2天解決雅思小作文圖表題

2天解決雅思小作文——圖表題龔超PAGEPAGE11Taskone(小作文)requirements:Describethemainfeaturesofthecharts.Whatisthemainfeature?Perspective﹥clarityTrendvs.Proportion（timesequenceandspaceconcept）Don’tcitethedatadirectlyandtrytomakecomparisons.Arelativelywiderangeofvocabularyandvariedsentencepatterns.Linkersarealwaysimportantinwriting.Trytoavoidgrammaticalmistakesandmisspellings.Trytomakeyourpapertidyandparagraphingacceptable.Howtoreadthecharts.（Examples）表示趨勢的句型(核心句型+衍生句型)(1)Aincreasedfrom1to2+time.Inthepast2decades,thepopulationinJapanincreasedfrom1millionto2million.(2)Awitnessedanincrease+data+timeTimewitnessedanincreaseinA.Thepast2decadeswitnessedanincreaseinthepopulationofJapan.Witness–experience-see–undergo–gothrough(3)TherewasanincreaseinA+time+dataTherewasinincreasingtendency/trendinA+time+data(4)Time+Aincreased+databeforedecreasingto+data.Time+Aincreased+databeforeitdecreasedto+data.Variation:after.(5)高分句(1)/(2)/(3),+rising+data./whichclause.PopulationinJapanincreased,risingfrom1to2million.Theproductionofcottondeclined,fallingfrom20tonesto15tonesinthesurveyedyears.Thenumberofprivatecarswitnessedanincrease,whichrosefrom1millionto2intheperiod.(6)and句型Aincreasedinthefirst20yearsfrom10to35andcontinuedtoriseinthefollowingdecade.Aincreasedinasteadywayfrom1995to2000,arrivingatthepeakof1billion./reachingthepeakof/reachingthelowpointof+data.表示增減的動詞：Increase/rise/climb/goup/grow/soar/rocket.Decrease/fall/decline/godown/drop/reduce/plummet.表示增減幅度的詞：Steadily,slightly,stably,slowly.Dramatically,substantially,considerably,remarkably,significantly.表示波動且增減：Itincreasedwithsomefluctuation.Itfluctuatedinanupwardtrend./inadownwardtrend.表示持平（無變化）：Therewasalmostnochangeinthenumberofprivatecarswiththefigureof20million.Thenumberofprivatecarsremainedunchanged.Thenumberofprivatecarskeptsteady/stableat+data.如何引入時間而避免過度重復(fù)：From1995to2005,Inthefirst5years,/inthefirstdecade,Inthefollowing5years,Inthesametimeframe,/inthemeantime,/meanwhileIntheperiodundersurvey/inthesurveyedperiodInthetimeunderview,intheviewedtimeperiod,Afterwards,sincethen,followingthis,如何表示預(yù)測數(shù)據(jù)(劍5p29):Beprojectedto、Bepredictedto、Beexpectedto、BeestimatedtoInthefollowing4decades（from2010）,thepopulationaged65ormoreisprojectedtoincreasesubstantially.Andspecifically,thepercentageoftheoldpopulationinJapanislikelytoexperiencethemostdramaticincrease,arrivingatthepeakofabout28%whichisthehighestofthesurveyedthreecountries.Inthemeantime,theothertwocountriesalsoincreasesandarepredictedtoreachthefigureofaround25%.Tosumup,thepopulationaged65ormoreincreasedgenerallyfrom1940andisprojectedtoincreaseinthefollowingyears.ClarityclassificationstandardperspectiveHowtomakecomparison:AismorethanB.Aisthelargestoneofalltheitems.ComparedwithB,Aismore/largest.Ais3timesasmuchasB.Ais3timesmorethanB.(3)AistwothirdsofB.AisjustaquarterofB.（4）Order:Awasthelargestoneofallitems,whichisfollowedbyB.Brankedthesecond,withthepercentageof70%.Howtocitethestatistics:Aincreasedfrom10to20.Aincreasedbyamarginof10.Awitnessedanincreased,arrivingat20.AislargerthanB,30and20respectively.Aisthelargestofallitems,accountingfor/constituting/representing70%.Aaccountedfor/constituted70%,thelargestpartofallitems.