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1、SAT 寫作講義SAT ESSAY WRITINGDaniel LeeBeijing New Oriental Schoolernational Tests Training Program DepartmentAim:Effective writing for SAT essay style winticipation of a high scoreObjectives:The major objectives of the training program are to help students:Paving the aesthetic way towards English langu

2、agesessing basic skills for writing expressive sentenUsing sparkling sentenin a mastery wayRealizing the way to open a topicEnhancing students ability to use specific reasons and examples to support the idea of the essay;Develostudents critical thinkingMastering the writing pros in a fluent wayRequi

3、red Materials:The Offil SAT Study GuideProgram structure and content:Studying Plan:內(nèi)容任務(wù)效果第一節(jié)課寫作必備語言技巧一合理的組織句子寫出句子第二節(jié)課寫作必備語言技巧二漂亮的組織句子寫好句子第三節(jié)課范文分析，思路整理了解怎么寫，怎樣組織文章了解寫作結(jié)構(gòu)第四節(jié)課經(jīng)典句型一實戰(zhàn)練習(xí)，分析點(diǎn)評怎樣分析題目文章構(gòu)建第五節(jié)課經(jīng)典句型二實戰(zhàn)練習(xí)，分析點(diǎn)評熟悉寫作過程，使用優(yōu)美詞句熟悉文章構(gòu)建第六節(jié)課經(jīng)典句型三實戰(zhàn)練習(xí)，分析點(diǎn)評自在寫作，好句不斷，學(xué)會升華心熟手快第七節(jié)課實戰(zhàn)練習(xí)，分析點(diǎn)評信心寫作，樂在其中恰似庖丁解牛第八節(jié)

4、課實戰(zhàn)練習(xí)，分析點(diǎn)評得心應(yīng)手，囑托有備無患，胸有成竹WritingroductionThe Essay Writing Task2.5%format of the SAT essay writing2.5%AssessmentysisThe pavement lead to a high score5%Writing TaskSentenceanization12.5%Highlights in writing12.5%Assertionysis10%Topicysis5%Writing Sampleysis10%Writing pros20%Practice25%目錄SAT 寫作必備語言技巧

5、 4 10常用經(jīng)典句型寫作語言的整體規(guī)劃 16SAT 寫作思路整理 18 29一些常見問題的思路提點(diǎn)- 31庫心理描寫補(bǔ)充 5760經(jīng)論小站SAT 寫作必備語言技巧一，時態(tài)的正確搭配使用Before I to school, I had my breakfast.After I to school, I had my breakfast.A, have goneC, wentB, had goneD, would go時間軸Ving 的功能百煉成鋼：At this time tomorrow over the.FlyByof last year, another new gymnasium i

6、n Beijing.CompleteTravelThe reporter saidt the UFO east to west when he saw it. I dropped in at your house at about ten last night, but you werent in. I regular exercises at the club.DoThe house belongs to my aunt but she here any more.liveJohn, a friend of mine, who got married only lastwedding.Exp

7、ectk, spent $3,000 moren he for theI along the street looking for a place to park when the accident gooccurI in Lonlivefor many years，but Ive never regretted my final decito move back to China.I have to go to work by taxi because my car at the garage.RepairEliza remembers everything exactly as if it

8、 yesterday.HappenAfter I at a village inn, I looked for my bag.ArriveI had left it on a chair beside the door and now it there!Be As I it, the inn-keeper came in.look forDid you have a good meal? he asked.Yes,nk you, I answered, but I cant pay the bill. I my bag.Not getThe inn-keeper sd and immediay

9、 went out.In a few minutes he returned with my bag and gave it back to me.Im very sorry, he said My dog ito the garden. He often this. Take do二，縮略修辭第一紀(jì)He looked at his watch.He sawt it was one oclock.He looked at his watch and he sawt it was one oclock.When he looked at his watch, he sawt it was one

10、 oclock.Looking at his watch，he sawt it was one oclock.練習(xí) He standshe garden. He watches children play.Lily has told us the truth. Lily feels relaxed.Tom had hadch. Tom went to bed to have a nap.He stayedhe house all day. He musve been bored.I will go to Lon. I will begin a new life.小結(jié)：第二紀(jì)The vicar

11、was armed witorch.The vicar went upo the clock tower to see what was going on.The vicar was armed witorch and he went upo the clock tower to see what was going on.After the vicar was armed witorch, he went upo the clock tower to see what was going on.Being armed witorch, the vicar went upo the clock

