2015年英語中考作文預(yù)測

1、2015年英語中考作文預(yù)測評分原則： 1.本題總分為15分，按五個檔次給分。評分時，先根據(jù)文章寫作要點、應(yīng)用詞匯、語法結(jié)構(gòu) 的準確性及上下文的連貫性初步確定其所屬檔次，然后根據(jù)拼寫、書寫和詞數(shù)等情況調(diào)整 檔次，最后給分。單詞拼寫英、美用法均可，書寫要規(guī)范，嚴重影響交際的，將分數(shù)降低一個檔次。詞數(shù)少于80的，從總分中減去2分。第一檔:（1513分）能寫出全部要點，表達清楚，內(nèi)容完整豐富。使用多種語法結(jié)構(gòu)和豐富的詞匯，語言通 順，語意連貫，具有邏輯性。允許有個別語言錯誤。第二檔:（1210分）能寫出全部要點，表達基本清楚，內(nèi)容較完整。語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯基本滿足文章需要。語 言基本通順，語意基本連貫。有

2、少量語言錯誤，但不影響整體理解。第三檔：（97分）能寫出大部分要點，語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯錯誤較多，但尚能達意。第四檔：（64分)與題目有關(guān)的內(nèi)容不多，不能表達出基本要點。只是簡單拼湊，未達到寫作要求。 第五檔：（30分）只寫出一、二個句子，語言錯誤多。 0分只字未寫。J (2013 內(nèi)蒙古包頭) 初中階段的學(xué)習和生活即將結(jié)束，你的老師陪伴你度過了三年的校園生活?；仡櫰渲械脑S多點點滴滴，久久不能忘記。請你用英文給你的某一位教師寫一封信，和他（她）說說感激的心里話。要點提示： 教師表現(xiàn)1. 工作努力，認真；2.教學(xué)耐心，待人友好。留存記憶1.嚴格要求也關(guān)愛學(xué)生；2.師生相處和睦；3.給予學(xué)習上和生活上的

3、幫助；4.學(xué)生學(xué)業(yè)取得了進步。要求：1.內(nèi)容包括所有提示的要點，意思完整，語言規(guī)范。 2.可適當發(fā)揮，增加細節(jié)，使語句連貫通暢。 3.文中不要出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名及校名。 4.80100詞左右，信的首尾已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear my teacher. Leaving youlovely junior school life, I have so many words from my heart to say. Thank you again for what youve done for us! All the best to you!Yours,參考答案：Dear my teacher.

4、Leaving youlovely junior school life, I have so many words from my heart to say. Since you became my English teacher three years ago, youve always been working hard. I wont forget how interesting your lessons are and how friendly you are. Youre strict with us in study and also take care of us kindly

5、. All my classmates agree we get on well with each other for these years. I still remember when I failed in an exam, you encouraged me to keep trying. When I had-trouble in life, you told me to be brave.Because of your help, many students, including me, are more and more interested in English and ma

6、ke much progress, too. You have given me so much.Thank you again for what youve done for us! All the best to you!一、書面表達（本題滿分15分）假設(shè)某中學(xué)生英文報開展關(guān)于高中生活的征文活動，請你根據(jù)下表所提示的要點，以My ideal senior high school 為題，用英語為該報寫一篇短文，簡述理想中的高中生活情形，以及你對高中學(xué)習生活的展望。理想高中校園環(huán)境優(yōu)美老師耐心教導(dǎo)同學(xué)樂于分享學(xué)習輕松有趣課外活動豐富我的展望（請考生結(jié)合自身實際，自擬至少兩點內(nèi)容）注意：1. 表

7、達中必須包括所給要點，可以適當發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。2. 詞數(shù)90左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。3. 表達中請勿提及真實校名及姓名。My ideal senior high schoolWe will be senior high school students soon. In my ideal senior high school, 參考答案My ideal senior high schoolWe will be senior high school students soon. In my ideal senior high school, there are many green

8、trees and beautiful flowers. The teachers there are patient enough to explain difficult problems to us, while the students are willing to share their joy and worries with each other. We have fewer subjects and less homework. After school we can take part in all kinds of activities. In this way, our

9、new school life will be full of fun.I hope to make any friends and enjoy my school life in senior high school. I also hope I can make great progress in my study.E (2013 安徽) 今天是父親節(jié)。假定你是李華，請給你的美國筆友John寫一封電子郵件，談?wù)勀銓⑷绾闻c父親一起度過這個特別的日子。要點如下： 表達你與父親間的情感； 為父親制作一張卡片；幫助父親做點事； 陪父親散步等。注意： 1. 詞數(shù)80-100； 2. 請不要逐句翻譯，

