2022年高考英語二輪練習(xí)：讀后續(xù)寫 專項(xiàng)練習(xí)題（含答案解析）.docx

1、2022年高考英語二輪練習(xí)：讀后續(xù)寫專項(xiàng)練習(xí)題11. 閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。ItwasarainyNovembermorning.OvercomewithangerIknewifIdidn'tleavethehousesoonIwouldlosemytemperwithmyhusband,Joe.Asraincamedowninsheets,Joeofferedtotakemetowork.Istruggledintomyjacket,seizedmybagandteachingplansandignoredhim.Heinsiste

2、dandreachedforhisboots.Ilookedatthepilesofnewspapersandthedirtydishessillonthetable."Don'tyouhaveenoughtodo?Icantakecareofmyself.”stormedout,notevenkissinghimgood-bye.Joeshoutedaftermenottotaketheshortcut.JoeandIhadbeeneagerlylookingforwardtoourretirementwhenaheartattackthatpastspringforced

3、himtoleavehisjobearlierthanwehadplanned.AsthemedicalbillsmountedwerealizedIwouldhavetocontinueworkingfull-timewhileJoestayedhomeandtookoverthehousework.Thenewarrangementwasadisaster.Exhaustedafteradayoffullwork,allIwantedwasahothome-cookedmealandagoodnight'ssleep.However,whatgreetedmeatthetablew

4、asamicrowavepackage.Sometimeshewouldserveoatmeal（燕麥）forseveralnightsinarow.OnenightwhenIdraggedmyselftobed,IwasterrifiedtodiscoverJoehadturnedourwhitesheetsblue.Hetoldmehehadfoundouthowtosaveonwater,soapandelectricity.Hepattedhisbluetrousersandannouncedproudlywashingeverythingtogetherwasjustthesecre

5、t.Tenminuteslater,ignoringJoeswarning,Iturnedoffthemainroute.Ithoughtithadn'trainedenoughtofloodtheroad,butasIroundedthecornerwaterrushedacrossmypath.Afterafewfeet,thecargotstuck.Iopenedthedoorandwaterpouredin.Ihurriedlyclosedthedoor.Icouldn'triskwalkinginthis.Almost20minutespassed.Thecarbeg

6、antoshake.IgotfrightenedtodeathwhenIheardthreelonghonks（喇叭聲）.注意：1. 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。1. 段落續(xù)寫： 由第一段首句內(nèi)容“開門的那個(gè)女人最近一直在哭，看起來既沮喪又焦慮。”可知，第一段可描寫Jenny找到失主后，詢問了相關(guān)信息確認(rèn)錢包的主人，開門的女人描述了錢包里錢的用處。Jenny把錢包還給女人的同時(shí)感覺愧疚。 由第二段首句內(nèi)容“女人微笑著接過錢包。”可知，第二段可描寫Jenny歸還錢包后，女人贊揚(yáng)了Jenny的行為。聽了女人對她的贊揚(yáng)后，Jenny被感動了。此時(shí)Jenny想到奶奶說

7、的話，她多么想把這個(gè)消息告訴奶奶。2. 續(xù)寫線索：失主開門一詢問還錢包女士驚訝女士感謝贊揚(yáng)感動告訴奶奶這個(gè)故事詞匯激活：行為類認(rèn)出:recognize/identify遞給：hand/pass拿出：takeout/bringout接受:accept/receive情緒類驚訝的：surprised/amazed/astonished感激的：grateful/thankful【范文點(diǎn)評】高分句型lTheoldladyblurtedoutatlast,hereyesroundinginsurpriseandsparklingwithhope.（獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)）高分句型2Nooneknowswhatth

8、ewalletmeanstothechildren,（what引導(dǎo)的從句為賓語從句）3【參考范文】Justthen,themayorsawayounggirlcomingalong.Shewasfromapoorfamilyandhadworkedallday,worn-out.Whenseeingthestone,shethought,Tt'sadangertowhoevercomesdownthestreetafterdark.Ishouldmoveitoutoftheway!"Thinasshewas,shepushedthestonewithallhermightan

