2015屆高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí) 高效書面表達(dá)專題卷5 Word版含解析

1、2015屆高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí) 高效書面表達(dá)專題卷5（含解析）1書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）最近，你校參加了某英文報(bào)紙正在開展的題為“中學(xué)生課堂注意力”的專欄討論，并請(qǐng)你代表學(xué)校給該英文報(bào)紙投稿。下面的表格為你校的調(diào)查結(jié)果（表中數(shù)據(jù)為學(xué)生人數(shù)百分比）。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所提供的信息做簡(jiǎn)要說明，并根據(jù)提示給出改善的建議。（字?jǐn)?shù)140）中學(xué)生課堂注意力集中情況及注意力不能集中的原因： 改善注意力的建議： 能夠集中注意力40不能夠集中注意力60課堂干擾30睡眠不足與疲勞70教室通風(fēng)、明亮課堂積極參與課堂活動(dòng)課間適量活動(dòng)或適當(dāng)休息_2第二節(jié) 書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）在當(dāng)今數(shù)字化的時(shí)代，不少老師不在進(jìn)行串門式的家訪，而是借助

2、短信、QQ、E-mail、等通訊方式與學(xué)生家長(zhǎng)溝通。信息時(shí)代的教學(xué)， 還需要家訪嗎？請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的文字材料用英語寫一篇120詞左右的短文，并談?wù)勀阕约旱目捶āＳ^點(diǎn)一：有必要家訪有利于家長(zhǎng)和老師更好地溝通，共同努力幫助學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)；家訪可以全方位了解學(xué)生，學(xué)生能感受到老師的關(guān)心。觀點(diǎn)二：沒必要家訪浪費(fèi)時(shí)間和精力；借助短信、網(wǎng)絡(luò)等與學(xué)生家長(zhǎng)溝通更加及時(shí)方便。注意：1詞數(shù)：100-120左右。2參考詞匯：家訪：home visits_3假如你是李平，今年暑假去打工, 參加社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示用英語寫一篇短文“An Unforgettable Experience”，以發(fā)表在?？稀９ぷ鞯攸c(diǎn)一家

3、肯德基（KFC）快餐店工作時(shí)間四個(gè)星期，每天8小時(shí)工作情況當(dāng)保潔員（cleaner）, 工作辛苦且枯燥, 每天要起早貪黑地工作，差點(diǎn)中途放棄你的體會(huì)遇到了一些沒預(yù)料到的困難，認(rèn)識(shí)到了勞動(dòng)（labor）的意義注意：1. 必須使用第一人稱; 2. 不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)擴(kuò)展，總詞數(shù)120左右;3. 要求字跡工整，卷面整潔。 An Unforgettable Experience 4假如你是李華，是學(xué)校愛心俱樂部的成員，英語成績(jī)非常突出，有兩年英語家教的經(jīng)驗(yàn)，認(rèn)為志愿工作能夠使人樹立信心，培養(yǎng)良好的交際能力。請(qǐng)根據(jù)這則招聘信息所給的中英文提示寫一封應(yīng)聘郵件。參考詞匯：家教tutor A volunta

4、ry activity In the winter vacation Five volunteers wanted As English teachers At SOS childrens village5假定你是西安某一中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。在一個(gè)英文網(wǎng)絡(luò)論壇上,你看到如下的一個(gè)帖子: With the college entrance examination approaching, quite a few students are suffering mental problems. It does great harm to their study and health. What can

5、 we do to help those students?請(qǐng)你回帖，要點(diǎn)如下： 1. 同意并表示擔(dān)憂，實(shí)際上，學(xué)生心理壓力不可避免。2. 列出某些學(xué)生心理焦慮的現(xiàn)象（如：擔(dān)心考不好；缺乏自信心；容易發(fā)脾氣等）； 3. 提出應(yīng)該采取的對(duì)策（如積極態(tài)度和應(yīng)對(duì)方法）。注意：1. 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；     2. 詞數(shù)：不少于100字。_試卷第2頁，總2頁參考答案1One possible version：Our school has made a survey about how long middle school students can fix t

6、heir attention in class during each periodThe result shows that only 40% of the students can draw their attention to the class, while the rest of them can not concentrate on the lesson30% of the students think the problem is caused by all kinds of noises in the classroom; the other part of students

7、consider the lack of sleep and tiredness as the major causesTherefore, we advise that the classroom be bright and the air inside stay freshAs for students, they should try their best to be active in class in order not to be disturbed by othersDuring the breaks, they can take some exercises or have a

