贛州一模讀后續(xù)寫個人成長類-假發(fā)女孩重獲新生講義高考英語一輪復(fù)習

續(xù)寫：友誼讓假發(fā)女孩重獲新生Donnaismysister,andIhadalwaysconsideredherbeautiful.Ourfathercalledherhisprincess,andinhighschool,shewasknownastheschoolbabe.Ourparentswereprotectiveofus,particularlyourfather,whokeptclosewatchoverthefriendsshemade.唐娜是我的妹妹，我一直認為她很漂亮。我們的父親稱她為他的公主，在高中時，她被稱為學校的寶貝。我們的父母保護我們，尤其是我們的父親，他密切關(guān)注著她結(jié)交的朋友。OneSaturdayinApril,aboyinvitedDonnatoaparkwithfourotherfriends.Unfortunately,ontheirwaytothepark,theircarcrashedintoaguardrailandflippedoverthreetimesbeforeitcametoastoponitsroof.Donnawaspulledfromthecarandrushedtothehospitalwithoutdelay.四月的一個星期六，一個男孩邀請?zhí)颇群推渌膫€朋友去公園。不幸的是，在去公園的路上，他們的車撞上了護欄，翻了三次，然后停在了車頂上。唐娜被從車里拖了出來，立即被送往醫(yī)院。Donnawasinthehospitalfortwoweeks.Manyofherfriendswenttoseeher,especiallyClaudia,whowastherealot.However,MomandDad

neverlikedClaudia.

Idon'treallyknowwhy.Theyjustdidn'tlikeherbeingaround.唐娜在醫(yī)院住了兩個星期。她的許多朋友都去看她，尤其是克勞迪婭，她經(jīng)常去。然而，爸爸媽媽從來都不喜歡克勞迪婭。我真的不知道為什么。他們只是不喜歡她在身邊。Donnareturnedhomewiththeentiretophalfofherheadshaved.Shehadhundredsofstitches

（縫線）,someofwhichcameacrossherforeheadandbetweenherlefteyeandeyebrow.KnowingDonna'sconcernforherappearance,Momfoundherahumanhairwig

（假發(fā)）

thatperfectlymatchedherhair.唐娜回到家時，整個上半部分都剃光了。她縫了幾百針(縫線）,其中一些穿過了她的前額，在左眼和眉毛之間。媽媽知道唐娜很在意自己的外表，就給她找了一頂假發(fā)(假發(fā)）與她的頭發(fā)非常相配。Donnafinallyrecoveredandwentbacktoschool.Butsheneverfeltgoodinschool.Therewasaveryloudmouthed,selfcenteredgirlinDonna'sclasswhotookgreatpleasureinteasingher.Thisgirl,seatedbehindDonna,wouldpullslightlyonDonna'swigandmockinglysaid,"Hey,Wiggy,let'sseeyourscars（傷疤）".Thenshewouldlaugh.唐娜終于康復(fù)并回到學校。但她在學校的感覺從來都不好。唐娜的班上有一個聲音很大、以自我為中心的女孩，她非常喜歡取笑她。這個女孩坐在唐娜身后，輕輕地扯著唐娜的假發(fā)，嘲諷地說：“嘿，威吉，讓我們看看你的傷疤(傷疤）”。然后她會笑。DonnaenduredthismistreatmentinsilenceuntilthedayshetoldClaudia.Fromthenon,Claudiakeptacloseeyeonmysister,preventinganyonefrombotheringher.TherewassomethingaboutClaudiathatwasfrightening,eventotheworstkidsinschool.Nobodymessedwithher.Unfortunately,though,Claudiawasn'talwaysaround,andtheteasingandnamecallingcontinued.唐娜默默地忍受著這種虐待，直到她告訴克勞迪婭的那一天。從那時起，克勞迪婭一直密切關(guān)注著我妹妹，不讓任何人打擾她?？藙诘蠇I身上有些可怕的東西，甚至對學校里最糟糕的孩子來說也是如此。沒人惹她。然而，不幸的是，克勞迪婭并不總是在身邊，嘲笑和謾罵仍在繼續(xù)。Paragraph1:

Oneday,Claudiacametoourhomewithaspecialsurprise.Paragraph2:

DonnaandClaudiaworetheirwigsforoverayear.故事大意：Donna被家人和同齡人認為很漂亮，她的父親特別保護她。四月的一個星期六，唐娜和一個男孩以及其他四個朋友去公園。他們的車撞上護欄翻了個身，最后撞到了車頂上。唐娜被從車上拖下來后立即被緊急送往醫(yī)院。她在醫(yī)院住了兩個星期，尤其是很多朋友都來看望她。她的父母不喜歡克勞迪婭，原因不明。唐娜回家時剃了上半個光頭，戴上了假發(fā)?；氐綄W校，唐娜被一個嘲笑她的假發(fā)的同學取笑。克勞迪婭開始保護唐娜，阻止其他人取笑她。盡管有克勞迪婭的保護，但當她不在身邊時，玩笑仍在繼續(xù)。續(xù)寫情節(jié)發(fā)展：Firstparagraph:(1)ThesurprisewasthatClaudiaalsoshavedoffherownhair.(2)Ourfamily,especiallyDonna'sreaction.(3)ClaudiaexplainedtoDonnathereasonfordoingso.(4)Thenextday,whenthetwoofthemwenttoschoolwithwigs,mostoftheirclassmatesandteachersreacted.(5)ThegirlwhokeptmockingDonnastoppedherbehaviorandexplainedthereason.Secondparagraph:(1)Donna'schangeinmindsetduringthisperiodistoregainconfidenceandbeestronger.(2)Oneday,Donnamusteredupthecouragetoenterthecampuswithoutwearingawigandcalmlyacceptedthegazeofothers.(3)Thechangeinmyparents'perceptionofClaudia.(4)Afterthisincident,DonnaandClaudia'sfriendshipdeepened.參考答案：Paragraph1:Oneday,Claudiacametoourhomewithaspecialsurprise.

SensinghowterribleDonnafeltaboutherhair,shehadshavedoffherownbeautifullongbrownhairtoinspireDonnaandputherselfinDonna’sshoes.Atthesightofthescene,Donnawasdeeplystruckbyherwarmmove.Thenextday,theywentshopping,selectingidenticalblondandbrownwigs.Whentheywenttoschoolasusual,Claudiawasreadyforbeingmadefunofbyotherstudents.PeoplewhoarereadytoteasemysisterknowtheywillprovokeClaudia.Soon,thisnewsquicklyspreadthroughoutthecampus.Paragraph2:DonnaandClaudiaworetheirwigsforoverayear.

Theypatientlywaiteduntiltheyfeltateaseshowingtheirnaturalhair.Donna,havinggrowntobeastrongerconfidenceandacceptance,ultimatelywenttoschoolwithoutthewigswearingabrightsmile.WithClaudia’sfirmsupportasthebrightspot,Donnasurvivedthedarkestmomentinschool,graduatedfromhighschool,gotmarriedtohisbe