讀后續(xù)寫升格微方法-場(chǎng)面描寫動(dòng)作描寫講義-高三英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)

讀后續(xù)寫升格微方法—場(chǎng)面描寫，動(dòng)作描寫Slenderly,languidly,theirhandssetlightlyontheirhips,thetwoyoungwomenprecededusoutontoarosy-coloredporch,opentowardthesunset,wherefourcandlesflickeredonthetableinthediminishedwind.兩位女郎裊裊婷婷地、懶洋洋地，手輕輕搭在腰上，在我們前面走上了玫瑰色的陽(yáng)臺(tái)。陽(yáng)臺(tái)迎著落日，餐桌上有四支蠟燭在微弱的風(fēng)里閃爍不定。Thebarisinfullswingandfloatingroundsofcocktailspermeatethegardenoutsideuntiltheairisalivewithchatterandlaughter.酒吧那邊生意興隆，同時(shí)一盤盤雞尾酒傳送到外面花園里的每個(gè)角落，到后來(lái)整個(gè)空氣里充滿了歡聲笑語(yǔ)。Thelightsgrowbrighterastheearthlurchesawayfromthesun.大地蹣跚著離開太陽(yáng)，電燈顯得更亮。Laughter?is?easier?minute?by?minute,?spilled?with?prodigality,?tipped?out?at?a?cheerful?word.笑聲每時(shí)每刻都變得越來(lái)越容易，毫無(wú)節(jié)制地傾瀉出來(lái)。AwaferofamoonwasshiningoverGatsby'shouse,makingthenightfineasbeforeandsurvivingthelaughterandthesoundofhisstillglowinggarden.Asuddenemptinessseemedtoflownowfromthewindowsandthegreatdoors,endowingwithcompleteisolationthefigureofthehost.一輪明月正照在蓋茨比別墅的上面，使夜色跟先前一樣美好。明月依舊，而歡聲笑語(yǔ)已經(jīng)從仍然光輝燦爛的花園里消失了。一股突然的空虛此刻好像從那些窗戶和巨大的門里流出來(lái)，使主人的形象處于完全的孤立之中。Fromtheballroombeneath,muffledandsuffocatingchordsweredriftinguponhotwavesofair.從下面的舞廳里，低沉而悶人的樂聲隨著一陣陣熱氣飄了上來(lái)。場(chǎng)景描寫Hetossesaberryinahigharctowardme.Icatchitinmymouthandbreakthedelicateskinwithmyteeth.Thesweettartnessexplodesacrossmytongue.【toss&break&explode】酸酸甜甜的味道在我舌尖炸開。Feetsloshedtowardmethroughthemud.他踩著泥水朝我走來(lái)。Thepoundingmusic,thecheers,theadmirationworktheirwayintomyblood,andIcan’tsuppressmyexcitement.Forthefirsttime,Ifeelaflickerofhoperisingupinme.【妙】響亮的音樂，歡呼聲，他們的贊揚(yáng)聲進(jìn)入我的血液，我不能抑制自己的興奮。【suppress】頭一回，我感覺到心中出現(xiàn)一陣希望。【flicker,riseup】Themusicendswithaflourish.音樂在熱烈的掌聲中結(jié)束。Theybabbleoutpraise.【babbleout嘀哩嘀哩】Itblazedupandthentheflamesflickeraroundtheedgesawhileuntilitfinallygoesout.【blaze燃燒】Itisbuzzingwithpeople.人聲鼎沸。Therehasbeenachillintheairbetweenus.我們的關(guān)系很僵。IfI’dstoodevenaghostofchance,itvanished.【aghostof】Animagepopsintomymind.一個(gè)畫面突然出現(xiàn)在我腦海中。Anideasuddenlypopsintohismind.Theprepteamscreamsinadmiration.團(tuán)隊(duì)發(fā)出贊賞的聲音。Theaudiencebreaksintocheers.Soundsofsympathyfromthecrowd.人群發(fā)出惋惜。Theroarofthecrowdisdeafening.人群發(fā)出震耳欲聾的咆哮。Islammypalmsintohischest.Heloseshisbalanceandcrashesintoanuglyurnfilledwithfakeflowers.Theurntipsandshattersintohundredsoftinypieces.Peetalandsintheshards,andbloodimmediatelyflowsfromhishands.【妙】搏斗場(chǎng)景。He’slockedthoseblueeyesonminenow,demandingananswer.他藍(lán)色的眼睛緊緊鎖住我，逼問一個(gè)結(jié)果。Therearemurmursofassent.贊嘆聲響起。ThenCareertributesaresilentuntilhegetsoutofearshot,thenusehashedvoice.他們保持著安靜直到他走遠(yuǎn)，然后小聲說(shuō)。Thestampedeoffeetshakesmefromslumber.人群的奔逃吵醒了我。Astampedebrokeoutwhenthedoorsopened.蜂擁而出。Irun,choking,mybagbangingagainstmyback,myfacecutwithbranchesthatmaterializefromthegrayhazewithoutwarning.慌張?zhí)优躎hesegamesarevergingondullness.【verge瀕臨】Thefireballhitsatreeofftomyleft,engulfingitinflames.【engulfin】Sweatbreaksoutonthepalmsofmyhands,beadingthroughtheointment,andIdomybesttopatthemdryonmyshirt.汗水打濕我的手掌，混雜著藥膏，我努力用袖子把它們擦干。Foramoment,everythingseemsfrozenintime.Iclapmyhandsovermymouth,butthesoundhasalreadyescaped.我用手捂住嘴巴，但聲音已經(jīng)溜出去了。Hetucksaloosestrandofhairbehindmyear.他伸手把我的一縷頭發(fā)別到腦后。Igivetherocksapatgoodbye.我拍了拍門口的石頭表示告別。Westandthereawhile,lockedinanembrace,feelingeachothe