高中英語 B3U5-第六課時- Writing 課件

1、2021春季深圳市線上課程高一英語深圳市教育科學(xué)研究院教學(xué)材料：外研版高中英語新教材必修第三冊教學(xué)內(nèi)容：Unit 5 What an adventure第六課時：Writing執(zhí)教人：張寶君/深圳市西鄉(xiāng)中學(xué)Apr.21.2021Book3 Unit 5 What an adventureWriting about an adventure storyBy the end of the class, students will be able to1. get the main idea and information of the poster “Undersea Adventure”;2.

2、learn the elements and the structure of writing about an adventure story;3. write about an adventure story with the useful expressionsObjectivesHave you had a diving experience?What do you think of it?What a fantastic adventure!1. Where are the divers going on this adventure?2. What are they going t

3、o do and see during the trip?A poster about an undersea adventure near the Farne islands.(英國的法恩群島)Answer the questions:Where are the divers going on this adventure? The water around the Farne Islands.What are they going to do and see during the trip? They will visit a shipwreck, the 6,810- ton steam

4、er Somali, and swim with Farnes most lovely residents, the thousands of grey seals.Which of the experiencesappeals to you most and why?SCENIC DIVINGWRECK DIVINGImagine you have been on this adventure. Make notes about your experience.What did you do?(Actions)What did you see?(Views）How did you feel?

5、（Feelings）Now write a diary about your adventure（5mins).went and explored the magic scenic diving around the Farne Islands.thousands of grey sealsscared at first, amazed later; a bit tired, unforgettable experienceSat., Jun.6, clear I had always been _ diving in the sea. Today I, together with _, we

6、nt diving around the Farne islands for the first time in my life, which became the most exciting thing that I have ever done. I preferred the _ because it was less _ and I love sea animals.With my instructor _, we managed to reach the spot, where we came across _ that live on the island all year. At

7、 first I was so _fearing they would attack me, but the instructor told me they were _. One of the seals just touched me lightly with its body, as if it wanted to _. The world here was so quiet as if time had stopped. Finally, I had to leave when my instructor gestured for me to go up. Although it wa

8、s a bit _, I still think it was _.Lets fill in the blanks in Annes diary.Sat., Jun.6, clear I had always been _ diving in the sea. Today I, together with _, went diving around the Farne islands for the first time in my life, which became the most exciting thing that I have ever done. I preferred the

9、 _ because it was less _ and I love sea animals.With my instructor _, we managed to reach the spot, where we came across _ that live on the island all year. At first I was so _fearing they would attack me, but the instructor told me they were _. One of the seals just touched me lightly with its body

10、, as if it wanted to _. The world here was so quiet as if time had stopped. Finally, I had to leave when my instructor gestured for me to go up. Although it was a bit _, I still think it was _.Lets fill in the blanks in Annes diary.looking forward tomy parentsscenic divingchallengingguidingthousands

11、 of great sealsscaredharmlesshug metiredthe most unforgettable experienceSat., Jun.6, clear I had always been looking forward to diving in the sea. Today I, together with my parents, went diving around the Farne islands for the first time in my life, which became the most exciting thing that I have

12、ever done. I preferred the scenic diving because it was less challenging and I love sea animals.With my instructor guiding, we managed to reach the spot, where we came across thousands of grey seals that live on the island all year. At first I was so scared fearing they would attack me, but the inst

13、ructor told me they were harmless. One of the seals just touched me lightly with its body, as if it wanted to hug me. The world here was so quiet as if time had stopped. Finally, I had to leave when my instructor gestured for me to go up. Although it was a bit tired, I still think it was the most un

14、forgettable experience.Lets have a look at Annes diary.Diary; Past simple tense；First personIntroductionBodyConclusion 明確體裁話題 確定時態(tài)人稱 布局文章架構(gòu) 列出核心要點(diǎn) How to write about an adventure story?故事類記敘文/日記一般過去時為主；第一人稱為主4W+1H（When, Where, Who,What &How)三段式Elements of an adventure storyWhen did the adventure tak

15、e place?Where did the adventure take place?Who went on the adventure?What happened?(What did you see and do?)How did you feel?Structure of an adventure story StructureIntroduction(a brief introduction of the adventure) Body ( detailed process, including actions and views)Conclusion(personal feelings