9、dfinallymadeit.Turninground,shesawthegoldcoinswherethestonehadbeen.Rootedtothespotwithsurprise,shewaswonderingwhosegolditwas.Atthatmoment,themayorsteppedoutfrombehindthetree."Sir,"shesaid,Tsthisgoldyours?Ifnot,wesurelymustfindtheowner!”Hereplied,"Mydear,thegoldisminebutnowit'syour

10、s,becauseit'syouthathaslearnedthelessonIwanttoteachmypeople."Thestorywentaboutsoon.Theadultspassingearlierfeltashamedandguiltyabouttheirirresponsibility.Fromthenon,thepeopleinthistownbecamemoreresponsibleandcaringforeachother.Ofcourse,onegoodturndeservesanother.Yearslater,thewholetowntookon

11、acompletelynewoutlook.【寫作分析】本文以事件發(fā)展為線索展開，講述了一位新當(dāng)選的市長為了讓市民道德水平提高，設(shè)置了一道測試：放了一塊石頭在路中間，并自己躲在一旁現(xiàn)察。來來往往的人很多，但他們都是在抱怨而沒有挪走石頭，這讓市長很失望。1. 段落續(xù)寫： 由第一段首句內(nèi)容“正在這時(shí)，市長看到一個(gè)女孩走了過來?！笨芍ㄟ^上文對送奶工和滑倒女人的描述，所以作為對比，第一段可描寫這個(gè)女孩應(yīng)該是一個(gè)善良有責(zé)任心的人，她不會對擋路石視而不見，因此可以描寫她搬走石頭，搬石頭時(shí)發(fā)現(xiàn)了什么。 由第二段首句內(nèi)容“就在那時(shí)，市長從樹后走了出來?！笨芍诙慰擅鑼懯虚L表揚(yáng)這個(gè)女孩，并且號召村民向她

12、學(xué)習(xí)。2. 續(xù)寫線索：看見石頭思考搬石頭發(fā)現(xiàn)金子市長解釋故事流傳村民反思詞匯激活行為類看見:spot/witness/observe 搬石頭：movethestone/carrythestoneway解釋：explain/makeclear/interpret/reply情緒類 思考：thinkdeeply/reflecton愧疚:beashamedof/takeshameononeself【范文點(diǎn)評】高分句型lThinasshewas,shepushedthestonewithallhermightandfinallymadeit.（運(yùn)用了as引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句）高分句型2Turningro

13、und,shesawthegoldcoinswherethestonehadbeen.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語以及where引導(dǎo)的地點(diǎn)狀語從句）4【參考范文】Iextendedmyhands.Theytentativelysuckedatmyfingers.Perhapshungerhadhelpedovercometheirnaturalfear.Thenonebyone,Iplacedtheminafurbagandheadedbackdowntheslope.Whenthemotherwolfspottedme,shestoodupright.Possiblypickingupthes

14、mellofheryoung,sheletoutahigh-pitched,plaintivewhine.Ireleasedthepups,andtheyracedtoher.Withinseconds,theyweresuckingatherbelly.Withheryoungtoprotect,shewasbecomingaggressive.Whatnext?Iwondered.Sotenderwerethepupsthatitwasimpossiblefbrthemtosurvivewithoutmother'sprotection.Hence,Ihadtoreleaseher

15、.Ifetchedanironbar.UsingarockasthesupportingpointIunlockedthechain.Aftergainingfreedom,shehowledatmewithherheadlowshowinggratitude.Watchingthemotherandherpupsdisappearintheforest,Iletoutasighofrelief.【寫作分析】這是一篇記敘文。本文講述作者在多年前的一個(gè)春天的早上，在沿著CohoCreek淘金的時(shí)候，遇到了一只被困在獵人陷阱里的還在哺乳期的母狼，于是循著蹤跡找到幼崽并把幼崽送到被困的母狼身邊的故事