10、可適當發(fā)揮； 3. 郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear John, Its Fathers Day today. Its a special day, isnt it？_ Whats your plan for Fathers Day? Im looking forward to hear from you. Yours, Dear John,Its Fathers day today. Its a special day, isnt it?I think we should do something to show our love for our father on thi

11、s special day. My father and I are good friends. Whenever I meet with difficulties, he is always there, ready to help me. Today I will make a beautiful card for him, with my thanks and best wishes on it. Then I will help him wash the car this afternoon and cook this favorite food in the evening. Bes

12、ides, Ill take a walk with him after dinner and then play chess with him, for he likes it very much. Im sure hell be very happy.Whats your plan for Fathers Day? Im looking forward to hearing from you. Yours,Li Hua二 ,書面表達（共1題，計15分）父愛如山！假設(shè)父親節(jié)即將來臨，請你借此機會給你父親寫封信，和他談?wù)勑睦镌挕?寫作要點： 1.父親辛勤工作，讓我受到更好的教育，過上更好的生活

13、； 2.父親在學(xué)習上對我嚴格要求;考試失利時，他鼓勵我不放棄；遇到困難時，父親鼓勵我笑對生活；表達對父親的感謝和祝福。溫馨提示：1. 短文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含所提示的要點，語言流暢，不要逐字翻譯，可適當發(fā)揮；2. 短文字數(shù)不少于80詞，短文開頭和結(jié)尾已替你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)與考生本人相關(guān)的真實的人名、校名和地名。Dear father,Fathers Day is coming, Id like to say something to you. _Yours Li Hua參考答案：Dear father,Fathers Day is coming. I，d like to say s

14、omething to you.You always work hard so that I can receive a better education and live a better life. You are strict with me in my study and help me with my homework. When I failed an exam, you encouraged me to be confident and keep trying. When I had trouble in life, you always told me to be brave

15、and smile at life.You have given me so much, not only in my study but also in my life. Thank you for your deep love. Thank you for all that you have done for me. I love you! I hope you will be healthy and happy forever!Happy Fathers Day!Yours, Li Hua三.書面表達 （15分） 在我們的生活中，每個人都有很多難忘的經(jīng)歷，請你以“A/ An Unforg

16、ettable Experience為題，寫一篇80字左右的短文。Unforgettable: 難忘的An Unforgettable Experience 四.書面表達（滿分15分）假如你是李明，你的美國筆友Bill來信詢問你的暑假計劃。請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給他回一封信，介紹你的暑假活動安排。內(nèi)容：1.去看望鄉(xiāng)下的爺爺奶奶，幫他們做點事； 2.去旅游，開闊視野； 3.學(xué)習，為高中做準備； 4. 要求：1語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范； 2必須包含所有內(nèi)容，并做適當拓展； 3詞數(shù)70左右。（文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）參考詞匯：visit, countryside, travel,

17、 open up ones eyes, get ready for參考答案：Dear Bill,Thanks for your letter. Im very glad that youll have much fun in your vacation.In my summer holidays, I want to visit my country s grandparents, I have not met them for three years, I miss them so much. And I want to do some housework for them.I also w

18、ant to go to some place to travel, to see growth. I want to go to Shanghai, understand the metropolitan life and the appearance of the cit，I want to go to Beijing to see the Great Wall and the Imperial Palace。I have to review for the high school knowledge, to lay a good foundationIwouldliketoimprove

19、myEnglishpronunciation. IwanttoimprovemyEnglish. Id like to see more of the astronomical books。 Because I think in a formation of Amateur Astronomers Association. Looking for your reply.Please write soon.Yours, Li Ming五.書面表達（滿分15分）假如你們學(xué)校正在開展研究性學(xué)習(exploring learning strategies)，請你根據(jù)下表提供的信息，寫一篇短文，讓更多的

20、學(xué)生了解你校開展研究性學(xué)習的一些情況。注意：1. 短文應(yīng)包括表格提示的所有內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮； 2. 詞數(shù)：100詞左右。開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。過去現(xiàn)在課堂老師講解知識點，學(xué)生聽講，記筆記，沒有足夠的時間獨立思考問題。老師提出問題，學(xué)生相互討論，并學(xué)會與他人合作,從而找出解決問題的方法。課后做大量的作業(yè)。豐富多彩的課外活動，如：讀自己喜歡的書，去圖書館或上網(wǎng)查資料等。個人感受Great changes have taken place in our studies since our school began to carry on exploring learning strategie