12、 tower to see what was going on.Armed witorch, the vicar went upo the clock tower to see what was going on.練習(xí)：I rushed out the house. I felt horrified.TheTheler lookeeagerly.ler was anxious to see if his fellow-actor hadast learnt his lines.You will arrive at your destination.You will be fresh and u

13、ncrumpled.I am asked to take the task.I bego collect relevant information fort.I am a student.I study in NOS.小結(jié)：第三紀(jì)I felt cold and lonely. I went downstairs.I sat in front of theeviI pretended to read.One night, however, feeling cold and lonely, I went downstairs and sat in front of theread.eviprete

14、nding toI opened the cupboard door I stood in front of itI was petrified.心路歷程：Daniel 的寄語：三，復(fù)雜定語從句第一紀(jì)Tom is a professor.Tom teacheshe Cambridge.Tom is a professor who teacheshe Cambridge.I will go to Paris.My mother lives in Paris.I will go to Paris in whiy mother lives.I have a dog.The dogs name is

15、YY.I have a dog whose name is YY.第一次用法小結(jié)：幾個小規(guī)定：試一試：Bats locate flying insects.They feeinsects.We have only to turn tot extraordinary discovery of echo-location in bats to see a case.The voice plays a strictly utilitarian rolehe case.This echo-location in bats is often compared with radar.The princip

16、le of radar is similar.第二紀(jì)I will go to Paris. My mother lives in Paris.I will go to Paris in whiy mother lives.I will go to Paris where my mother lives.I am expecting next Friday.The sports meeting will be helnext Friday.I am expecting next Friday on which the sports meeting will be held.I am expect

17、ing next Friday when the sports meeting will be held.第二次用法小結(jié)：幾個提示：從句開花：They support the cables from which the bridge has been suspended.The most valuable find of all was the ships log book, parts of which it was stillsible to read.But they suddenly became the parents of qutheir lives.uplets, four gi

18、rls and a boy, an event which radically changed四，虛擬及倒裝用法：If I were a bird, I would flyhe blue sky.如果我是一只小鳥，我愿意在藍(lán)天飛翔。（現(xiàn)在，意愿）If you had money, you should help him.如果你有錢，你會幫助他的。（現(xiàn)在，責(zé)任）If she had knownt earr,d nove married Tom.如果她在知道那件事，他就不會他了。（已經(jīng)嫁了，意愿）If Lily had been a little more considerate, her hus

19、band might nove divorced her.如果 Lily 多體貼一點(diǎn)，他老公就不會和她離婚了。（已經(jīng)離了，推測）虛擬倒裝：If I were a bird, I would flyhe blue sky.If you had money, you should help him.If she had knownt earr,d nove married Tom.If Lily had been a little more considerate, her husband might nove divorced her.小結(jié)：虛擬開花：If 從句主句對現(xiàn)在事實的虛擬were/di

20、dwould do/be對過去事實的虛擬hade/beenwould havee/been常用經(jīng)典句型Highlights開花句型Most of us have formed an unrealistic picture of life on a desert island.Whether we find a joke funny or not largely depends on where we have been brought up.The sense of humor is mysteriously bound up with national characteristics.Thi

21、rteen is not as good as one but its bettern nothing.theres nothing 1 can do about it.These days, people who do manual work often receive far more moneyn clerks who work in offi.Such is human nature,t a great many people are often willing to sacrifice highay for the privilege ofing white collar worke

22、rs.This can give rise to curious situations, as it didEllesmere Corporation.he case of Alfred Bloggs who worked as a dustman for theCity born and city bred, I have always regarded the country as something you look at through a train window,or something you occaally visit during thek-end.Despite the

23、new tunnel, there are still a few people who rashly attempt to cross the Pass on foot.One of the thingst fascinates us most aboats is the popular beft they have none lives.The more you study English, the more you love it.Even by modern standards, the 46,000 ton Titanic was a colossal ship.Below, the

24、 captain realized to his horrort the Titanic was sinking raly.You either starve to death or live like Robinson Crusoe, waiting for a boat which never comes.There was a time when the owners of shop and businesses in Chicago had to pay large sums of money togangsters in return for protectionPeople wou

25、ld rathay large sums of moneyn have their life work destroyed by gangsters.He soon made a name for himself and came to be known to the Italians as Giovanni Acuto.Father, of course, provides a regular supply of pocket-money, but uncles and aunts are always a source ofextrae.Though Verrazano is by no

26、means considered to be a great explorer, his name will probably remain immortal,for on November 21st, 1964, the greatest bridgehe world was named after him.In spite of this, some people-including myself-were surprised by a recent exhibition of modern sculpture.These Peculiar forms not only seemed de

