初中英語中考作文指導(公開課).ppt

1、,中考英語書面表達,萍鋼中學,中考英語作文8個話題,一、介紹人 （自己、家庭、朋友、老師、個人變化、個人感受等） 二、介紹地點（旅游等） 三、校園生活（春游、校規(guī)、科目、學習困難等） 四、課外生活 （家庭生活、家務勞動、電影、個人愛好等） 五、假期安排 （計劃、過去經歷等） 六、節(jié)假日活動 （志愿者活動、過去經歷） 七、環(huán)境、健康 （環(huán)保、疾病、食品健康等） 八、個人觀點建議 （提建議、勸告等）,寫作指導 Lets go for it!,basic structure (基本結構的安排),Dear Mr. Know， I m pleased to write to ask for some h

2、elp. I want to tell you some problems we meet in English study. First，some of us arent interested in English. We think studying English is such a boring thing. And then its so difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots of us dont have enough confidence to keep up English study.

3、 And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. Whats more, there are so many new words we havent meet before in the passage. I dont know what to do. Sometimes we cant understand the main idea, let alone(更不用說)answer the questions about them. But the most difficult thing is to write. We often

4、 use wrong words and sentences. Can you help us? How can we improve our English? Please give us some useful advice. Thank you very much. Write to me soon.,Lets go for it!,Mary,(the beginning),(the ending),the body（正文）,basic rules (寫作考試規(guī)則),search（審） list（列） add(加: 開頭和結尾) connect(連) beautiful(美：諺語/例子)

5、,牛刀小試,健康很重要。在學習和工作的壓力日趨增大的今天，會休息的人才會有健康的身體。人們是如何度過假期的呢？國際健康組織對此作了一次調查，右圖是他們此次的調查結果。根據你所得的信息，請為國際健康組織寫一篇完整的調查報告,并提倡大家進行假日休閑。,審(search),travel,stay at home,visit friends or parents,work,如何度假 調查報告 倡議假日休閑,stay at home,work,visit friends or parents,travel,列(list),根據以下關鍵詞及圖表用簡單的句子列出文章的要點。,A lot of people

6、travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Enjoy your vacation.,列(list),加(add),加首尾，使結構完整。 可以采取總分總結構，開頭或結尾的句子應注意簡潔、漂亮。,How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. （the beginning） A lot of people travel. Some people

7、 stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. （the ending）,加(add beginning and ending),Writing skills（“寫”的技巧）,方法一:善用詞匯 甚至善用高級詞匯,Which is better?,他們在海灘上聽音樂。,A They listen

8、ed to the music on the beach. B They enjoyed the music on the beach.,Which is better?,我希望你能幫助我。,A I wish you can help me. B Im looking forward to your help.,Which is better?,他們很早就到了。,A They arrived early. B They arrived as early as they could.,Which is better?,最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很驚訝。,A His dog was saved a

9、t last. He was very surprised. B To his surprise, his dog was saved at last.,A I think learning English is interesting. B I find it really fun to learn English .,我認為學英語很有趣。,我們應該保護環(huán)境。,A We should protect the environment. B Its our duty to protect the environment.,方法二:活用多種句型,Writing skills（“寫”的技巧）,她還小

10、，搬不動這么重的箱子。,A She is very young. She cant carry the heavy box. B She is too young to carry the heavy box. C She is so young that she cant carry the D She is not old enough to carry the,方法三:妙用關聯(lián)詞,Writing skills（“寫”的技巧）,1.表示并列或遞進: and, as well as, bothand, whats more not onlybut also, neithernor 2.表示選

11、擇: or, eitheror 3.表示轉折: but,however,althoughthough,after all,anyway 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore,since,for,as a result 5.表示條件: if , unless 6.表示對比: instead, notbut, while, in the same way, on the one handon the other hand 7.表示解釋: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words,to

12、 tell the truth 8.表示順序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end 9.表示強調: also, besides, especially, actually, in fact 10.表示結論: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking, in short,關聯(lián)詞(connection words),用適當?shù)倪B詞連接文段,My nam

13、e is Tom. I am 15 years old. _ my appearances, I am tall _ I wear glasses. _ my personalities, I am shy _friendly. I have a happy family. There are 3 people in my family. I have lots of hobbies. _,I enjoy_singing _ collecting stamps. Now, I study in Class 1, Grade 3, Bayi High School. My favorite su

14、bject is math. _, I am interested in English,Chinese,physics _. I live far from school _ I usually get up at 6:00 and go to school by subway. _, I have a busy _wonderful life.,As for,and,As for,but,For example,not only,but also,Besides,and so on,so,In a word,but,Lets try,_ I am tired, I keep on work

