專四寫(xiě)作技巧之四邊便條寫(xiě)作市公開(kāi)課金獎(jiǎng)市賽課一等獎(jiǎng)?wù)n件

專四寫(xiě)作便條寫(xiě)作第1頁(yè)便條特點(diǎn)1.組成簡(jiǎn)單時(shí)間、對(duì)方稱呼、正文、結(jié)尾套語(yǔ)和署名第2頁(yè)便條特點(diǎn)2.文體適中非正式化甚至口語(yǔ)化第3頁(yè)便條特點(diǎn)3.內(nèi)容凝練Forexample:第4頁(yè)TuesFeb.11DearProf.Richards,(1)Iamsorry(2)Icouldn’tmakeour4o’clockappointment.(3)Prof.Sterne’slecturelastedalotlongerthanIhadexpected.(4)Icouldmeetyouinthedepartmentofficetomorrowat3p.m.,ifthatisconvenientforyou.(5)Ifnot,pleaseleaveanoteinmymailbox,#529,tomorrowmorning.(6)Thankyou.

Sincerelyyours,Chen第5頁(yè)便條特點(diǎn)4.規(guī)矩細(xì)微第6頁(yè)請(qǐng)求便條組成要件:請(qǐng)求理由陳說(shuō)請(qǐng)求行為請(qǐng)求可能實(shí)現(xiàn)方式致謝第7頁(yè)March13DearProfessorLiu,

Iamveryhappytohavehadattendedyourlectureon“LinguisticsandLanguageTeaching”lastFriday.Yourlectureisquiteinstructivetomypresentthesiswriting.Therefore,IhopeIcangetyourfurtherhelp.Iamwonderingifitispossibleforyoutogivemealistofreferencebooksonthistopictothefollowinge-mailaddress:yrita886@.Heartfeltthanks.Sincerelyyours,Rita第8頁(yè)語(yǔ)言表示模式Pleasegivemeafewmoredays.MayIhavealookatyour…?WouldyoumindifI…?IwonderifIcould….Woulditbepossibletohave…?第9頁(yè)語(yǔ)言表示模式Domeafavor,willyou?Wouldyoudomeafavor?Can/couldyou…?Wouldyoubesokindasto…?CouldItroubleyouto…?Iwonderifyouwould…?Ifitisnottootroublesome,could/wouldyou…?Ihopethisrequestwillnottroubleyoutoomuch.第10頁(yè)語(yǔ)言表示模式Let’sdo….Iwantto….Iwishyoucould….Iwouldliketoaskyouto….Youaremakingabignoise.Ifeelabithungrynow.whattimeisit?第11頁(yè)Exercise上海外國(guó)語(yǔ)大學(xué)著名教授鄒申上周來(lái)你校做講座，你遲到了，耽擱了二分之一講座，也沒(méi)拿到講座講稿。不過(guò)這個(gè)講座對(duì)你很有幫助。請(qǐng)你給這位教授寫(xiě)張便條索要一份上次講座講稿。第12頁(yè)ReferenceMarch18DearProf.Zou,Iamveryhappytohavethechancetolistentoyourlectureon“AmericanLiterature”,butitisapitythatIwaslatethatdayduetoaminoraccidentonmywaytothelecture.Imissedthefirsthalfofthelectureandfailedtogetthehandout.YourlectureisreallyinstructiveformyEnglishstudy,soIamwonderingifitispossibleformetogetthehandout.Ifitispossible,wouldyoupleaseemailittotheaddress:zhang123@,orcallmeat////andIwillgotofetchit.Heartfeltthanks.第13頁(yè)邀請(qǐng)、約會(huì)便條組成要件第14頁(yè)Feb.11DearProfessorMa,

Wewouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldgiveusatalkon“TheSkillsforTEM-4Writing”