(6)Atookupthesmallestofthechartwiththefigureof20%.ThefigureofAis20,thelowestinthesurveyed10years.(7)A,whichaccountedfor30%/whichwas50million,wasthelargestofallitems./wasmuchlargerthanB.(8)AislargerthanB(20and15).Howtoachieveclarity:【清晰結(jié)構(gòu)】先總后分—分門別類+合并同類(根據(jù)趨勢和反差分類)—主要特征—句型，段落，用詞，連接。LG277Orso,about,around,roughly,nearly,almost,approximately,alittlelessthan,justunder,alittlebitover,ThechartpresentsanoverviewoftheproportionoffamilieswhichownedcarsinaEuropeancountrybetween1971and2001.Ingeneral,wecanfindthatanincreasingnumberofhouseholdshadaccesstooneormorecars.In1971,almosthalfofthesurveyedfamilieshadnocarwhilethepercentageoffamilieswithonecarandtwoormorecarswasmuchlower,roughly35%and10%respectively.Inthefollowingtenyears,thefigureofno-carfamilieswitnessedaslightdecreasetoabout45%andcontinuedtodecreaseconsiderablyfrom1991to2001,arrivingatthelowestpointofaround10%.Incontrast,theproportionoffamilieswithonecarincreasedslightlyinthefirstdecadethoughitwasstilllowerthanthatofno-carfamilies.However,from1981to1991,itunderwentasubstantialrisetothepeakof70%orsoandkeptstableuntil2001,thehighestamongthethreeitemsunderview/study.Inthemeantime,householdswithtwoormorecarsalsoexperiencedasteadyincreaseinthepercentageuntilitexceededno-carfamilies,whichrankedsecondinthecarownership.Tosumup,moreandmorefamiliesbegantoowncarsinthesurveyedyears.劍5，P52Accordingtothefirstchart,/havinganoverviewofthechart,wecanfind/itisclearthatwiththeincreaseofagemoreandmorepeoplestudyforinterest.Asforstudentsunder26,80%ofthemstudyforcareerwhileonly10%studyforinterest.Inthenextagegroupfrom26to49,thepercentageofstudentswhostudyforcareerwitnessesasteadydecrease.Inthemeantime,thepercentageofstudentsforcareerrisesobviously.Attheageof40to49,thefigureofstudentsforbothreasonsisequaltoeachother,standingat40%.Asforstudentsagedover49,thepercentageofstudentsstudyingforcareerarrivesatthelowestpointofabout20%,whilethefigureforinterestpeaksat70%.劍5P98Londonistheonlycitywhichopenedtherailwaybeforethe20thcentury(1863).Inthemeantime,LosAngeleshasitsfirstlineofundergroundin2001,whichwasthelatestinthesurveyedcities.Whenitcomestokilometersofroute,thefigureofLondonisthelargest,whichisnearlytwicethatofthecityParis(394and199).KyotoandLosAngeleshavetheshortestrouteofunderground,bothofwhicharelessthan30kilometers.Inregardtothenumberofpassengerstakingsubwayannually,thoughLondonhastheearliestsubwayandthelongestroute,itsannualpassengersareonly775millionwhichranksthethirdofthecitiessurveyed.Tokyohasthelargestpassengersperyearwhotakeundergroundanditsfigureis1927.Astheyoungestcitywithundergroundsystem,KyotoandLosAngeleshavetheleastsubwaytravelers(45and50millionrespectively).Tosumup,LondonistheearliestcitytohavesubwaysystemwhileTokyohasthelargestpopulationofpassengersperyearinthesurveyedcities.StudythetablebelowandlookforpatternsinpassengerdeathratesincountryAinrelationtothemodesoflandtransport.PassengerdeathratesincountryA:bybodeoftransportodeoftransportRatesperbillionpassengerkilometers19811986199119921993averagemotorcycle115.8100.394.497.094.6104.0foot76.975.362.558.556.270.5Pedalcycle56.949.646.843.341.348.8water0.40.50.00.50.09.2car6.15.13.73.53.04.6