續(xù)寫好句積累——突破20+

1、高考"讀后續(xù)寫"要求盡可能地應(yīng)用較多較復(fù)雜的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯,同時(shí)能有效地使用語(yǔ)句間的連接成分,使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊.下面是九個(gè)在續(xù)寫中經(jīng)常用到的句型,如果你能在續(xù)寫中加以使用,一定會(huì)給你的續(xù)寫增添色彩,也會(huì)讓閱卷老師眼前一亮.將這些句型熟練地組合使用,根據(jù)需要參加狀語(yǔ)從句、名詞性從句或者是定語(yǔ)從句,可以在這九個(gè)句型的根底上寫出許多較復(fù)雜的好句來(lái).續(xù)寫突破20+不是夢(mèng),就看你用不用.Doing.,主+謂.doing作狀語(yǔ),邏輯主語(yǔ)與句子的主語(yǔ)一致,構(gòu)成主動(dòng)關(guān)系；有時(shí)可以在doing前加before,after,while等；但如果是被動(dòng)關(guān)系,應(yīng)該使用過(guò)去分詞done作狀語(yǔ).例如：1

2、) SeeingtearsinMark'seyes,AnniedecidedtopromisetotheboythatshewouldletMarkcutherhair,too.2) Hesitatingalittle,MarkpromisedtoAnniethathewouldworkhardathisEnglish.3) Findingaclinicnearby,theywentinsideandtoldthereceptionistwhathadhappen.4) Ignoringherwords,themanwalkedawayquickly.5) Approachingthe

3、doorway,Jennytookadeepbreath.6) Hearingthis,Catherineranasfastasherlegscouldcarryher.7) WhiledecoratingthetreetogetherwithMama,Iaccidentallydroppedandbrokeanoldglassonit.8) Wantinghimtotakehisflowerandgoofftoplay,Ifakedasmileandthenturnedtotheotherside.9) Afterreachinghome,shetoldeverythingtoherbrot

4、her.10) Hearinghisbrother'swords,sherushedbacktotheshoptofindtheboybuttimeneverwaitsforanyone.11) Havingwanderedaimlesslyinthestressforhours,shefeltalittlehungryandwishedforsomethingtoeat.12) Dressedinaballetdress,shemanagedtoslipintothedressingroomwithoutbeingnoticed.主+謂.,doing.doing作伴隨狀語(yǔ),與句子的謂

5、語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞同時(shí)發(fā)生,邏輯主語(yǔ)與句子的主語(yǔ)一致,構(gòu)成主動(dòng)關(guān)系；該句型可以以并列謂語(yǔ)的形式出現(xiàn),轉(zhuǎn)化為：主+謂and謂；但如果是被動(dòng)關(guān)系,應(yīng)該使用過(guò)去分詞done作伴隨狀語(yǔ).例如：1) Thegirlbegankickingandswinging,tryingtogetfreeoftheman'shold.2) Shebravelyapproachedhim,handinghimabunchofredroses.3) Bittermemoriesoftheman'sharshwordscamefloodingbacktoher.4) Herfatherwaslyingonhisback

6、,trappedunderthetruck.5) HerDadwasstillconscious,yelling,"Onemoretry!"6) "It'sOK,"Mamasaid,comfortingmewithahug.7) Carefullylayingthenoteaside,Icleanedupthebrokenpiecesoftheball,wishingIcouldstickthemtogether.8) Ifollowedher,notbelievingmyeyes.主1+謂.,主2+doing.邏輯主語(yǔ)2與doing構(gòu)成主動(dòng)關(guān)系

7、,構(gòu)成獨(dú)立主格,在句中作狀語(yǔ).該句型或以轉(zhuǎn)化為并列句：主1+謂.and主2+謂.例如：1) Hestoodthere,tearsofgratitudewellingupinhiseyes.-Hestoodthereandtearsofgratitudewelledupinhiseyes.2) Sheopenedtheletter,herhandstremblingwithexcitement.-Sheopenedtheletterandherhandstrembledwithexcitement.3) "Don'tstandinmyway,"Timyelledout

8、,hisvoicequiveringwithrage."Don'tstandinmyway,"Timyelledoutandhisvoicewasquiveringwithrage.主+謂1.,謂2.,and謂3.描述一系列的動(dòng)作.如果是兩個(gè)動(dòng)作,可以用這樣的結(jié)構(gòu)：主+謂.and(then)謂.例如1)Theadultsputonperformance,chatted,andsaidtheirgoodbye.2)Shestoppedthetrucksafelyoutsidethegarageandthenrushedbacktothebasement.3)Peter