onthiscomingFriday,3p.m.to5p.m.Ifthissubjectdoesnotsuityouorthattimeisnotconvenientforyou,anyothersimilartopicandtimewouldalsobewelcome.Ifyouhaveanydecision,callmeatthecellphonenumber:….Thankyou.Respectfullyyours,MMChairmanofStudents’Union第15頁(yè)邀約便條附加組成要件邀約事由邀約行為約會(huì)可能方式及磋商邀約行為后續(xù)行為：致謝第16頁(yè)邀約便條語(yǔ)言表示特點(diǎn)Let’sgotothemovie.Shallwegotothemovieafterclass?Isitpossibleforustogotothemovieafterclass?Ifitdoesn’ttroubleyoumuch,shallwegotothemovieafterclass?第17頁(yè)Exercise你畢業(yè)論文碰到了很多專業(yè)問(wèn)題，你去請(qǐng)教指導(dǎo)老師傅老師，但他不在辦公室，寫(xiě)張便條和他預(yù)約一下。第18頁(yè)March25DearMr.Fu,ThesedaysIamverygloomybecauseImetmanytroublesinmythesiswriting.Idonotknowhowtodefinesomekeywordsofmystudy.SoIamwonderingwhetheryoucangivemesomeinstructions.Ifitdoesnottroubleyoutoomuch,shallwemeetatyourofficethisFridaymorningat9o’clock?Ifitisnotconvenientforyou,couldyoupleaseappointatimeandgivemeacallat…?Thankyou.Sincerelyyours,WangFang第19頁(yè)投訴、埋怨便條組成要件：投訴、埋怨行為投訴、埋怨內(nèi)容詳細(xì)描述要求填補(bǔ)或賠償對(duì)填補(bǔ)或賠償督促甚至威脅第20頁(yè)Mar.15DearManager,IamwritingtobringyourattentiontotheproblemIhavehadwithinformationavailabilitywithyourproduct.Ihavebeentryingtogetapersononthephone,butIfailedbytryingseveraldepartments.

Ihopeyouwilladdressthisproblemtomysatisfaction,

orIwillneverdobusinesswithyouagain.Iexpecttohearfromyousoon.MytelephonenumberiThankyou.Yours,JohnSmith第21頁(yè)投訴、埋怨便條慣用語(yǔ)言表示Iamwritingtoreporttheproblemswithyour…IamwritingtobringyourattentiontotheproblemsIhavehadwithyour…Iamwritingtocomplainabout…Iamsorry.Ican’tbear…anymore.第22頁(yè)投訴、埋怨便條慣用語(yǔ)言表示HereistheproblemIhavehad:Ihavebeentryingto…,but…第23頁(yè)投訴、埋怨便條慣用語(yǔ)言表示Ihopeyoucanaddressthisproblemsoon.Ihopeyouwilltakestepstorectifythissituationsoon.Wouldyouplease…?Itwouldbeverykindofyouto…第24頁(yè)投訴、埋怨便條慣用語(yǔ)言表示Frankly,Iamnotwillingtoputupwiththesituationanymore.Youmustrectifythesituation,orIwilltakeittothecourt.Ifyoucan’tgivemeasatisfactoryanswer,IwillcomplainittotheConsumerAssociation.第25頁(yè)Exercise昨天你去買鞋，店里服務(wù)員態(tài)度非常糟糕，請(qǐng)你給經(jīng)理寫(xiě)一封投訴便條。第26頁(yè)March24DearSirorMadam,Iwenttoyourstoretobuyapairofshoesyesterday.WhenIsaidthepricewashigh,theNo.5salesgirlrepliedinasarcastictone,“Youcangoaheadandbuyacheaponefromotherstores.”Sheforgothowtotreataprospectivebuyer!Ihopeyoucanimproveyourservice,andgivemeaface-to-faceapology.Mytelephonenumberis159…Yours,JohnSmith第27頁(yè)道歉便條組成要件：道歉行為和內(nèi)容道歉詳細(xì)理由填補(bǔ)方法深入致歉第28頁(yè)March25DearProfessorChen,

IamsorryIcouldn’tmakeour2o’clockappointment.