27、signed to shock people emotionally, but to give them electric shocksas well !He was adored by rich and poor alike.Though he was technically a prize-fighter, Mendoza did much to change crude prize-fightinghe brought science to the game.o a sport, forany ways, this is unfortunate for the poor actors w

28、ho are required to go on repeating the same linesnight after night.The sad truth ist most of us have been brought up to eat certain foods and we stick to them all our lives.No creature has received more praise and abusen the common garden snail.It is all very well for such things to occur in fiction

29、.Instead ofing a doctor, however, he became a sucsful writer of detective stories.The sudden movement of the door made it sway slightly and it gave me the imprest it was about toleap oume.No one can avoid being influenced by advertisements.I had no sooner got off the shipn I was assailed by a man wh

30、o wanted to sell me a diamond ring.The man dra little moren was good for him.Reward or punishment are out quite independent ofhumanerference.Is been saidt everyone lives by selling something.he light of this sement, teachers live by selling knowledge, philosophers by selling wisdom and priestsby sel

31、ling spiritual comfort.Though it may besible to measure the value of material goodserms of money, it is extremely difficultto estimate the true value of the serviwhich people perform for us.There are times when we would willingly give everythingossess to save our lives, yet we might grudgepaying a s

32、urgeon a high fee for offering us precisely this service.He has deliberay chosen to lead the life he leads, fully aware of the consequenAntique shops exertculiar fascination on a great many people.No one discovers a rarity by chance.A truly dedicated searcher for art treasures musworth of some- thin

33、g when he sees it.ve patience, and above all, the ability to recognize theThe truth ist when mistakes occur, they are more likely to be oursn theirs.I noted with satisfactiont there was an express trao Wesven.I could not help noticingt a great many local people got on as well.At the time, this did n

34、ot strike me as odd.It suddenly dawnemet this express was not roaring down the line at ninetyan hour.There was a note of triumphy voice when I told himt it was there in black and white.Is never been explained why university students seem to enjoy practical jokes moren anyone else.Even he still lives

35、 under the illut country life is somehow superior to town life.Nothing can be compared with thegling on the trees and pastures.cock crow, theing of birds at dawn, the sight of the rising sunOn the other hand, your stomach would turn at the idea of frying pooes in animal fat- the normallyaccepted pra

36、cticeany northern countries.There are countless people who, ever since their early years, have learned to assote snails with food.My friend fails to mention the long and friendless wer eveningsHe says nothing about the poor selection of goodshe shops, or about those unfortunate people who haveto tra

37、vel from the country to the city every day to get to work.Why people are prepared to tolerate a four hour journey each day for the dubious privilege oflivinghe country isme.If you can do without the festoral pleasures of the country, you will find the city can provide you withthe bestt life can offe

38、r.Few things could be more impressiven the peacet descends on deserted city streets atk-endswhen the thousandst travel to work everyday are tucked awayheir homeshe country.Is always been a mystery to me why city dwellers, who apprete all these things, obstinay pretendt they would prefer to livehe co

39、untry.Perhaps it is the desire for solitude or the chance of making an unexpected discoverythe depths of the earth.t lures men down toIt is imsible to give a satisfactory explanation for a pot-holers motives.For him, caves have the same peculiar fascination which high mountains have for the climber.

40、Since its discovery, ise a sort of potholers Everest.Aeroplanes have the repuion of being dangerous and even hardened travelers areimidated by them.They also have the grave disadvantage of being the most expensive form of transport.But nothing can match them for speed and comfort.Travelling at a hei

41、ght of 30,000 feet, far above the clouds, and at over 500experience.an hour is an exhilaratingIt is a question of pride as much as anything else.his much-travelled world, there are still thousands of plawhich are inacsible to tourists.These attracted many visitors for they were not only of great arc

42、hitecturalerest, but contained a largenumber of beautifully pfrescoes as well.There was no doubtt we weree visitors.Duringt time she so gained my aunts confidence,t she was put in charge of the domestic staff.The New Year is a time for resolutions.If we remain inveterate smokers, it is only because

43、we have so often experienced the frustrationfrom failure.t resultsHow Harry camerelating.o thesesof this outlandish stuff makes aneresting story which he is fond ofHarry does not need to be prompted to explain how he bought his precious bottle of mud.The Swedes were theact over-zealouslyto recognize

44、t public offils like civil servants, collectors can make mistakes orhe beft they are serving the public.No matter how much we like honey, or how much we have read about the uncanny sense of direction whichbeessess, we have a horror of being stung.Most of our fears are unreasonable, but they are imsi

