新教材高中外研版英語(yǔ)選擇性必修4學(xué)案Unit5SectionⅣWriting-介紹神秘現(xiàn)象

SectionⅣWriting——介紹神秘現(xiàn)象[技法指導(dǎo)]1．文體介紹本單元的寫(xiě)作主題為“介紹神秘現(xiàn)象”，可以通過(guò)“說(shuō)明＋議論”的模式進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作。首先，在說(shuō)明的部分，應(yīng)抓住現(xiàn)象的特征，以一定的順序(如時(shí)間順序、空間順序、邏輯順序等)進(jìn)行客觀(guān)地介紹，并點(diǎn)明其神秘之處。其次，在議論的部分，應(yīng)對(duì)該神秘現(xiàn)象做出解釋。應(yīng)注意解釋或論證的邏輯要清晰，引用的觀(guān)點(diǎn)要明確。最后，在結(jié)尾部分，可以簡(jiǎn)潔地說(shuō)明作者自身的觀(guān)點(diǎn)，或直接總結(jié)全文。2．篇章結(jié)構(gòu)(1)開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山：解釋神秘的現(xiàn)象，可以利用設(shè)問(wèn)句的方式，引起讀者的閱讀興趣。(2)渲染氣氛：說(shuō)明該現(xiàn)象在人們眼中的神秘之處，引發(fā)讀者的好奇心。(3)分析或解釋原因：可以引用民間傳說(shuō)或官方說(shuō)明來(lái)進(jìn)行解釋。注意：①此部分應(yīng)注意邏輯順序和段落之間的過(guò)渡和銜接，可適當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用一些銜接手段，如銜接詞、句等。②可以使用“總—分”的結(jié)構(gòu)，即以中心句明確段落大意，再展開(kāi)說(shuō)明、論證。(4)結(jié)尾：可以說(shuō)明作者自身的觀(guān)點(diǎn)或者直接總結(jié)全文。注意：結(jié)尾部分不要展開(kāi)過(guò)多，避免啰嗦。3．常用表示(1)介紹地點(diǎn)常用的詞匯及表達(dá)：remend,remendation,mystery,mysterious,historical,accordingto,legend,witness,specific,location,liein,remain,consistof,worldwide?Locatedin...，...stillremainsamysterytoscientistsuntiltoday.……位于，……直到今天，對(duì)科學(xué)家來(lái)說(shuō)仍然是個(gè)謎。?Beingoneofthenaturalmysteriesintheworld,ithasattractedmuchworldwideattention.作為世界自然之謎之一，它引起了全世界的廣泛關(guān)注。(2)給出推薦理由并介紹奇異現(xiàn)象常用的詞匯及表達(dá)：exist,existence,disappear,disappearance，discover,discovery,debate,unexplained,natural,popular,structure,truth,convincing,evidence;phenomenon,amazing,frightening,tracebackto?Themostinterestingphenomenonisthat...最有趣的現(xiàn)象是……?Forthousandsofyears,itisconsideredasoneofthe...幾千年來(lái)，它被認(rèn)為是……之一。?Thedescriptionof...canbetracedbackto...對(duì)……的描述可以追溯到……?Accordingtothelegend，...據(jù)傳說(shuō)……?Whatmakesitmysteriousisthat...它的神秘之處在于……(3)結(jié)尾段常用表達(dá)：?Scientistsconcludethatthedisappearanceofitmaybecausedby...科學(xué)家得出結(jié)論，它的消失可能是因?yàn)椤?Perhapswiththedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,themysteryof...canbeexplained.也許隨著科學(xué)技術(shù)的發(fā)展，……的奧秘可以被解釋。[精品展示]假定你是某國(guó)際旅行社的導(dǎo)游李華，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，向你帶領(lǐng)的來(lái)自加拿大的游客推薦云南的迷人湖。1．位置：云南省原始森林；2．規(guī)模：寬處150米，窄處60米，水深米；3．奇異現(xiàn)象：如果站在湖邊說(shuō)話(huà)，會(huì)立即下雨。聲音越大，雨就越大。注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：原始森林primitiveforestsDeartourists，Today,I'dliketoremendanamazingplace,Miren________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua[審題謀篇]第一步：確定時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)該寫(xiě)作為描寫(xiě)一個(gè)神秘的地方，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，人稱(chēng)以第三人稱(chēng)為主。第二步：確定段落首段：向游客推薦一個(gè)神秘的地方中段：描述此神秘地方的特色和神秘之處尾段：結(jié)束語(yǔ)，說(shuō)明此地會(huì)讓游客喜歡第三步：提煉要點(diǎn)1．________________位于2．________________在……邊緣3．________________研究4．________________愛(ài)上5．________________一……就第四步：句式升級(jí)1．迷人湖位于云南省的原始森林，是世界上最神秘的地方之一。(一般表達(dá))MirenLakeislocatedintheprimitiveforestinYunnanProvince,anditisoneofthemostmysteriousplacesintheworld.(高級(jí)表達(dá))________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.(過(guò)去分詞作定語(yǔ)完成句子的升級(jí))2．此處很神秘：當(dāng)人們?cè)诤呏v話(huà)時(shí)，天會(huì)下雨。(一般表達(dá))Itismysterious,whenpeopletalkattheedgeofthelake,itstartstorain.(高級(jí)表達(dá))________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.(用名詞性從句合并進(jìn)行升級(jí))[連句成篇]________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________SectionⅣWriting——介紹神秘現(xiàn)象[審題謀篇]第三步1．belocatedin2.attheedgeof3.doresearchinto4.fallinlovewith5.themoment第四步1．MirenLake,locatedintheprimitiveforestinYunnanProvince,isoneofthemostmysteriousplacesintheworld2．Whatmakesitmysteriousisthatwhenpeopletalkattheedgeofthelake,itstartstorain[連句成篇]Deartourists，Today,I'dliketoremendanamazingplace,MirenLake,toyou.MirenLake,locatedintheprimitiveforestsinYunnanProvince,isoneofthemostmysteriousplacesintheworld.Withthedepthof1.5metres,itis150metresinwidthinsomewideparts,whileinsomenarrowparts,itis60metres.Whatmakesitmysteriousisthatwhenpeopletalkattheedgeofthelake,itstartstorain.Furthermore,thelouderthevoiceis,theheavi