ThereistobeanurgentconferenceinmydepartmentthisafternoonandIhavetomakesomepreparationforit.Shallwemeetat3o’clockonnextMondayafternoon?Ifthatisnotconvenientforyou,pleasegivemeanoteinmymailbox.Withmanyapologies.Sincerelyyours,PanPan第29頁(yè)道歉便條慣用語(yǔ)言表示Iamwritingtoshowmyapologyfor…Iwouldliketoexpressmyapologiesfornotbeingableto…IamsorryIcouldn’t…IamsorrytosaythatIhavenotfinished…,andhaveto…Excusemeformydelayingin….第30頁(yè)道歉便條慣用語(yǔ)言表示Ihadaminoraccident.Ihadaminoroperation.Somethingwaswrongwithmy…第31頁(yè)道歉便條慣用語(yǔ)言表示IamsureIcanmakeupthelossby…Ipromiseitwillneverhappenagain.Itwouldbeverykindofyoutogivemeanotherchanceto…第32頁(yè)道歉便條慣用語(yǔ)言表示Manyapologies.Dopleaseforgiveme.第33頁(yè)Exercise你和好朋友Mary約好，昨天下午放學(xué)后在大光明影城門口碰面，但因?yàn)槌隽它c(diǎn)小交通事故，你沒(méi)能按時(shí)赴約。請(qǐng)給Mary寫(xiě)一封道歉便條。第34頁(yè)March24DearMary,Iamterriblysorry!IfailedtomeetyouatthegateofDaGuangmingtheateryesterdayafternoon.Ihadaminoraccidentonmyway,andbythetimeIfinisheddealingwiththeaccidentandgottothetheater,youmusthavegivenuphopeandleft.Dopleaseforgiveme.Yours,Mary第35頁(yè)祝賀便條March20DearMary,

IamsopleasedtohearthatyouhavegotthescholarshiptotheUniversityofXianggang.

Congratulationsonyoursuccess.

Youreallydeserveitbecauseyouaresuchanintelligentandhardworkingstudent.Ihaveneverdoubtedyourabilitytoachievegreataims.Youwillhaveabrilliantfuture,andIwishyouallthebestinyourlifeandacademicstudiesthere.Yours,Daisy第36頁(yè)祝賀便條組成要件：祝賀事由和自己反應(yīng)祝賀行為對(duì)成功評(píng)價(jià)和對(duì)方欽佩美好祝福第37頁(yè)祝賀便條慣用語(yǔ)言表示Iamhappytolearnthatyouhavejust…Iamsopleasedtohearthatyouhave…第38頁(yè)祝賀便條慣用語(yǔ)言表示Congratulationsonyoursuccess.I’dliketoexpressmywarmestcongratulationsonit.Pleaseacceptmywarmestcongratulations.Congratulationsuponhaving…第39頁(yè)祝賀便條慣用語(yǔ)言表示Youreallydeserveitbecause…Thishasmeantyearsofyourhardwork,andit’sanachievementyoucanwellbeproudof.Ihavebeenappreciatingyourexcellentperformanceinstudyandabilityinyourwork.第40頁(yè)祝賀便條慣用語(yǔ)言表示Youwillhaveabrilliantfuture.Ibelieve…Ibelievethattheknowledgeyouhaveacquiredwillenableyoutobesuccessfulinwhicheveraspectoflife.第41頁(yè)Exercise你好朋友經(jīng)過(guò)努力，終于考上了西安外國(guó)語(yǔ)大學(xué)碩士碩士，寫(xiě)個(gè)便條向她表示祝賀。第42頁(yè)March28DearLily,SoexcitedtolearnthatyouhavebeenadmittedbyXi’anInternationalStudiesUniversityasagraduate.Warmcongratulationsontherealizationofyourdream.Thishasmeantyearsofyourhardwork,andyoucanreallybeproudofit.YoursuccessisreallyanencouragementtomeandIwishwecanmeettherenextyear.Bestwishestoyou.Yours,Lucy第43頁(yè)致謝便條組成要件：致謝行為和致謝事情所謝事情詳細(xì)描述和自己感受回饋承諾再次致謝第44頁(yè)April10DearRita,

I’mwritingtoshowyouhowgratefulIamforyourhospitalityduringmyvisitinShanghai.Yourconsideratearrangementandpatientcompanionshipmademytripveryjoyful.IdidhaveawonderfultimeinShanghai.IwishyoucancometovisitXi’anifyouarefree.It’sareallybeautifulplace.Iwillbeagoodguidethen.Thankyouagain.Yours,Helen第45頁(yè)致謝便條慣用語(yǔ)言表示Iamwritingtotellyou…Ihopeyouunderstand…Iamwritingtoexpressmyappreciationforallthatyoudid…Thankyousomuchforyourassistance.Itwasmostkindofyoutoshare….Pleaseacceptourwarmestthanks.WithdeepestgratitudeIwriteyouhereafewlines.第46頁(yè)致謝便條慣用語(yǔ)言表示Everythingseemedperfectwithyourconsideration:…IamsoluckythatIhavesuchagenerousandcharmingfriend.第47頁(yè)致謝便條慣用語(yǔ)言表示Ishouldbehappytoreciprocateyourkindnessatanytime.IhopeIhavethechancetoreciprocateyourkindness.第48頁(yè)Exercise為了幫你經(jīng)過(guò)專業(yè)四級(jí)，張老師每星期抽兩個(gè)小時(shí)時(shí)間給你輔導(dǎo)?，F(xiàn)在你考試經(jīng)過(guò)了，想當(dāng)面致謝，但他不在，給他寫(xiě)份致謝便條。第49頁(yè)April15DearMr.Zhang,IamwritingtoexpressmyheartfeltappreciationforallthatyoudidformeinmyTEM-4preparation.Itisverykindofyoutohavesparedmetwohoursaweektoanswermyquestionspatiently.NowIamhappytolearnthatIhavepassedtheexam,which,Iunderstandclearly,shouldbeattributedtoyourgeneroushelp.Heartfeltthanksagain.Sincerelyyours,Hebe第50頁(yè)留言條組成要件第51頁(yè)Apr.15DearMr.Zhang,

