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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。“OnewindydayinMarch,KittyMillerwasonherwaytoschoolwhensheglancedintoastorewindowandsawagreatpileoflovelyredapples."Oh,”Sheexclaimed(驚呼).“Howlovely!IfonlyMammacouldhaveone!’Immediately,thestoreownerrecognizedthefamiliargirlandaskedhertopickone.KittyjustshookherheadandKitty'smotherwasextremelypoor.ShehadbeenadressmakereversinceKitty'sfatherdied,andhadtoworkhardtoearnalivingforherselfandKitty.Unfortunately,shehadrecentlybeeverysickandhadtolieinbedalldaylong.WhenKittywasawayatschool,thehousewasincrediblycoldandcheerless.ShemissedherlittleangelthatiswhatshecalledKitty.Kittytookgreatcareofhermother.Shecookedherfood,mostlysoup.Theycouldnotaffordfreshfruit.Kittywouldevensingtohermotheratnight.WhenKittyreachedtheschoolthatday,herthoughtswerefullofhersickmotherandthelovelyredapples.Shewasusuallyanexcellentstudent,butthatdayshemadesomanymistakesthattheteacherlookedatherinsurprise.Thelittlegirlcouldonlysitatherdesk,withherbookbeforeher,anddreamofthoseredapples.Whenschoolwasdismissed.Kittystartedslowlyhomeward.Shehadwalkedonlyashortdistancewhenshesawamaninfrontofherdrophiswallet.Runningquicklyforward,shepickeditup.ThewalletfeltquiteheavyinKitty'slittlehand.“Theremustbeagooddealofmoneyinit,”thoughtKitty."HowIwishIcouldkeepit,sothatIwouldthenbeabletopurchasearedappleforMamma,andsomanyotherthingssheneeds.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右:“2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。“Paraone:Kittyknewthiswouldnotberight,soshehurriedaftertheman.Paratwo:Thestoreownersawthefamiliargirlrushingin,onedollarinhand.文本分析:故事大意小姑娘Kitty心疼媽媽,想給生病的媽媽買一個(gè)紅蘋果,可是卻沒有足夠的錢。一天放學(xué)后,在回家的路上,她拾到一個(gè)錢包,里面時(shí)厚厚的一沓錢,她十分矛盾,她非常想用這比錢給媽媽買紅蘋果,但又深知這樣做不對(duì),她會(huì)怎么選擇呢?矛盾:Kittydesiredtobuyanappleforhermotherbutherfamilywastoopoorandfatherless.Kittyandhermomledanextremelypoorlifeandmom’sillnessleftthesituationevenworse.母女關(guān)系:Aclosebond.Shewoulddoeverythingforhermom.進(jìn)退兩難(Kittywasinadilemma)Keepthewallet?Returnthewallet?Moredetailstoecho:Para1:Kitty內(nèi)心的糾結(jié)男人要不要給錢多為報(bào)酬,多少酬謝?面對(duì)酬謝,Kitty作何反應(yīng)Kitty會(huì)不會(huì)將酬謝直接拿回家給媽媽看呢?Para2:店主會(huì)不會(huì)收kitty的錢,直接白送呢?店主會(huì)不會(huì)一元賣一堆蘋果?本文的主旨大意是什么?故事線發(fā)展:PoorandsickmotherandKittyhadahardlifesawprettyredapplesbutnotaffordablesawthemandroppedthewalletandreturnedGive100dollarsbuttookonlyonedollarRushedtowardsthefruitstoreGotthepreciousapplesandsharedwithmomMainidea:LittlegirlKittyfeltsorryforhermotherandwantedtobuyaredappleforhersickmother,butshedidn'thaveenoughmoney.Onedayafterschool,onherwayhome,shepickedupawalletwithathickpileofmoneyinside.Shewasveryconflictedandwantedtousethismoneytobuyhermotherredapples,butsheknewitwasnotright.Afterdeepreflection,shemadetherightchoice.Theme:Honestybearsthesweetestfruitforherandhermom.WritingpurposeTopraisehergoodvirtuehonestyatest多變句式表達(dá)然后,那個(gè)男人走的如此之快,以至于kitty花了很大努力才追趕上他。Then,themanwalkedsofastthatKittyputinalotofefforttocatchupwithhim.However,sofastdidthemanwalkthatittookKittygreatefforttocatchupwithhim.表示“大步流星”,“快走”的表達(dá)Walkatastride;walk/strodeasifonwings;setablisteringpaceNevertheless,suchablisteringpacedidthemansetthatittookKittygreatefforttocatchupwithhim.參考范文:Kittyknewthiswouldnotberight,soshehurriedaftertheman.“Withbeadsofsweatonforeheadandhearthammering,Kittysteppedforward,turningbackthewallettotheman.NosoonerhadKittygavethewallettothemanthanappreciationwaswrittenonhisfacewhilehismouthburstintoaradiantsmile.LookingintoKitty'scleareyes,themangrabbedherlittlehandsandspokehighlyofher,givingheronedollarinreturnforKitty'skindaction.Clenchingtheonedollarinhandstight,Kittywassunkintoawhirlpoolofsheerexhilarationwhilethelovelyredapplescamecrowdingintohermind.Hardlycouldshebelievehereyesthatsheeventuallygotenoughmoneytoaffordtheapplesforhersickmamma!Withouthesitation,Kittyrushedtothesort,windsdancingbesideher.Thestoreownersawthefamiliargirlrushingin,onedollarinhand.Eyesgluedtothelovelyredapples.Kittytookoneofthemcautiously,herlipscurvingintoadelightedsmile.Afterafewminutesrushingbackhomewithindescribableexcitement,Kittyopenedtheweatherbeatendoorviolently,steppingforwardtohermother'sbed.“Look,Mom!HereisthelovelyredappleIpurchasedforyou!HavingknownKitty'skindaction,Momhuggedherdaughterintoherwarmarms.tearsblurringhereves.Atthesightofthelovelyredapples.momstrokedKitty'shairgently,agushofprideaswellasextremehappinessarisingfromthebottomoftheheartofKittythatKindnesswouldtrulyreturn.語(yǔ)言積累:
Tornbetweentheguilt
ofpossessingsomeone’sspecialnecklace
andthedesire
ofowningthismostpreciousitemofthissummer,
Ipacedupanddowninroom
withdesperate/intensestruggle,
leavingallmythoughtinamuddle.沉思做出正確的選擇
Onasecondthought,
insteadofallowingmyselftobetorturedbyrestlessnessanddisfort,
Iresolvedtofigureoutthetruth
attheexpenseoflosingmytreasure.
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