van3.83.82.22.21.72.7rail1.00.90.80.40.40.9Busorcoach0.30.50.60.40.80.5air0.20.50.00.10.00.2ThetableshowsthepassengerdeathratesbydifferentmeansoflandtransportinCountryAbetween1981and1993.ascanbeseenfromthetable,deathratesseaageneraltrendofdecreaseovertheperiodexceptforbusesandcoaches.Itisclearlyseenthatcars,vansandbicyclesexperiencedasignificantreductionintherateofroaddeathovertheperiodunderstudy.Forexample,deathamongthecarandvanusersdeclinedbymorethanhalf,fallingfrom6.1perbillionpassengerkilometersto3.0and3.8to1.7,respectively.Cycling,however,despiteasignificantdecreasefrom56.9perbillionto41.3,remainedthesecondmostdangeroustypeoflandtransport.Inthesecondcategory,comprisingmotorcyclesandrail,theratedroppedslightlybetween1981and1993.Motorcyclewasthemostdangeroustypeoftransport,averagingmorethantwiceasmanyfatalitiesascycling,andmorethantwentytimesashighascars.Regardingbusesandcoaches,theroaddeathalmosttrebledovertheperiodunderview,increasingfrom0.3perbillionpassengerkilometersto0.8.Nevertheless,busesandcoacheswerestillthesecondsafesttypeoftransport.劍7，P30.Ingeneral,wecanfindthatfoodwasthemajorpartoftheirspendinginthefivesurveyedcountries.Inthemeantime,thepercentageofspendingonclothinginfivecountriesrankedthesecondandtheproportioninleisurewasthesmallestofthethreeitems.Intermsof/inregardtothefirstcategoryoffood,thepercentageofexpenditureinTurkeywasthehighestwiththefigureof32.14%,whichwasalmosttwicethatofSweden(15.77%),thelowestinallfivecountries.ThepercentageofIrelandrankedsecond,whichrepresented28.91%.Thefigureofthecountriesleftsharedasimilarpercentageofaround18%.Whenitcomestothesecondcategoryinvolvingclothingandfootwear,Italyspentthemostonthisitemandthepercentagetookup9.00%.ItwasfollowedcloselybyTurkey,IrelandandSpain(1,2and3respectively).Comparedwiththeabove-mentionedtwoitems,leisureandeducationseemedtobetheleastinvesteditem.Thepercentageofexpenditureonthisitemkeptunder5%,ofwhichTurkeywasthehighest(4.35%).LG.262Thegraphsprovidesomeinformationaboutthespendingofcollegestudentseachyearinthreecountriesin2003.Ingeneral,theexpenditureofstudentsincountryAwasthehighestwiththefigure5000dollars,threetimesmorethanthatofcountryCstudents.Accordingtothepiecharts,itisobviousthatstudentsincountryAandBspentthemostonaccommodation(45%and35%respectively)whileincountryCfoodwasthemajoritemofspending(35%).Inthemeantime,foodexpenditureincountryAandBrankedthesecondandwasalittlelessthanthatofC,withthepercentageof22%and27%.Whenitcomestothespendingonleisure,thepercentageofcountryAandB(around20%)wasalmosttwiceofthatofcountryC(12%).Incontrast,countryCstudentsspentmuchoftheirmoneyonbooks(21%)buttheircounterpartsspentonly3%incountryAand12%incountryB.Tosumup,studentsincountryAandBspentmuchmoreonleisurewhilecountryCstudentsinvestedmuchoftheirmoneyinbooks.