留學(xué)澳洲：雅思考試作文寫作技巧

1、留學(xué)澳洲：雅思考試作文寫作技巧一、外顯連接所謂外顯連接是指用特定的連接詞將相關(guān)信息進(jìn)行連接。 通常情 況下，例子作為論據(jù)由 for example, for instanee, like, such as, takeas等引出。女 如: it is undeni able that mobile phones have facilitated our lives in many differe nt ways. For example, whe n an emerge ncy occurs, such as a traffic accident or a violent crime, mobi

2、le phones can help the victims to call the police or an ambula nee immediately for help.本例中，for example 弓丨出例子論證“ mobile phones have facilitated our lives in many different ways.” 而后面的 such as則引出emergency 的具體形式。For instanee與它的用法完全相 同，即后面要接句子例證。Like, such as, takeas等直接名詞（或i相當(dāng)于名詞的詞）。由于這些都是基本常識(shí)，這里不再贅述為了

3、使連接詞多樣化，建議考生運(yùn)用下面的一些短語(yǔ)（或句式） 連接論點(diǎn)和論據(jù)：is a case in point;serve as a typical exampleca n be take n as an example;one example is that ano ther one is that等女口： Working part time when you are studying in universityis beneficial to your life. I myself is a case in point (or my experiences serve as a typical

4、 example ) . Through thoseexperie nces,I have lear ned to be in depe ndentandresp on sible.二、內(nèi)化連接實(shí)際上，大家看原汁原味的文英文文章會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)有些信息的連接不 用外顯式，而是通過(guò)某些特定的詞或者特定的方式給讀者以清晰的層 次感，從而使文章信息傳遞更通暢。下面我們來(lái)看一下哪些例證可以省去連接詞，實(shí)現(xiàn)內(nèi)化連接。1、人物經(jīng)歷作例子其中的人物可以是名人， Thomas Edis on gave us an examplethat success only comes after persiste nee and

5、 hard work.也可以是作者自己的親身經(jīng)歷 I remember that ten years ago cellphones were unu sual and seldom see n.人物經(jīng)歷作例子因?yàn)槠漭^強(qiáng)的故事性而引人關(guān)注。但是切記，如果運(yùn)用名人做例證，要注意 信息的準(zhǔn)確性； 如果運(yùn)用自己的親身經(jīng)歷做例子則要注意例子選擇 是否典型、有說(shuō)服力。但是無(wú)論怎樣，有人物經(jīng)歷時(shí)，一定會(huì)給人以 非常明確的細(xì)節(jié)信息的感覺(jué)，所以完全可以省去連接詞。2、數(shù)字信息作例子：引入帶有數(shù)字信息的例證，除可以更具體、更詳實(shí)的說(shuō)明觀點(diǎn)外, 也可以內(nèi)化連接詞，因?yàn)閿?shù)字信息所要傳遞的一定是一個(gè)量化的概 念，而這一

6、概念就是它所要論證的中心?？磦€(gè)例子：The work was imme nse:filli ngabout eighty largeno tebooks (and without a library to han d), Joh nson wrote the definitions of over 40,000 words, and illustrated their many meanings with some 114,000 quotati ons draw n from En glish writingon every subject, from the Elizabethans to

7、 his owntime.例子中immense是觀點(diǎn)中心詞，后面的具體數(shù)字都是對(duì)這一中心詞的佐證。（當(dāng)然我們不要忘記這里“：”也是在幫助這段文字內(nèi)化連接，相當(dāng)于“ for example ”）3、專有名詞信息作例子 fact 的形式出現(xiàn)。如:人名、地名屬于細(xì)節(jié)信息的范疇,也經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)在例證中，以一種Airpolluti onis increasinglybeco mingthe focus ofgover nmentandcitizenconcernaround 1the globe.FromMexicoCityandNewYork toSin gaporeand Tokyo,newsoluti

8、 onstothisoldproblemare beingproposedandimpleme nted with ever in creas ing speed.當(dāng)你看至 U這些地名時(shí)，一定會(huì)想到它們是某一類具有相同性質(zhì)的地域的代表，那么自然也就是點(diǎn)信息，而非面信息，從而可以省去連接詞的使用，卻依然保持主次分明其它諸如期刊雜志名、書名等專有名詞也可以有類似的用法。4、一些小的介詞（短語(yǔ)）引導(dǎo)例子如果大家注意總結(jié)，會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)雅思閱讀文章中有一些介詞（短語(yǔ)） 也可以引出例子。女口： from to: Toughened glass is found everywhere, fromcars and bus shelters to the windows, walls and roofs of thousa nds of build ings around the world.再如：including:Other substances were thenintroduced:including fillers,catalysts and hexa.這里 including 相當(dāng)于 such , like 等。綜上，舉例論證除了需要牢牢掌握大家熟知的表舉例的連接詞夕卜，還要注意積累一些隱去連接詞卻嵌入一些表細(xì)節(jié)信息的詞匯的情 況，或者注意學(xué)習(xí)老外用標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)以及被我們輕視