16、。1. 段落續(xù)寫： 由第一段首句內(nèi)容“我伸開雙手?！笨芍谝欢慰擅鑼懽髡甙研±撬突啬咐巧磉叺慕?jīng)過。 由第二段首句內(nèi)容“身邊有了要保護(hù)的幼崽，它開始變得有攻擊性?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫作者把小狼帶到母狼身邊之后的場景，作者猶豫是否要救它們出陷阱，以及最后的結(jié)果。2. 續(xù)寫線索：喚出放回救出感謝感受詞匯激活行為類放進(jìn):place.in./put.in. 注意到：takenoticeof/payattentionto釋放：release/free/liberate情緒類感謝:showgratitude/begrateful 放松：feelrelaxed/feelatease【范文點(diǎn)評】高分句型lPo

17、ssiblypickingupthesmellofheryoung,sheletoutahigh-pitched,plaintivewhine.（現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語）高分句型2Watchingthemotherandherpupsdisappearintheforest,Iletoutasighofrelief.（現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語）5【參考范文】Samarrivedveryearlythenextmorning.SeeingRolandlazilybathedinmildsunshinewitheyesnarrowedintoaline,Samdartedtowardshim,armswidelyo

18、pened.Givinghimalazyglimpse,Rolandpolitelywaggedhistailandthenturnedhisheadaway,fallingsoundasleepagain.Desperatelybrainstorming,SamgotapieceofdeliciousbonefromMrs.Proudfoot.Luredbythetastysmell,Rolandswiftlybouncedupandjumpedatthebone,followingSamout.Inthisway,thefirstdaywassmoothlyfinished.Daybyda

19、y,SamwasdelightedtofindRolandgraduallybecomewillingandeagertohaveawalkoutside.Amonthlater,Mrs.ProudfootwasdelightedtofindRolandfitandenergetic.EnjoyingthepleasuretoroamalongthecountryroadwithRoland,Samalsoharvestedalotfromtherelaxingtime.Eventuallyoneday,SamwasexcitedtotellMrs.Proudfoot,“BarryandIha

20、veearnedenoughmoney.Thankyou,Mrs.Proudfoot!ButcanIcontinuewalkingRolandforyou?Forfree!”Radiantly,Mrs.Proudfootnodded.Receivingapositiveanswer,SamwaswildwithjoyandRoland,wagginghistailmerrily,asifintoxicated.Sometimesonlyalittlekindnesscanignitesomethingshining,makingtheworldmorebeautifulandharmoniou

21、s.【寫作分析】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了山姆的朋友巴里不小心弄丟了圖書館里一本珍貴的書。為了幫助好友湊錢買書，山姆決定向普勞德福特女士請求幫助她遛狗換取報(bào)酬。原先懶惰又超重的狗，也因此變得精力充沛并且苗條了。1. 段落續(xù)寫： 由第一段首句內(nèi)容“山姆第二天很早就到了?！笨芍谝欢慰擅鑼懮侥峰薰返慕?jīng)過。 由第二段首句內(nèi)容“一個(gè)月之后，普勞德福特女士很高興地發(fā)現(xiàn)羅蘭瘦了，并且充滿活力。”可知，第二段可描寫山姆成功地通過勞動獲得了報(bào)酬，并且請求免費(fèi)幫普勞德福特女士繼續(xù)遛狗。2. 續(xù)寫線索：狗的表現(xiàn)引誘狗狗出門狗的改變完成任務(wù)主動請求繼續(xù)遛狗主題升華詞匯激活行為類找食物:getapieceofde

22、liciousbone/askacanofmeat 收獲：harvestalot/benefitalot情緒類 高興、驚訝：wasdelightedtofind/wassurprisedtofind歡樂:waswildwithjoy/wasmorethanhappy【范文點(diǎn)評】高分句型1SeeingRolandlazilybathedinmildsunshinewitheyesnarrowedintoaline,Samdartedtowardshim,armswidelyopened.（現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語和獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)）高分句型2Receivingapositiveanswer,Samwaswil

