打卡 - 2022高考英語(yǔ)專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練-讀后續(xù)寫（名校試卷06+解析）

1、作者：一氣貫長(zhǎng)空打卡 | 2022高考英語(yǔ)專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練-讀后續(xù)寫（名校試卷06+解析） 閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。A young man was getting ready to graduate from college. For many months he had admired a beautiful sports car in a dealers showroom, and knowing his father could well afford it, he told his father what he wanted was the s

2、ports car. As Graduation Day approached, the young man waited for signs that his father had purchased the car.Finally, on the morning of his graduation, his father called him into his private study. His father told him how proud he was to have such a fine son, and told him how much he loved him. He

3、handed his son a beautiful wrapped gift box.Curious, but somewhat disappointed, the young man opened the box and found a lovely, leather-bound Bible, with the young mans name carved in gold. Angrily, he raised his voice to his father and said, With all your money you give me a Bible? He then stormed

4、 out of the house, leaving the Bible. He felt depressed and couldnt accept the fact why his father did not fulfill his expectation.Many years passed and the young man was very successful in business. He had a beautiful home and a wonderful family, but realizing his father was very old, he thought pe

5、rhaps he should go to see him. He had not seen him since that Graduation Day. Before he could make the arrangements, he received a message from one of his relatives telling him his father had passed away, and left all of his possessions to his son. He needed to come home immediately and deal with th

6、em.注意：續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。When he arrived at his fathers house, sudden sadness and regret filled his heart._As he was reading the Bible, a car key dropped from the back of it._參考答案【答案】When he arrived at his fathers house, suddenly sadness and regret filled his heart. He stood in front of t

7、he house silently, tears rolling down his checks. The relative who gave the message told the man his father was so sorry to hurt him and wanted to give him a reasonable and exact explanation all the time about sending him the Bible as a gift. When hearing this, he began to search through his fathers

8、 study and saw the still new Bible, just as he left it years ago. With tears in his eyes, he opened the Bibleand began to turn the pages.As he was reading the Bible, a car key dropped from the back of it. It had a tag with the dealers name, the same dealer who had the sports car he had desired. On t

9、he tag were the date of his graduation and the words “PAID IN FULL”. He picked up the key without any hesitation. Bibleheld in hand tightly, flood of guilt welled up in his heart, making him feel sad and regretful. Sometimes we dont realize the fortune we have or we could have because we expect “the

10、 packaging” to be different. What may appear as bad fortune may in fact be the door that is just waiting to be opened.【解析】【分析】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了大學(xué)畢業(yè)的年輕人想要一輛跑車，但他父親送給他一本圣經(jīng)，他很生氣和失望，之后再也沒(méi)有回去看過(guò)父親。很多年后，他事業(yè)獲得了成功，打算回去看父親。還沒(méi)安排好，年輕人就被通知說(shuō)父親已去世，年輕人回去看父親送給自己的圣經(jīng)時(shí)，掉下來(lái)了一把車鑰匙，原來(lái)父親早就給他買好了那輛跑車?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫：由第一段首句內(nèi)容“當(dāng)他到達(dá)他父親

11、的房子，突然悲傷和后悔充滿了他的心?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫年輕人回到父親的房子后的內(nèi)心感受，以及他重新翻開了父親送他的圣經(jīng)。由第二段首句內(nèi)容“當(dāng)他在讀圣經(jīng)的時(shí)候，一把汽車鑰匙從后面掉了下來(lái)?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫年輕人翻開書發(fā)現(xiàn)了車鑰匙，知道了父親當(dāng)年早就買好了他想要的那輛車，他手里緊握著圣經(jīng)，內(nèi)疚的洪流涌上心頭，使他感到悲哀和后悔。2.續(xù)寫線索：年輕人回家找圣經(jīng)讀圣經(jīng)書中的鑰匙掉落年輕人內(nèi)疚3.詞匯激活行為類回家：arrived at / return home尋找：search through/ search for給予：give/ send/ hand情緒類后悔：sorry/ guilt / regretful/guilty不幸：bad fortune/ unfortunate【點(diǎn)睛】高分句型1When hearing this, he began to search (through) his fathers study and saw the still new Bible, just as he left it years ago.運(yùn)用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞作狀語(yǔ)。高分句型2 It had a tag with the dealers