9、rushedtothesceneandwasastonishedtofindthecatingoodshape.4)Sheyawnedandturnedtolookbackatherhouseacrossthestress.5) Despitethegreatdifficulties,healwayshadapositiveattitudeandgreetedeveryoneeachmorningwithahugesmile.6) Hestoodrightbeforeme,andsaidwithgreatexcitement,"LookwhatIfound!"7) Irea

10、chedfortheflowerandreplied,"JustwhatIneed."8) Grandmasighedandturnedtowardsthekitchen.9) Shethoughtforawhileandthencontinued.10) Sheturnedaroundandsawmestandinginthedoorway.表情感類的形容詞,主+謂情感類的形容詞在句中作狀語(yǔ),說(shuō)明主語(yǔ)的狀態(tài),可以轉(zhuǎn)化為Feelingadj,主+謂.有時(shí)可以放在句后：主+謂.,表情感類的形容詞.例如：1) Eagerandexcited,sheflaggedheryello

11、wblouse,tryingtoattractothers'attention.2) Exhaustedandscared,Janelaydownnearastone,missingherfamilyatadistance.3) ToAnnie'sdelight,surroundedbyhisclassmates,Markseemedlikearockstar,cheerfulandproud.4) Andthenheranofftoplay,unawareoftheimpacthe'dhadonme.5) Shegotdisappointedandreturnedho

12、me,continuouslyangryatherself.6) Jennysatthere,speechlessandnumbwithshock.7) Istoodinthelivingroomdoorway,absolutelyshocked.8) Shehungherhead,notsurehowtoreply.9) Theyagreednevertoquarrelagain,determinedtolivethelifetothefullest.10) Desperateandhopeless,Janekneltdown,tearsstreamingdownherface.11) Ex

13、tremelyworried,theydecidedtowaitforthematMac'shome.方式副詞(ly),主+謂方式副詞在句中作狀語(yǔ),修飾謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞,一般放在句末,但有時(shí)根據(jù)需要可以放在句首.例如：1) Gently,shepickedupthefirstbaby,ranbackoutsideandlaiditonthesidewalk.2) Quickly,shefollowedthesoundtoastream.3) Attentively,welistenedtotheteacherinclass.4) Immediately,anabsolutedarknessru

14、ledtheforest.5) Carefully,Timdidhishomework.句子副詞,主+謂句子副詞在句中作狀語(yǔ),修飾整個(gè)句子,放在句首,引出句子.例如：1) Andamazingly,theboysrecoveredsoonafterbeingperformedCPR.2) Fortunately,thecatwasstillalive,thoughbadlyinjured.3) Incredibly(Unbelievably),shewasabletocarryherlastchildoutbeforetheroofandwallsfell.4) "Actually,

15、Iwastouchedbyyourkindness!"saidJenny,wipinghertears.5) Luckily,Iwasabletoborrowafewdollorsfromaclerkatthehotel.地點(diǎn)狀語(yǔ)或表示運(yùn)動(dòng)方向的副詞+謂(vi)+主該句型是一個(gè)全部倒裝句,主語(yǔ)必須是名詞,謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞為不及物動(dòng)詞,常見(jiàn)的表運(yùn)動(dòng)方向的副詞有：in,out,off,away,up,down,outside,inside等.例如：1) AtthebackofthecrowdwasMark,determinednottobeleftbehind.2) Inhishandwasaf

16、lower,withitspetalsallworn.3) AtthefrontdoorstoodherdearhusbandwhosufferedgreatanxietywhenJanewasnowheretobefound.4) Aheadsatanoldwoman.5) Awaywentthecrowdonebyone.6) Downfelltheleaves.7) Incameastrangerinblack.時(shí)間狀語(yǔ),主+謂時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)一般放在句末,但有些時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)放在句首,能使行文連貫,邏輯合理.如：shortlyafterwards,hourslater,beforelong,atth

17、atmoment,afterthat,severalminutesafterthat,afterseeminglyalongtime,afterwhatseemedalongtime,inthemeanwhile,beforeIknewit,Itwasn'tlongbefore.等.例如：1) Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.2) Forthefirsttimeinherlife,Mariafeltfrightenedandalone.3) Inthemeanwhile,Bradandhiswifejumpedintotheircarandfollowedclosebehind.4) Onthemorningofthecompetition,shewasnervous.However,withhermother'sencouragement,shehadnothingtofear.5) Amonthlater,LarryappearedinEric'sclassroom.6) Atthistime,aboyapproa