2020屆高考系統(tǒng)復(fù)習(xí)英語大題精做15書面表達(dá)開放類作文(學(xué)生版)

1、大題精做十書面表達(dá)開放類作文7勞動最光榮”為主題的社會實(shí)1.12019北京卷】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你們班上周組織了一次以踐活動。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記述整個過程。注意：詞數(shù)不少于 60。提示詞：西瓜 watermelon2.12019天津卷】假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的李津，英國友好學(xué)校將派教師來你校參加為期一周的暑期交流活動。活動期間，英方教師 Chris將做一個有關(guān)西方藝術(shù)的講座，現(xiàn)就講座內(nèi)容征求你校學(xué)生的意見。請根據(jù)以下提示 給Chris寫一封電子郵件：(1)你喜歡的講座話題(從音樂、美術(shù)、舞蹈中任選其一) ；(2)選擇該話題的原因及關(guān)于該話題你感興趣的內(nèi)容；(3

2、)希望從中有何收獲。注意：(1)詞數(shù)不少于 100;(2)可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；(3)開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Chris,I m Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High School.Thank you for your time.Yours,Li Jin1 .【湖南省長沙市第一中學(xué)2020屆高三第一次月考】假如你是李華，你的英國筆友 Peter在孔子課堂(theConfucius Academy) 了解到了中國古典四大名著( China s four great classic novels勺知識并寫信與你交流。作 為一名古典

3、文學(xué)愛好者，你讀完之后很高興。回信給他，介紹你最愛的四大名著中的某個人物(character-)以及原因。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以增加適當(dāng)?shù)募?xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Dear Peter,Yours,Li Hua2 .【山西省大同市2019-2020學(xué)年高三上學(xué)期開學(xué)摸底】假定你是李華，你和你的同學(xué)們將在下周末舉辦一次活動，針對“低頭族”這一問題，提醒過往的人們不要在行走時看手機(jī)，盡量抬起頭來，注意安全與健康。請給你的英國朋友 Henry寫封郵件，邀請他一起參加。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。注意：1.行文連貫流暢；2.參考詞匯：低頭族：phubber; 3.詞數(shù)100詞左右。Dear

4、 Henry,How s everything going?Yours,Li Hua答案與u解析1.【答案】Last week I took part in a farmwork programme in the suburbs. At the class meeting, our teacher told us about the programme with the theme “ Working is most beautiful ” . And he stressed the importance of working with our own tWhen I got home, I

5、packed up my luggage for the trip. On the farm, we helped pick watermelons. While working,I realised how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun. When I came back home, I shared my experiences with my parents. And they were very proud of me.【解析】本文屬于圖畫作文，要求根據(jù)圖畫內(nèi)容寫一篇英文周記。圖畫作文內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)比較清晰，其中包括：老師

6、宣布活動內(nèi)容和意義，我為活動準(zhǔn)備，在農(nóng)場的勞動過程，介紹活動感受。這樣有利于學(xué)生寫作時發(fā)揮與擴(kuò)展。全文可分成三部分，開頭段概括活動，中間段描述圖畫，結(jié)尾段總結(jié)收獲和意義。文章用第一人稱來寫，使用一般過去時?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】 本文內(nèi)容完整，語言表述通順。使用了連接詞、銜接詞，使文章自然、流暢。文章使用了賓語從句(how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun.)還使用了 At the class meeting, When I gothome, On the farm, While working, When I came back hom

7、e 等過渡詞。2.【答案】Dear Chris,I m Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School. As far as I am concerned, a lecture about western art will be given in the coming interchange activity in summer vacation. I m writing to give some suggestions about the topic oflecture.As a music lover, I m greatly fond of clas

8、sic music, therefore I would appreciate it if you could talk about something about western classical music such as the origin and developing progress of it. In addition, some representative figures and their masterpieces are also expected to be introduced.I believe this lecture will enrich my knowle

9、dge about western classical music and develop studentswestern art. Last but not least, I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestions into serious account and hope you a wonderful trip to our school.Thank you for your time.Yours,Li Jin【解析】本篇書面表達(dá)要求考生寫一封電子郵件，為半開放式作文?？煞譃槿蝸韺懀旱谝欢危涸掝}+論點(diǎn)（得知什么消息+寫電子郵件什

10、么意圖）；第二段：具體內(nèi)容（介紹你喜歡的講座話題，選擇該話題的原因及關(guān)于該話題你感興趣的內(nèi)容等）；第三段：總結(jié)和希望（希望從中有何收獲等）。注意一般以第一人稱為主，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時為主?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】 本文篇首句說明寫信目的，篇中句介紹詳情、提出具體建議，篇尾句提出希望采納建議，并祝福。文中采用了不少高級詞匯和句式。1. As far as I am concerned:在我看來2. I ngreatly fond of ：我很喜歡3. I would appreciate it if.（條件狀語從句）4. In addition:此外5. representative figure

11、s :代表性人物6. Last but not least：最后但并非并不重要的一點(diǎn)是7. I sincerely hope that （賓語從句）1.【答案】Dear Peter,How are you doing? Thanks for sharing with me your experience of learning China s four great clas：your personal understanding. There is no denying that so many fantastic characters have been created by ancient

12、 Chinese novelists. I am glad to tell you about my favorite character, Sun Wukong in Journey to the WestIn the novel, Sun Wukong, also known as the Monkey King, is a monkey born from a stone who acquires supernatural powers through Taoist practices, from which he knows the 72 transformations, allowi

13、ng him to transform into various animals and objects. That is the most important reason why I consider Sun as my favorite character.Classics open up a window to different worlds and different cultures. I do hope that Chinese classic literature helps you understand China better.Yours,Li Hua【解析】這是一篇應(yīng)用

14、文寫作。第一步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一封郵件；第二步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵 詞 （組）,如：share with（分享），China s four great classic nove咪名著 ），be glad to（高興）；character（人物）； Journey to the West（西游記）等。第三步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】范文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在范文中使用了較多高級表達(dá)方式，如Thereis

15、 no denying that so many fantastic characters have been created by ancient Chinese novelists. 運(yùn)用了 There is no denying that句型；In the novel, Sun Wukong, also known as the Monkey King, is a monkey born from a stone who acquires supernatural powers through Taoist practices, from which he knows the 72 tr

16、ansformations, allowing him to transform into various animals and objects.運(yùn)用了定語從句。全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭 英語的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。2.【答案】Dear Henry,How s everything going? Next weekend my classmates will hold an activity against phubbers in the street. I writing to invite you to take part

17、 in it.The mobile phone has brought us much convenience. However, more and more phubbers, especially young people, can be seen everywhere, who never care about what happens around. Obviously, it can be harmful to their physical health and safety. Therefore, let s work together to call on everyone to

18、 pay more attention to this and hold their headsup in the street.An early reply about your final decision will be highly appreciated. If you are willing, letat 8 o clock next Sunday morning.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本篇書面表達(dá)是應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封書信。第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本文要求寫一封邀請信，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時。第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：phubber（低頭族），convenienc