AMr.LiuMinwhorecentlyarrivedfromBeijingcalledyouthismorningwhenyouwereout.Hesaidhewishedtoseeyou,forhehadsomethingimportanttoconsultwithyou.Youarerequestedtoringhimupatanytimethiseveningfrom8p.m.to10p.m.at….Yours,ZhangWei第52頁(yè)留言條組成要件：人物時(shí)間事件要求第53頁(yè)Exercise給你好朋友洋洋寫(xiě)張便條，告訴她，她朋友張梅打電話要求和她見(jiàn)面。第54頁(yè)April7Yangyang,AMissZhangMeicalledyouthismorningbutyouwereout.ShewantedtomeetyouthiscomingSunday,9a.m.,attheuniversitygate.Ifthatisnotconvenientforyou,youarerequestedtoringherupatanytimethiseveningfrom8p.m.to12p.m.at….Yours,Lili第55頁(yè)通知、海報(bào)組成要件：通知事項(xiàng)通知事項(xiàng)舉行方或召集方詳細(xì)時(shí)間詳細(xì)地點(diǎn)參加人員呼吁參加第56頁(yè)NoticeMay10,Dearschoolmates,ToimproveourEnglish,anEnglisheveningisgoingtobeheldbyStudents’UnionofEnglishdepartmentattheStudents’Centerfrom7p.m.to9p.m.thisFriday.Youcanenjoyminiplays,Englishsongsandpoemsattheevening.Manyforeignfriendswillbeinvitedtotheeveningandtheywillofferuswonderfulperformance.AlltheteachersandstudentsarewelcometoattendtheEnglishevening.Comeandenjoytheevening.Students’Union第57頁(yè)FootballMatchEnglish0941vs.English0942Time:3p.m.,April15,Place:TheUniversityStadiumPleasecontactthePhysicalCultureandSportsCommissionTicketsarelimited.Fansshouldbequick.thePhysicalCultureandSportsCommissionApril10,第58頁(yè)Exercise著名作家亦舒來(lái)我校發(fā)表題為“文學(xué)與生活”演講，時(shí)間是4月20日早晨9點(diǎn)到11點(diǎn)，地點(diǎn)是教一201。以漢字系學(xué)生會(huì)名義寫(xiě)個(gè)海報(bào)。第59頁(yè)Speechon“LiteratureandLife”Speaker:YiShu,famouswriterTime:9a.m.—11a.m.,April20,Place:201,TeachingBuildingOneArarechancetoknowaboutthefamouswriter!Ararechancetunderstandliteratureandlife!Literaturefanscan’taffordtomiss.Students’UnionofChineseDepartmentApril12,第60頁(yè)轉(zhuǎn)讓、求購(gòu)便條組成要件：轉(zhuǎn)讓、求購(gòu)原因轉(zhuǎn)讓、求購(gòu)行為轉(zhuǎn)讓、求購(gòu)物品詳細(xì)情況轉(zhuǎn)讓、求購(gòu)價(jià)格約定第61頁(yè)ASecondhandCell-phoneforSaleApril5,Dearschoolmates,NowIhaveacell-phoneforsale.Ibroughtitonlyhalfayearago,anditisstillingoodcondition.Besidesmakingphonecalls,itcanbeusedtosendtextmessageandtakepictures.Ifyouareinterestedinit,cometomydormafter9p.m.inRoomD202toseewhetheritsatisfiesyou.Iwanttosellitforatleast500Yuan.Yours,\\\\第62頁(yè)OffertoBuy