21、s. _參考答案：Great changes have taken place in our studies since our school began to carry on exploring learning strategies. In the past, teachers kept on explaining the language points in class. We students just listened and took some notes. So we didnt have enough time to think about problems by ourse

22、lves /independently. We had to do much homework after class. But now teachers show the problems to us first, then we discuss them for a while in pairs or groups. We try to find out the ways of solving problems, through which weve learnt how to work/ study/ cooperate with others. After class, we can

23、have different activities. For example, we can read books we like, go to the library or surf the Internet for useful information and so on.In a word, now we are the owners of our study and were happy. 六、書面表達(15分)母愛情深，母愛無價；學(xué)會感恩，學(xué)會回報。某英語網(wǎng)站舉辦以“My mother”為題的英語征文活動。請你根據(jù)下列思維導(dǎo)圖提供的信息，寫一篇短文，介紹自己的母親和你們的真情故事。提

24、示：1.短文應(yīng)包括導(dǎo)圖中的全部信息，條理清楚，行文連貫，段落分明;2.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名和地名。3.詞數(shù)不少于80，開頭已給出:不計人總詞數(shù)。 My motherWe need love. We also need to love. The person I love most is my mother._參考答案：My motherWe need love. We also need to love. The person I love most is my mother. The person I love most is my mother. My mother is 41 yea

25、rs old. She is of medium build with long black hair. Shi is quiet. She is a history teacher in a middle school. She likes dancing. She can cook delicious food.She did a lot for me when I was a child. She bought whatever I needed for my study, even though she didnt have much money. She sent me from p

26、iano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend. She cooked delicious and healthy food for me.When I grow up, I will do what I can to make my mother happy. I will find a good job after I graduate from college. Ill save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young. Ill take her to wo

27、nderful sights around China. Most importantly, I will stay with her when I have free time. Thats what she wants most, I think.評分意見：（一）內(nèi)容要點 1. Introduction = 1 * GB3 age = 2 * GB3 job = 3 * GB3 look = 4 * GB3 ability = 5 * GB3 hobby 2. What she did for you 3. What you will do for her（二）建議： 3個內(nèi)容要點，每個要

28、點各5分。第一個內(nèi)容的要點的5點信息不必按所給次序表達，每點信息各1分。七、書面表達(共1題，滿分15分)假設(shè)你是李明，本周班會上， 請將代表老師用英語通知學(xué)生參加一次敬老院的公益活動。 要點如下： 星期天早上8：30在校門口集合，乘公共汽車前往；給老人們贈送班級禮物；打掃衛(wèi)生，整理房間；唱歌、跳舞、講故事、聊天，給老人們帶去快樂；活動很有意放，希望積極參與；注意：詞數(shù)80， 書面表達的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。 參考詞匯：1. chat v. 聊天 2. meaningful adj. 有意義的 3. cheer up 使高興Fellow students,We will pay a vis

29、it to the old peoples home this Sunday. Well have to meet at the school gate at 8:30 on Sunday morning and then go there by bus. There we will do some cleaning and tidy the rooms. After that we will have many activities, such as singing, dancing, telling stories and chatting to cheer up the old. Bef

30、ore we leave, well give our presents to them.I hope all of us can take an active part. Through the meaningful activity, we can learn to care for the old.七. 書面表達(共15分)假如你是Li Ping，請根據(jù)下面的表格中提供的信息，給你的新朋友Jack寫一封電子郵件，介紹你的業(yè)余愛好（flying and collecting kites）。注意：表達必須體現(xiàn)所提供的全部細節(jié)信息，并可在此基礎(chǔ)上適當發(fā)揮：字數(shù)為80個詞左右。HobbiesIt

31、emsDetailsFlying kitesBeginning timeten years agoFlying placeparkCollecting kitesBeginning timefive years agoThe amountnearly 50Sizesbig, smallShapesanimalsStoring placemy own bedroom, my parents bedroomF (2013 吉林)健康是生活的基石。尤其是青少年的健康，更加受到家庭、學(xué)校乃至全社會的關(guān)注。假如你是你們學(xué)校的健康達人，應(yīng)校英語俱樂部的邀請，你將給全體成員做一個“The importance and secrets of keeping healthy”的報告。請參考下面的提示，完成報告。(10分)要求：1. 80詞左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)內(nèi)。2. 所給提示僅供參考，需適當發(fā)揮。 3. 文中不得使用真實的校名與姓名。提示：