劍7，P101Ingeneral,theunitsofelectricityinbothcountrieswitnessedasubstantialincreaseinthesurveyedyears.AsforAustralia,coalwasthemajorfuelsourceusedforelectricityproduction.In1980,thewholeelectricityproductionwas100unitsandhalfcamefromcoal.Itincreaseddramaticallyto130unitsin2000,aboutthreequartersamongthewholeunits.Inthesametimeframe,hydropowerrankedthesecondwiththeunitsof20in1980and36in2000.However,theproductionofelectricityfromoilandnaturalgasunderwentaconsiderablereductionintheperiodunderview.WhenitcomestoFrance/however,Franceshowsacompletelydifferentpicture.In1980,coalandnaturalservedasthemajorfuelsourcetoproduceelectricityandtheunitswereboth25.Theunitsofoilrankedthesecondinbothyearsandwitnessedaslightincreasefrom20to25.Inthefirstyear,nuclearpowertookuparelativelysmallshare(15units)beforeincreasingto126units,themajorsourceofall.Tosumup,thechartshowsthatcoalwasadominantsourceoffuelusedtogeneratepowerinAustraliawhileFrancereliedonnuclearpower.Howtowritetheintroductionoftaskone:Thechartsdemonstrate/describe/illustrate/providesomeinformationabout/presentanoverviewof/givesomeinformationabout換詞，同義詞替換，詞換短語，短語換詞，動詞換名詞，名詞換動詞，語序：主動換被動，被動換主動句型:分詞換從句，從句換分詞增加信息:從圖表中增加題目中所沒有的信息，如時間，國別，物體類別等。LG.P283.Linechart:ThechartsprovidesomeinformationabouthowthenumberofpropertycrimesandviolentcrimeschangedinAmericaspanningfrom1982to2002.Ingeneral,thenumberofpropertycrimeswasfarmorethanthatofviolentcrimesinthesurveyedtwodecades.In1982,therewereapproximately3900propertycrimesper100,000peoplewhilethefigureofviolentcrimeswasaround500.Inthefirstscoreofyears,thenumberofpropertycrimesincreasedslightlybeforedecreasingtothelowestpointof2900in1994.Sincethen,thefigurerosesuddenlytothepeakof4000.Inthelastperiodofthesurveyfrom1998to2002,itsawanobviousdecreaseto3000.Whenitcomestoviolentcrimes,afteraslightincreasewithfluctuationsinthefirstdecade,thenumberwitnessedasubstantialdeclinetothelowestpointofaround300per100,000people.From1994,itexperiencedasuddenrisetothepeakofabout620beforeastabledecreasetoalittlebitlessthan600.Tosumup,mostofthecrimeswerecommittedforpropertysuchastheftorrobberywhileviolentcrimestookupaslightshare.LGP280ThegraphprovidessomeinformationabouthowthepercentageofprivatecarownershipchangedinGreatBritainfrom1961to2001.Ingeneral,anincreasingnumberoffamiliestendedtoown1or2carsinthesurveyedyears.In1961,therewere35percentofhouseholdswhichhadonlyonecar.Afterwards,itsawaconsiderablerisetoapeakof50%intwodecadesbeforeaslightdeclineto45%finally.Nearly70%householdshadnoprivatecarin1961,andthefigureexperiencedadramaticdecreaseto2222intheAccordingtothesurvey,nofamilieshad2carsin1961.However,thischangeddramaticallyandthepercentageoftwo-carfamiliesclimbedsubstantiallytomorethan10%inthefirstdecade.Afteraslightincrease,thepercentageoffamilieswith2carstookupalittlelessthan30%in2001.Tosumup,carsbecamemuchmorepopularamongGreatBritainhouseholdsintheyearssurveyed.ADOPTDoyouagreeordisagree?Discussbothviews.Whatisyouropinion?Whatisthecauseofthisproblemandgivesomesolutions.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?2006.08.12Withtheimprovementoflivingstandard,moreandmorepeoplecanhaveprivatecars.Theimprovementoflivingstandardwitnessesthepopularityofprivatecarswhichmanypeoplecanhaveaccessto.Thusthereisatrendthatanincreasingnumberofpeoplechoosetotravelbycarsratherthanpublictransportation.Thisphenomenoncanbeattributedtomanycauses,whichwillbelistedinthisessay.Andsomeproposalswillbeputforwardconcerninghowtoencouragepeopletotakepublictransportation.Theimprovementofscienceandtechnologywitnessesthepopularityofmobilephonesandamajorityofpeoplecanaffordthem.Thepasttwodecadeswitnessedtheimprovementofscienceandtechnology.Medicaladvancementhasmadepeoplelivelonger.Whatistheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofoldlife.10.14Itisadmitted/itisacceptedthat/undoubtedly,/unquestionably,/thereisnodenying/indisputably,/itisacknowledgedeveryonewantstohavealonglifeexpectancy/everyonedesiresto=isinclinedtolivealonglife./everyonedreamstolivealonglife.Fortunately,modernmedicaltechnologyhasrenderedmanypeoplerealizetheirdreamsofprolongingtheirlife.However,togrowoldisnotalwaysbeneficialtousanditmayhavesomedrawbacksinthemeantime.Thisessaywillmakesomeexplorationaboutthisissue.06.07.08Torespecttheagedpeopleisregardedasavirtue,whichhasbeenacceptedbyallthepeoplesaroundtheworld.However,oldpeoplearenotfullyrespectedinsomecountriesandthisphenomenonhasarousedsomeconcern.Thereasonscausingthisproblemwillbeanalyzedinthisessayandsomeconsequencescausedbyinsufficientrespecttooldpeoplewillbelisted.06.09.16Nowadays,collegestudentsarealwaysinterestedinwhatsubjecttheyshouldlearnintheuniversity.Whethertheyshouldlearnsubjectsdecidedbygovernmentorchoosetheirownfavoriteonesremainsacontroversialissueallthetime.Frommyperspective,exceptsomebasicsubjectssuchaslanguageandarithmetic,studentsshouldhavetheirfreedomtomaketheirownchoices.Doyouthinkamuseumistoeducateorentertainpeople?Whenwegotomuseum,wecanseesomefossilsofextinctanimals,theremainsofsometribesandfreshthingsthatwecanseeinourdailylife.Admittedly,somepeoplevisitmuseumstowidentheirhorizonwhileothersgothereforrelaxationandamusement.Whatfunctionthemuseumshouldservehasarousedsomecontroversy./Thuswhethermuseumshouldeducateorentertainpeoplehascausedsomedebate.Frommyperspective,amuseumshouldserveasaplacewiththecombinationofeducationandentertainment.Whatarethefactorsthatcausestressandhowtocopewithstress?Howtodevelopthebodyparagraph.Coherent(1)arrangementofideas(2)linkers.Causeandeffect:thus,hence,therefore,asaresult,consequently.Dueto,becauseof,owingto,onaccountantof,leadto,contributeto,resultin,beattributedto,beascribedto.Contrastandcomparison:incontrast,onthecontrary,conversely,bycomparison,comparedwith,Shift:however,but,otherwise,unfortunately,while,asamatteroffact,inreality,infact,actually.Order:atfirst,tobeginwith,firstandforemost,/foronething,foranother,/ontheonehand,ontheotherhand/finally,atlast,eventually,intheend.Addition:besides,inaddition,inadditionto,additionally,moreover,furthermore,meanwhile,inthemeantime,likewise,similarly,coincidently.Slot-fillers:itisfirmlybelieved/admitted/acknowledgedthat,undoubtedly,unquestionably,ingeneral,specifically,indetails,usually,itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat,thatistosay,putitanotherway,putitsimply,brieflyConclusion:insummary,tosumup,accordingtotheabovediscussion/analysis,basedontheaboveanalysis,tobeconcluded,inconclusion.考慮問題的角度：社會，公平，正義，效率，經(jīng)濟(jì)，政治，文化，價值，歷史，傳統(tǒng)，教育，環(huán)境。要符合主流價值觀，不能標(biāo)新立異。Topicsentence-narrowdowntopicsentence–supportingidea1,2,3.–ifnot-exemplification精致；中間段結(jié)構(gòu)，結(jié)論段正確。中間段論述時，主題句同樣要精致。一定要有連接詞。