【高中專用】關(guān)于高考英語書面表達公開課課件

1、英語書面表達常見錯誤（一）一）3錯誤類型一錯誤類型一: :漢式英語錯誤漢式英語錯誤4誤:He cost five yuan to buy a dictionary. 正:或誤:Good good study, day day up. 正:It cost him five yuan to buy a dictionary.If you study hard ,you will make progress every day.The dictionary cost him five yuan.5正正:It is suitable to grow vegetables here.誤:There ha

2、ve many students in the classroom.正:There are many students in the classroom.誤:Here is suitable to grow vegetables.6誤: We are very like English. 正: We like English very much.7(6)誤: The price of the computer is expensive. 正: (7)誤: The population of China is many. 正:The price of the computer is high.T

3、he population of China is large.8(8)誤: Recently our village have taken place great changes . 正: Recently great changes have taken place in our village.9(9)誤: That factory broke out a fire last Sunday. 正: (10)誤: This building likes a school. 正:A fire broke out in that factory last Sunday.This buildin

4、g looks likeis like/is a school.10(11)誤: I will by bus to Beijing tomorrow. 正:Ill go to Beijing by bus tomorrow.或或Ill take a bus to Beijing tomorrow.11(12)誤: His friends are few. 正: He has few friends.12錯誤類型二錯誤類型二: :句子結(jié)構(gòu)不完整句子結(jié)構(gòu)不完整或結(jié)構(gòu)錯誤或結(jié)構(gòu)錯誤13 一個句子至少包括主語和一個句子至少包括主語和謂語兩部分謂語兩部分(祈使句除外祈使句除外)。如。如果把句子的某一個部

5、分當成一果把句子的某一個部分當成一個句子，就會導致非完整句子。個句子，就會導致非完整句子。兩個各含有主語和謂語的分句兩個各含有主語和謂語的分句不能寫在一起，也不能只用逗不能寫在一起，也不能只用逗號隔開。號隔開。14誤: There were foreigners came to our school.正: 或: 誤: Without a friend will feel lonely.正:There were foreigners who came to our school.Without a friend one will feel lonely.There were foreighner

6、s coming to our school.15（3）誤: The book was interesting. I read it rapidly.正: 正:The book was interesting; I read it rapidly.The book was interesting, and I read it rapidly.16（4）誤: The woman talked to you just now is our English teacher.正: （5）誤: I cant imagine what life would be like if have not any

7、TV sets.正:The woman who talked to you just now is our English teacher.I cant imagine what life would be like if we have not any TV sets.或：I cant imagine what life would be like if there are not any TV sets.17（6）誤:The sun gives off heat and light, this makes it possible for the plants on the earth to

8、 grow.正:The sun gives off heat and light, which makes it possible for the plants on the earth to grow.18錯誤類型三：錯誤類型三：重復累贅重復累贅19 有些英語單詞本身自帶有些英語單詞本身自帶某個意思，或由于語法需某個意思，或由于語法需要不能再出現(xiàn)某個單詞，要不能再出現(xiàn)某個單詞，而學生基本功夫不夠扎實，而學生基本功夫不夠扎實，常常出現(xiàn)累贅現(xiàn)象。常常出現(xiàn)累贅現(xiàn)象。20(1)誤: We hope to improve our work better.正:We hope to improve our

9、 work.21 (2)誤: Yours class was interesting.正:Your class was interesting.22(3)誤: Personally I think he is a good student.正:I think he is a good student.23（4）誤: Mary married with John.正: （5）誤: I returned back the book to you yesterday.正:Mary married John.I returned the book to you yesterday.24（6）誤: Th

10、e teacher repeated the sentence again.正: （7）誤: My most favorite song is “Hand in Hand”.正:The teacher repeated the sentence.My favorite song is “Hand in Hand”.25（8）誤: The train is entering into the tunnel.正:The train is entering the tunnel.(9)誤:Its a story which is interesting. 正：Its an interesting s

11、tory. 26錯誤類型四：錯誤類型四：語法、詞法錯誤語法、詞法錯誤27 許多考生寫作中易犯關(guān)許多考生寫作中易犯關(guān)系不一致、詞性混用、選系不一致、詞性混用、選詞或搭配不當，時態(tài)語態(tài)詞或搭配不當，時態(tài)語態(tài)錯誤、指代不清、語序不錯誤、指代不清、語序不當?shù)确矫娴腻e誤。當?shù)确矫娴腻e誤。28誤: In the bedroom there are a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.正: 誤: He closed the door and hurries away to class.正:In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a des

12、k and a chair.He closed the door and hurried away to class.29（3）誤: In order to learn English well, I should increase/raise the method of study.正:. （4）誤: Tom was in such a hurry that he forget his schoolbag on the bus.正:In order to learn English well, I should improve the method of studyTom was in su

13、ch a hurry that he left his schoolbag on the bus.30錯誤類型五：錯誤類型五：拼寫錯誤及注意拼寫錯誤及注意標點符號標點符號31 考生出現(xiàn)單詞拼寫錯誤的原因：考生出現(xiàn)單詞拼寫錯誤的原因： 一是因為發(fā)音錯誤導致拼寫錯誤，一是因為發(fā)音錯誤導致拼寫錯誤，如：如：strick（strict）；二是因為不）；二是因為不知道動詞的不規(guī)則變化所導致的，知道動詞的不規(guī)則變化所導致的，如：如： teached（taught）等。）等。 標點符號是一種變相文字，是標點符號是一種變相文字，是書面表達不可缺少的重要手段，很書面表達不可缺少的重要手段，很多學生不了解不同標點

14、符號的用途多學生不了解不同標點符號的用途或英漢標點差異，結(jié)果出現(xiàn)錯誤?；蛴h標點差異，結(jié)果出現(xiàn)錯誤。 Dear neighbour,Im glad to tell you that your child is very lovely and energetic.He can play until midnight.But he bothered me.（扯閑話，兜圈子）（扯閑話，兜圈子） Dear neighbour,I was once again waked up by the noise from the ceiling above at the middle of the night.

15、That was the time you returned home(開門見山，直奔主題開門見山，直奔主題) We have just had a class meeting on the topic of “saving money”.As we all know,money is very important in our life,but it isnt the most important.I think the most important thing is friendship,love and so on.（下筆千言，離題萬里）（下筆千言，離題萬里）（二）（二）作文句式的多變性

16、作文句式的多變性 恰當使用復雜句型恰當使用復雜句型（1）改變時態(tài)改變時態(tài) 例例：The bell is ringing now.(一般一般)There goes the bell.(高級高級)（2）改變語態(tài)例：People suggest that the conference be put off.It is suggested that the conference be put off. （高級）(一般一般)(一般一般)（3）使用不定式）使用不定式例：He is so kind that he can help me.He is so kind as to help me.（高級）（高級

17、）（4）使用過去分詞）使用過去分詞例：She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.（一般）（一般）Followed by many students,she walked out of the lab（高級）（高級）Once it is seen,it can never be forgotten.(一般一般)Once seen,it can never be forgotten.（高級）（高級）Not until I finished the work did I go to the cinema.（5）使用強調(diào)句式和倒裝語序例：