15、ing till midnight. He didnt go to movies, he went to the concert _. We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming, running and hiking. _, he stood up. Then he got out. _, he went back. _, he smiled.,ThoughAlthough,instead,like,First,Next,FinallyAt last,How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey

16、 and here is our report. According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,連(connect),According to it,

17、most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. However, a few people have to work. As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your

18、vacation. People who relax well work well.,美(beautify),And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed.,Proverb（諺語）/saying,加諺語(Proverb/saying) 可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。,鍛煉對學生有好處,It is good for us students to take exercise,As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”

19、It is good for us students to take exercise.,集中注意力于學習,We should concentrate on our studies.,As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies.,加諺語(Proverb/saying) 可用于開頭和結尾，多是結尾。,加諺語(Proverb/saying) 可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。,加入英語俱樂部是學習英語的好方法,Joining the English club i

20、s a good way to learn English.,As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” So joining the English club is a good way to learn English.,加諺語(Proverb/saying) 可用于開頭和結尾，多是結尾。,加諺語(Proverb/saying) 可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。,Enjoy some proverbs,1.Practice makes perfect. 2.Think twice before you do. 4.D

21、o as the Romans do.,三思而后行。,熟能生巧。,有志者事竟成。,入鄉(xiāng)隨俗。,早起的鳥兒有蟲吃。,失敗是成功之母。,5.The early bird catches the worm.,3.Where there is a will, there is a way.,6.Failure is the mother of success.,Enjoy some proverbs,7.It is no use crying over spilt milk. 8.An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 9.All roads lead to Rom

22、e. 10.Never too old to learn.,覆水難收。,一天一個蘋果， 醫(yī)生遠離我。,條條大路通羅馬。,活到老，學到老。,方法四:妙用引文和例子（多用于“the body”）,Writing skills（“寫”的技巧）,青少年應盡我們所能保護環(huán)境拯救地球。,We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.,For example, we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, stop using napk

23、ins, plant more trees and save water and energy.,加例子,加例子,在家里，我經常幫助父母親干家務活。,I often help my parents do housework,such as washing dishes, folding the clothes, taking out the trash and so on.,結尾：提出倡議或號召,Lets Do it now ! / Dont do it again! As students, we should start from ourselves.,Dont wait. Join us

24、 now! Start to join us now! Dont put it off! Become a volunteer today! How amazing! I cant wait! Save animals! Save Ourselves! Save our planet! Dont hesitate(猶豫). It will be great fun!,練練筆，寫作文,First，some of us arent interested in English. We think studying English is such a boring thing. And then it

25、s so difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots of us dont have enough confidence to keep up English study. And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. Whats more, there are so many new words we havent met before in the passage. I dont know what to do. Sometimes we c

26、ant understand the main idea, let alone(更不用說)answer the questions about them. But the most difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and sentences.,Lets go for it!,Dear Mary, I heard you didnt do well in English. Here is some advice for you.,Yours ,_, I think reading English every day an

27、d listening to the teacher carefully in class are the most important._, you can join the English club to practice English. You know, “Practice makes perfect.” _, it is necessary for you to listen to the English radio every morning. It can improve your listening skill. _, English is not difficult to

28、learn and I hope what I have said is helpful for you.,Your turn to go for it!（試填一填）,Dear Mary, I heard you didnt do well in English. Here is some advice for you.,Yours ,_, I think reading English every day and listening to the teacher carefully in class are the most important._, you can join the Eng

29、lish club to practice English. You know, “Practice makes perfect.” _, it is necessary for you to listen to the English radio every morning. It can improve your listening skill._, English is not difficult to learn and I hope what I have said is helpful for you.,To begin with,Of course,In fact,Then,Yo

30、ur turn to go for it!（check）,The Life as a Grade 9 Student How time flies! Now Im in Grade Nine. Actually I feel the life is quite different from it used to be. Now Im as busy as a bee. Theres a lot of homework and exams. The only feeling I have is : The life as a Grade Nine student is very busy and

31、 challenging ! ! Theres an old saying: He who fails to plan plans to fail. I dont want to fail, so I create a plan for the following days. Since nothing is difficult if I put my heart into it, I will change my attitude towards maths and physics which I am poor at now. Ill spend the rest time efficiently. As theres no elevator to success, Ill try my best to do everything step by step! I believe that I can do it!,Its your turn! （ 請分析以下的文章）,Your turn to go for it!,Good words:,Good sentences:,Connection words:,隨著人口的增多，人類不僅需要越來越多的地方居住，而且需要越來越多的食物。人類把森林變成了耕地；新的城市和道路占據了動物的棲息地；許多動物遭到獵殺所有這些都導致