attractive and fascinating performances. (2019高考全國卷),巧妙轉折過渡 常用

38、轉折詞匯 表示“轉”的詞匯常用來表示不同或相反的意見或情況。常見的詞匯有：but, yet, however, while, otherwise, or (else), on the contrary, on the other hand, contrary to, in any case, though, although, as, even if/though, despite, in spite of, regardless of等。,Finally, the horse calmed down, but we seemed to get lost, unable to go back

39、to the mountain road. (2018高考浙江卷) On the other hand, online shopping also has many disadvantages. On the contrary, the volunteers always claim that they are tired of the life on earth. Contrary to what I had originally said, the trip turned out to be fun.,Whatever/No matter what you say, he wont bel

40、ieve you. Whether you believe it or not, it is true.,常用轉折句式,滿分作文選粹 However, a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out. Otherwise well have to answer for our selfishness sooner or later.,完美結束全文 常用結尾詞匯 表示“合”的詞匯常用于總結上文的內(nèi)容，引導最后一個擴展句或引導結尾句表示段落的結束。常見的詞匯有：finally, last but not least, in s

41、hort, in brief, in conclusion, in a/one word, to sum up, all in all, on the whole, in general等。,All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.(2018高考全國卷) In conclusion, a good citizen should observe traffic regulations. On the whole, I find a bike more enjoyable than

42、a motorcycle.,In a word, success is important, and so is failure, because its the mother of success. To sum up, environmental protection is of great importance, which can make us live more comfortably and healthily.,Id appreciate it if you could deliver them as soon as possible. It is high time that

43、 we did something to prevent the environment from being polluted. We can, therefore, come to the conclusion that nothing is so precious as peace in the world.,常用結尾句式,To sum up, I wish you could live up to the expectations of our school.(2019高考全國卷) In a word, I like everything in spring, especially t

44、he feelings bathed in the rain and sunshine. In short, Internet voting, to some extent, is unfair, if not immoral, and cannot be trusted. Therefore, I hold a positive attitude towards online voting.,滿分作文選粹,Finally, I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life, which must be very inter

45、esting. Last but not least, health is also very significant for us students.,Homework,1.預習優(yōu)化探究P67頁-72頁 2.整理筆記，認真總結這節(jié)課所學知識 3.自己選擇性的寫作一篇應用文,板塊三 寫作板塊 應用文寫作 讀后續(xù)寫/ 概要寫作,三、應用文高分寫作攻略讓作文得滿分,(一)普通書信/電子郵件 題型技法 英文電子郵件和普通書信的寫法和格式大體相同，其開頭、結尾常常都會給出，正文可根據(jù)題目要求分段把內(nèi)容表達清楚即可。具體寫作結構為：,增分佳句 1吸引閱卷人開頭句 (1)Thanks for your i

46、nvitation to the Christmas party. 謝謝你邀請我參加圣誕晚會。 (2)How are you getting along with your study? 你近來學習進展怎樣？ (3)I am very glad/delighted/happy to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago. 我非常高興收到你兩周前寄給我的信。,2吸引閱卷人篇中句 (1)Im very glad to tell you something about. 我很高興告訴你一些關于的事情。 (2)As far as I kn

47、ow/am concerned/can see. 據(jù)我所知,3吸引閱卷人結尾句 (1)Please write to me soon and tell me about your. 請馬上寫信給我，告訴我關于你的 (2)Im looking forward to your reply. 我盼望著你的回復。,(二)建議信 題型技法 建議信是生活中常見的一種文體，是寫信人向收信人對某事提出的建議或忠告。建議信要寫得簡明扼要、目的明確，具有合理性和說服力。具體寫作結構為：,建議信文章結構六件套,1.首段：背景介紹，寫信目的 2.主體：具體建議，建議理由 3.尾段：總結語句，期待祝福,增分佳句 1吸引

48、閱卷人開頭句 (1)You have asked for my advice about . and I will try to make some useful suggestions here. 關于你向我征求意見，在此，我盡量提出一些有用的建議。 (2)Im sorry to know/learn that you are having trouble with/in doing . at the moment. 得知此刻你遇到麻煩我深感遺憾。,(3) I have received your letter in which+完整句 I have received your letter