8、 little rest in the classroom【解析】2 One possible version：Are home visits necessary when there are so many ways to communicate with students parents?Some people are for home visits. They think home visits will make it easy for parents and teachers to communicate and work more closely together to help

9、students learning. The traditional way will give teachers a chance to better understand their students, who thus will feel cared for. However, others hold opposite opinion because they think it is a waste of time and energy. There are many other ways to help students. If they keep in touch with the

10、students parents with texting messages, QQ or E-mail, it will be more convenient and save a lot of time.Personally, I think home visits are positive, and that teachers could educate their students effectively through home visits.【解析】3An Unforgettable ExperienceDuring the summer holidays this year, I

11、 thought I should do something meaningful instead of staying at home, so I got a job at a KFC fast food restaurant and worked there as a cleaner. I worked eight hours a day for four weeks.The job was hard and boring and seemed endless, which made me so tired that I nearly gave it up halfway. After a

12、ll, I stuck to it with determination. Every day I started off for work early in the morning and got home late in the evening. Finally I finished the job before the new term began.Although I met with a lot of difficulty in the work, it helped me understand better what labor means. I think it is reall

13、y a successful experience.【解析】試題分析：本文屬于提綱類作文，要求考生根據(jù)所給的寫作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開寫作。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語言來表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達(dá)能力。考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文點(diǎn)評(píng)：寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識(shí)，采用不同

14、的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性?？忌仨氄J(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。4范文Dear student union,I have just read the ad on the school bulletin and the moment I read it I took an interest in becoming one of the volunteer English teachers of the five.Now I am wri

15、ting here to apply for this opportunity.First, please allow me to make a brief introduction about myself. Im Li Hua, a member of the loving heart club in our school, and I have a good command of English. My two-years experience as a tutor has taught me that working as a volunteer can build up our co

16、nfidence and enable us to develop our communication skills, which are a necessity in our social life.When I read your ad, I became fascinated. I believe that being a volunteer teacher at your village is obviously more than just teaching; it is helpful to broaden my horizons and improve my understand

17、ing of the world. Besides, by helping those kids, I feel I can make a difference to their future and make a small contribution to society. Id appreciate it so much if you could possibly consider my application.Im looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely,Li Hua【解析】這是一份應(yīng)聘書，根據(jù)廣告內(nèi)容，可知工作性質(zhì)是英語老師，時(shí)間是

18、寒假，地點(diǎn)是At SOS childrens village，寫作時(shí)，要圍繞這幾天展開，還要自我介紹，包括自己的英語方面的優(yōu)勢(shì)，相關(guān)經(jīng)歷。關(guān)鍵的要寫自己為什么要應(yīng)聘這份工作，要是得到了會(huì)怎么做。在句型的選擇上更要注意，應(yīng)該讓對(duì)方從應(yīng)聘書中看到你的英語表達(dá)能力，可以多使用復(fù)雜的高級(jí)句型。如Id appreciate it so much if you could possibly consider my application. 和My two-years experience as a tutor has taught me that working as a volunteer can bu

19、ild up our confidence and enable us to develop our communication skills, which are a necessity in our social life.等。5I cant agree more with what you said. That many students are suffering mental problems also worries me. Its a fact that we face more and more mental pressure in our life, which, in my

20、 opinion, everyone will meet in their life. Some students are so worried about exams and academic achievements that they cant fall asleep at night. Some are discouraged and tend to lose their confidence because of constant failure in exams. Others cant get along well with their parents or with their

21、 classmates. They always feel stressed and easily get angry.As a matter of fact, therere many ways for us to deal with our mental problems. First of all, we can turn to our teachers for help, including our teacher of psychology. Second, communication is of vital importance. When we have a talk about

22、 our problems with our friends or classmates, we can feel greatly relieved. Last but not least, we need to develop a positive attitude towards our studies and our life. With the mental problems removed, we will keep in normal mental health and study happily.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇提綱類書面表達(dá)，先讀懂這篇帖子，弄清帖子的內(nèi)容是關(guān)于高三學(xué)生的考前壓力的問題，再根據(jù)給出來的要點(diǎn)來闡述，題目有三個(gè)要點(diǎn)，但是不是很具體，考生要根據(jù)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行拓展發(fā)揮，不能有遺漏，內(nèi)容一定要充實(shí)，這就要求增加了難度。在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。同時(shí)在列舉措施的時(shí)候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，second， Besides, Whats