初中英語寫作課　精品

1、編輯ppt編輯pptLearning Target (學習目標學習目標) We are learning how to write a paragraph to show ideas.paragraph?段落段落 Yao Ming, the center of the Chinese National Mens Basketball Team, served the Huston Rockets in the 2002 NBA. The 2.26 m, 120 kg center becomes the first one to come from a foreign team. Yao Mi

2、ng was born in Shanghai in September, 1980. His mother was a center and captain of the Chinese National Womens Team. His father played basketball, too. Sport analyst Bill Walton said, “Yao Ming has the potential the capability of changing the future of basketball.” 編輯ppt Success Criteria (目標達成要求目標達成

3、要求)1.I can write a strong topic sentence.2.I can write three detail sentences. 3.I can write a closing sentence.4.I can use words or phrases to make the ideas more clear.5.I can check my grammar, spelling and punctuation(, . ! ) after writing.G/N G-Good N-needs improvement編輯pptdetail sentence1detail

4、 sentence2detail sentence3closing sentencetopic sentencebodybeginningending編輯ppt Task1: Underline the topic sentence. Task2:*Add transitional words or phrases for detail sentences.(添加過渡語添加過渡語) *Write a closing sentence. A lot of people think it is good to keep animals in zoos._ zoos are place for pe

5、ople to see many different kind of animals from all over the word. Without zoos, most of the people would never see tigers, lions ,elephants. _zoos look after the animals very well. The animals are always given food and cleaned regularly. _zoos protect the animals well. They offer them safe places t

6、o live in. _. 編輯ppt Word WallTransitional Words(過渡語）過渡語）表示層次表示層次detail1detail2detail3表示總結(jié)表示總結(jié) closingfirst, firstly, first of all, to begin (start )with, second，secondly, then, next, after that, besides, whats morethird, thirdly, finally, lastly, at last，in the endin a word, in short , as a result編輯

7、ppt Task 3:Reread the paragraph for mistakes and correct them. A lot of people think it is good to keep animals in zoos._ zoos are place for people to see many different kind of animals from all over the word. Without zoos, most of the people would never see tigers, lions ,elephants. _zoos look afte

8、r the animals very well. The animals are always given food and cleaned regularly. _zoos protect the animals well. They offer them safe places to live in. _. 編輯pptWriting請寫請寫一個段落一個段落列舉至少三種保列舉至少三種保持健康的方式。要求使用持健康的方式。要求使用過渡過渡語以及語以及topic, detail ,closing sentences編輯ppt_請寫請寫一個段落一個段落列舉至少三種保持健列舉至少三種保持健康的方式。要求使用康的方式。要求使用過渡語以及過渡語以及topic,