16、 and comment)Today I took part in an adventurous/amazing/fantastic trip held/organized by ., which left a deep impression on me. Last week, I, together with., went to . by bus/by train/by plane. As I was eager to know about ., I went on an adventure.增分佳句：段首On the way to./After . hours riding, we .I

17、was doing. when .What surprised/ attracted/ delighted us most was that.I felt so excited to see so many. At first, we felt frightened because for most of us, it was the first time that we.Under the guidance of the tourist guide, we gradually adapted ourselves to . and eventually.After that, we went

18、diving, experiencing the beauty of.增分佳句：段中Tired as we were, I learned that.Ill never forget the day when.From then on, I was becoming more courageous. We had a good time/enjoyed ourselvesThis was a real life-changing experience that I would never forget. 增分佳句：段尾 假定你是李華，你上周參加了某旅行社組織的戶外探險旅游活動。請用英語寫一篇周

19、記，記述這次活動的過程，內(nèi)容包括：1.時間；2.行程安排(路線：絲綢之路之西安吐魯番段；項(xiàng)目：樓蘭古城探秘、原始森林探險、徒步穿越沙漠等)；3.你的感受。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：絲綢之路Silk Road 吐魯番Turpan 原始森林virgin forest審題謀篇體裁話題時態(tài)人稱記敘文戶外探險經(jīng)歷一般過去時第一人稱寫作要素WhenWhereWhoWhatHowlast weekalong the silk road from Xian to TurpanI and some touristscrossed the desert, explor

20、ed the virgin forest and Loulan City(your personal feelings)an adventurous outdoor trip 1. 戶外探險旅游活動 2. 旅行社 3. 樓蘭古城探秘4. 穿越沙漠5. 使人印象深刻6. 成就感7. 克服困難8. 對帶來積極的影響travel agency explore the mysteries of the ancient city Loulancross the desert leave a deep impression on/impress sb. deeplya sense of achieveme

21、ntovercome the difficultieshave a postive effect on/upon核心詞匯1.上周末，我和一些游客參加了由當(dāng)?shù)芈眯猩缃M織的戶外探險旅游活動?；顒勇肪€是沿著絲綢之路的西安-吐魯番段。2.在那之后，我們探險了原始森林，體驗(yàn)到了在森林中迷路以及突出重圍的興奮。3.這次探險旅行帶給我們的不僅一次體驗(yàn)探險刺激的機(jī)會，而且還有成就感。句子翻譯1.上周末，我和一些游客參加了由當(dāng)?shù)芈眯猩缃M織的戶外探險旅游活動?；顒勇肪€是沿著絲綢之路的西安-吐魯番段。(普通表達(dá))Last week, I and some tourists took part in an adven

22、turous outdoor trip. It was organized by the local travel agency. The route is along the silk road from Xian to Turpan. (高級表達(dá))Last week, I, together with some tourists, took part in an adventurous outdoor trip organized by the local travel agency along the silk road from Xian to Turpan. 句式升級2.在那之后，我

23、們探險了原始森林，體驗(yàn)到了在森林中迷路以及突出重圍的興奮。(普通表達(dá)) After that, we explored the virgin forest and experienced the panic of getting lost and the excitement of finding our way out of the forest. (高級表達(dá)) After that, we explored the virgin forest, experiencing the panic of getting lost and the excitement of finding our

24、way out of the forest. 3.這次探險旅行帶給我們的不僅一次體驗(yàn)探險刺激的機(jī)會，而且還有成就感。(普通表達(dá))The adventurous trip provided us an opportunity to experience the excitement of travelling and a sense of achievement.(高級表達(dá))What the adventurous trip provided us was not only the opportunity to experience the excitement of travelling bu

25、t also a sense of achievement .(高級表達(dá))Not only did the adventurous trip provide us the opportunity to experience the excitement of travelling, but also a sense of achievement. 假定你是李華，你上周參加了某旅行社組織的戶外探險旅游活動。請用英語寫一篇周記，記述這次活動的過程，內(nèi)容包括：1.時間；2.行程安排(路線：絲綢之路之西安吐魯番段；項(xiàng)目：樓蘭古城探秘、原始森林探險、徒步穿越沙漠等)；3.你的感受。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：絲綢