45、ble to erase.Who has not stood in awe at the sight of a shome an enormous dead beetle ?ouncing on a fly, or a column of ants triumphantly bearingPeople tend to amasssess, sometimes without being aware ofng so.Collecting, by occupying spare time so constructively, makesrson contented, with no time fo

46、r boredom.The ovunctual can be as much a trial to others as the unpunctual.常用替換Result ingive rise toBe vebe convinced of/ Berise to / drop toFeel sound seemtProve to be/ turn out to beThinkI am awaretI am conscioust寫作語言的整體規(guī)劃句子要求generosity of the language切忌空談 ,多描寫形容詞的作用：總結(jié)，提示，但是只能在充分的描寫后作總結(jié)或在展開描述前做提示

47、。副詞或者狀語的作用只是給句子勾勒出一個大致的環(huán)境，或者是強(qiáng)調(diào)一下形容詞，沒有任何表現(xiàn)實在內(nèi)容的作用?？匆豢矗琒he is a smart：.She is a fantastically smart.ll working schedules well-planed.ll working schedules well-planned to avoid any waste of the precious time.She is a smartShe is a smartwiwiShe is a beautiful girl.y opinion, she is a beautiful girl.Ge

48、nerally speaking, she is a beautiful girl.She is a beautiful girl with moist eyes, cheery-like lips and rosy cheeks.She is a beautiful girl with moist eyes always talking, cherry-like lips clinging and rosy cheeks so inviting.Richness in sentence一個寫句子的表標(biāo)桿The reader felt horrified when he knewt thee

49、had killed her 5 husbands.The readers hair stands on end when he readshe final pages of the novelt thee,a dear old lady who had always been so kind to everybody, had, in her youth, poisoned every one of her fivehusbands.問題所在：解決方式：總結(jié)：信心百倍寫句子：I felt sad when I knew the Wenchuan earthquake killed many

50、people in Sichuan province.I felppy when I sawt the Yale university decided to recruit me as a student.SAT 寫作思路整理卷面文字This essay gives you an opportunity to show how effectively you can develop and expreeas. You should,therefore, take care to develop your poprecisely.of view, present your ideas logic

51、ally and clearly, and use languageYour essay must be written on the lines provideyour answer sheeryou will receive no othr onwhich to write. You will have enough space if you write on every line, avoid wide margins, and keep yourhandwriting to a reasonable size. Remembert people who are not familiar

52、 with your handwriting willt what you are writing is legible to those readers.read what you write, try to write or prsoImportant reminders:ncil is required for the essay. An essay written in ink will receive a score of zero.Do not write your essay in your test book. You will receive credit only for

53、what you write on your answer sheet.An off-topisay will receive a score of zero.If your essay does not reflect your original and individual work, your test scores may be canceled.You have twenty-five minutes to write an essay on the topic assigned below.Think carefully about the ie presentedhe follo

54、wing exct and the assignment below.s and achievement, they mustManys bevet to move up the ladder of sucfet the past, repress it, and relinquish it. But others have just the opite view. Theysee old memories as a chance to reckon with the past andegrate past and present.Adapted from Sara Lawrence-Ligh

55、tfoot, Ive Known Rivers: Lives of Loss and LiberationAssignment: Do memories hinder or help peopleheir effort to learn from the past and succeedhe present? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your poof view on this ie.Support youror observations.ition with reasoning and examples taken from

56、your reading, studies, experience,Score: 6EssayWithout our past, our future would be a tortuous path leading to nowhere. In order to move upthe ladder of sucs and achievement we must come to terms with our past andegrate itoour future. Even ifhe past we made mistakes, this will only make wiseople ou

57、t of us andguide us to where we are suped to be.This past year, I was auditioning for the fall play, Cat on a Hot Tin Roof. To my detriment Ithought it would be a good idea to watch the movie in order to prepare. For two hours I studiedElizabeth Taylors mannerisms, attitude, and diction, hoauditione

58、d for the part of Maggie feeling perfectly confidentI could mimic herformance. Iy portrayal of Elizabeth Taylor,however, I was unawaret my director saw exactly what I had been thinking. Unfortunay,I didnt get the part, and my director told met he needed to see Maggie from my, noizabeth Taylors.I lea

59、rned from this experience, and promised myself I would not try to imie another actress,in order to create my character. Perservering, I was anxious to audition for the wlay justtwo months later. The play was Neil Simons Rumors, and would get the opportunity to play Chris, a sarcastic yet witty role,

60、 which would be my final performance in high school. In order to develop my character, I planned out her life just as I thought it should be, gave her the voiceI thought was right, and the rest of her character unfolded beautifully from there. My director toldme after theshowt Rumors was the best wo