Exampleofthedevelopmentofbodypara.Whetheroldbuildingsshouldbedemolished?Topicsentences:oldbuildingswithcultural,archaeologicalandtourismvaluesshouldnotbedemolished.Narrowdown/explanationofthetopicsentence:thevaluesofoldbuildingscannotberecoverediftheyaredestroyedwithoutconsideration./Cultureinvolvedintheoldbuildingstendstoreflectthehistoryofthecityorthecountry./Oldbuildingswithsuchvaluesaresometimespreciousresourcesforthedevelopmentoftourismandtheresearch./asimpleversion:sucholdbuildingsareanintegralpartofourcityandourhistory.Supportingidea1:ontheonehand,oldbuildingswitharchaeologicalvaluesprovidescientistswithabundantevidenceandcluestounderstandthehistoryofdevelopment.Theseevidenceandcluesareverydirectanduseful,whichhelpsusalotinknowingthepast.Supportingidea2:ontheotherhand,oldbuildingsserveasverypreciousresourceoftourism.Theycanattractalargenumberoftravelersandthusbringaboutalargesumofincomeforlocalpeople.Actually,manyplaceshavesuccessfullydevelopedsomeoldbuildingsintotouristattraction.If-not:however,ifthesevaluableoldbuildingsaredemolished,thiswillbeagreatlossforthelocalcommunity.Thecitizenwillnothavethechancetoknowthehistoryanditisalsoahugelossfortourism.Exemplification:Forexample,withtherapiddevelopmentofeconomy,manyplacesinChinahavedestroyedoldbuildingstogivewayfornewones,peoplefindtheircitieslackinginuniquenessandalsotheycannotfindthesenseofbelonging.Conclusion:Insummary,wecannotdemolishalltheoldbuildingswithoutconsideration.Asforbuildingswithculturalvalues,weshouldprotectthemandtakeadvantageofthem.Butforthosevaluelessoldbuildings,theyshouldberemovedimmediatelyinordertogivespaceforthedevelopmentofourcity.Theadvantagesanddisadvantagesofmobilephones:Insummary,mobilesphones,ingeneral,arebeneficialtousbecausetheymakeourcommunicationconvenientandourworkmoreefficient.However,weshouldalsopayattentiontoitsdrawbackssuchasradiationandtrytoavoidtheirside-effects.Obviously,therearemanybenefitsinchangingjobsregularly.Undoubtedly,changingjobsperiodicallymaybringsomechallengesbutwecanstillfindmoreopportunitiesfromit.Ingeneral,changingjobsperiodicallyistosomedegreechallengingforusandforsomeyoungpeople,tofacechallengeissomethingpleasantforthem.Firstly,Waterandairareimportantforhumanbeings.Undoubtedly,waterandair,asthemainelementsinourplanet,playanessentialroleinoursurvival.Allanimals,plantsandhumanbeingsinthisworldlivewiththehelpofwaterandair.Theybreathetheairanddrinkthewater.Iftherewerenoairandwater,allcreaturesontheearthwilldisappearimmediately.Ourearthwillbecomeaterribleandhugedesert.Forexample,withthedevelopmentofeconomy,someplaceshavepollutedthewaterintheriversandairaroundthem.Duethedeteriorationofenvironment,thelocalresidentshadtomoveouttofindnewplacestoliveon.Ithinkweshouldlearnsomethingfromthisandvalueourenvironment.GlobalizationGovernmentinvestmentSpaceexploration.infrastructureScientificdevelopmentTime-saving,efficiency,convenience,effective,communication,promoteLivingstandardCulturalprotectionDemolishLivingstyle,socialconventionStressCultivateAwarenessArtTheinformationonthemediaViolencePornographyCrimerateRaisingpetsHarmonyDiseaseThegapbetweencountryandcityAndurbanizationTrafficcongestionUnemploymentJuveniledelinquencyUnderprivilegedgroupThedisabledTeachingmethodandcontentsConformityandindividualismWidenourhorizonBroadenourvisionToliveandtosolveproblemindependentlyTuitionSupervisionAdvertisementisbecomingmoreandmoreimportant.Advertisement,aneffectivemeansofmakingaproductwidelyknown,hasbecomeanintegralpartofourlife.Mobilephones,aconvenienttoolofcontactingeachother,areincreasinglypopularespeciallyforthosebusinessmanandwhite-collarclerks.Museum,aplaceforwideningpeople’shorizon,Nowadays,Englishismoreandmoreimportant.Ithasbecomeagloballanguage.However,ithascausednotonlyadvantages,butalsodisadvantages.Frommyperspective,itsadvantagesoutweighdisadvantages.4.5—5Nowadays,English,aneffectivecommunicationmeans,playsanimportantroleinthefieldofpolitics,economyandculture.Thusithasturnedintoagloballanguageandbroughtaboutgreateffect,bothpositiveandnegative.Peoplearedisputingoverwhetheritsadvantagesoutweighdisadvantages.Frommyperspective,Englishisbeneficialtousall.Somepeopleprefertospendtheirlivesdoingthesamethingsandavoidingchange.Others,however,thinkthatchangeisalwaysagoodthing.LifestyleUndoubtedly,unquestionably,ThereisnodenyingthatIt’sadmittedthatIt’swidelyacceptedthatIt’sfirmlyadmittedthatdifferentpersonhasdifferentlifestyle.Asforsomepeople,theyareinterestedindoingthingsinthesamewayandafraidofchange,whileothersalwaysadornit.Whichoneisreasonableisworthdiscussing.Frommyperspective,bothareacceptableanditdependsondifferentsituation.It’sfirmlyadmittedthateveryindividualhashisownlifestyle,attitudeandvalues.Itisacceptedthataperson’ssuccessisinfluencedbynumerousfactors.includingefforts,opportunityandpersonality.Undoubtedly,universitystudyhasinfluenceon/exertsinfluenceonmanysidesofourlife.Toalargeextent,itmayhelpapersonmakegreatachievement.However,manysuccessfulpeopledon’tattributetheirachievementtothetheoreticalknowledgeinuniversity.Thisissuehasarousedsomedebate.Ithinkfurtheranalysisshouldbemadebeforemakinganunbiasedconclusion.Frommyperspective,it’sworthfurtherdiscussiontodrawaconclusion.Thisessaywillexploreitandfindanacceptableconclusion.Nowadayscrimerateskeepincreasinginasteadywayandthereareanincreasingnumberofcriminals.Howtodealwiththecriminalshascausedsomeconcern.Somepeopleproposeputtingtheminjailswhileothersregardeducationasabetterway.Frommyperspective,Iaminfavoroftheformer/thelatter.Ithinkthereissometruth/somepositivesignificanceinbothsides.Ithinkbothareacceptable/feasibleindealingwiththeproblem.Ithinkthecombinationofbothsidesismorefeasibletosolvetheproblem.Somepeoplethinkthatgoodhealthisabasichumanneed,sothemedicalserviceshouldnotberunbyprofit-makingcompany.Doyouthinkthedisadvantagesofprivatehealthcareoutweightheadvantages?ImportanceInfluenceCauseBackgroundFunctionDefinitionHealthisimportantEveryaspectofourlifeisinfluencedbyhealth=goodhealthhasdecisiveinfluenceoneveryaspectofourlifeincludingourwork,studyandsurvival.Aperson’sgoodhealthisguaranteed/ensuredbybodyexercises,reasonabledietandmedicalcare.MedicalcarecanMedicalcareisaneffectivemeansofensuringpeople’sgoodhealthandkeepingallthesocialmembersequal.Thereislong-termdebate/controversyaboutwho,maleorfemale,ismorefittedtoleaders.Somepeoplethinkthatmalestendtopreferwarsandconflicts,thereforetheyadvocatethatfemalesastheleaderwillcontributetoworldpeace.