49、 in which/where you mentioned you had trouble adjusting to your high school life, (4) I hope the following suggestions will be helpful/beneficial to you.,2吸引閱卷人篇中句 (1)I think the most suitable.for you is. 我認為對你來說最適合的是 (2)I would like to suggest that. 我想建議 (3)Youd better./Its better to. 你最好/最好是,3吸引閱卷

50、人結尾句 (1)I believe you will take my advice into account/ consideration seriously. 我相信你會認真考慮我的建議的。 (2)I hope you will find these suggestions useful/helpful. 我希望這些建議/意見對你來說有用/幫助。,試寫滿分作文 假定你是Lynn。你的朋友李華來信告訴你他即將上大學，可是他媽媽擔心他還不會獨立生活，他不知該如何消除媽媽的顧慮。請給李華回一封信，內(nèi)容包括： 1多與母親溝通； 2證明自己已經(jīng)長大。 注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右，信的格式已給出，不計入總詞

51、數(shù)； 2可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。,滿分作文第一步：“三定”審題，“一列”謀篇,建議信,第二人稱,一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時,多與母親溝通，證明自己已經(jīng),長大，共擔家務,滿分作文第二步：斟酌詞句，設計亮點 1_ to worry about your newlife in college.(it作形式主語) 你媽媽擔心你在大學的新生活是正常的。 2Second, you should learn to take care of yourself, _.(現(xiàn)在分詞短語作伴隨狀語) 其次，你應該學會照顧自己，向你媽媽證明你已經(jīng)長大了。,Its normal for your mom,proving

52、 to your mom that you are already grownup,參考范文 Dear Li Hua， Im sorry to learn about your problem. Its normal for your mom to worry about your new life in college. Here are some suggestions.,First, why not talk more with your mom? Hearttoheart talks help you understand each other better. Second, you

53、should learn to take care of yourself, proving to your mom that you are already grownup. Its even better if you could share the housework, such as cleaning, washing and cooking. I hope youll find my ideas useful. Yours， Lynn,First and most important/ At first.,Last but not least,whats more/ In addit

54、ion,假如你是李華,給留在衡水過寒假的留學生朋友Jack寫一封電子郵件, 告知其目前新型冠狀病毒肺炎的形勢, 請他注意防護。要點如下: 1 告知疫情現(xiàn)狀; 2注意防護，如減少外出，帶口罩外出，勤洗手等。 3表達戰(zhàn)勝疫情的信心。,Dear Jack, Knowing that you stay in Hengshui for the winter vocation, I am writing to inform you of the outbreak of the COVID-19. First discovered in Wuhan, the virus, which has been co

55、nfirmed to be transmitted from people to people, has already infected more than 1.4million people worldwide.,So minimize ourdoor activities as the government has required. Avoid crowed places, parties and group activites. Correctly wear a mask if you have to go out. Please increase prevention and se

56、lf-protection. Keep good hygiene by washing your hands often. Avoid close contact with anyone with cold or flu-like symptoms.,We chinese are fully confident that the COVID-19 can be controlled and finally rooted out with the joint efforts of the government and her people together with support from h

57、ome and abroad. Please stay in a relaxed mood and protect yourself. Wish you a healthy and safe new year. Yours Li Hua,(四)邀請信 題型技法 邀請信是寫信人對收信人的一種盛情邀約，一般分為正式和非正式兩種，格式與其他信函相同。具體寫作結構如下：,邀請信六件套,1. 首段：背景介紹，寫信目的 2.主體：活動細節(jié)，補充理由 3.尾段：再次邀請，期待回信,增分佳句 1吸引閱卷人開頭句 (1)I am writing to invite you to./Im writing to t

58、ell you that there will be a. 我寫信邀請你/我寫信告訴你有一個(場) (2)I am very pleased to invite you to participate in.to be held in. 我很高興邀請你參加在舉行的,2吸引閱卷人篇中句 (1)Here are some details about this activity./Some details about this activity are as follows. 這次活動的細節(jié)如下。 (2)I would like to meet you there and please let me know your d