23、dwithjoyandRoland,wagginghistailmerrily,asifintoxicated.（現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語）Lookingovermyshoulder,Istaredintotheflashinglightsofatruck.IscreamedatJoethatIcouldn'tmakeit.22. 閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Jennystaredatthestorewindowlongingly.TherewasnothinginthisworldthatshewantedmorethanaHappyHannahd

24、ollandallthatcurrentlyseparatedherfromthehottestdolloftheholidayseasonwasathinpieceofglassandS29.95plustax.Unfortunately,Jennydidn'tevenhavethe95cents,sosheletoutadeepsighandcontinuedwalkinghome.Suddenly,apinkrectangle（矩形）inthesnowcaughthereye.Jennywalkedoverandrealizeditwasaleatherwallet.Sherem

25、oveditfromthesnow,andopenedthewallettofindathickpileoffoldedgreenbillsandtwoplasticcards.OnewasacreditcardandtheotheranID.JennystaredattheoldwomaninherIDphoto.ThewomanhadabeautifulsmilethatremindedJennyofhergrandma.Jennysighedandthensheputthewalletintoherpurse.Sheturnedaroundandwalkedinthedirectionf

26、romwhichshecame.Jenny'sheartbeatquicklyassheenteredthestore.Shehadlongdreamedaboutthismoment,butsomethingdidn'tfeelrightaboutitAssheapproachedaneatpileofHappyHannahdolls,shepushedawayherfeelings.ShegraspedoneHappyHannahdolly.AsJennyapproachedtheregister,theHappyHannahShowthemesongbeganplayin

27、g.Itwashermobilepone.ItwashergrandmaInonehandsheheldtheHappyHannahdollandintheothersheheldthephoneonwhichhergrandmawascalling.Jenny'sheartwasfiledwithloveandappreciationasshethoughtofhersweetoldgrandmaSheputthedolldownandpickedupthephonecall."HiGrandma?I'mgoingtobealittlebitlatetonight.

28、Fvegottodropsomethingoff.Yeah,itwasgood.OK.Alright.Iloveyoutoo."Jennyleftthestoreandwalkedthroughthemeltingsnowallthewaytotheothersideofthetown.Shethoughofhergrandmaassherangthebellat301WestStreet.注意：1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好。Paragraph1:Thewomanwhoansweredthedoorhadbeencryingrecen

29、tlyandlookedupsetandanxious.Paragraph2:Thewomantookthewalletsmilingly.32. 閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Longlongagoinatown,anewly-electedmayorwasdeterminedtodosomethingeffectivetomakethetownbetterthanbefore.Themayorwasacutelyawarethathisgoalshouldbeachievednotonlybylawsbutalsomoralsaswell.Hewa

30、safirmbelieverofthethoughtthatnothinggoodcouldcometoatownwhosepeopleonlycomplainedandexpectedotherstosolvetheirownproblems!Oneday,anewideasuddenlystruckhim.Earlyonemorning,themayordressedhimselfupandwenttoavillagenearby.Hesecretlyplacedalargestoneinthemiddleofthemainstreetandhidagoldcoinundertheston

31、e.Theinstanteverypreparationwasdone,hehidhimselfbehindahugemapletreeandwatchedclosely,wonderingwhatwouldhappenbeforelong.Thefirstpersondownthestreetwasamilkmanwithhiscart.Hetooknonoticeofitandthecartviolentlycrashedintothestone,spillingthemilkeverywhere."Whatfoolputthisstonehere?"heshouted

32、loudly.Hepickedhimselfupandangrilywentaway.Afterawhile,agroupofwomencamealong,eachbalancingapotofwateronherheadandpayingnoattentiontotheroad.Onewomantrippedoverthestoneandherwaterpotwentcrashingtotheground.Shepickedherselfupandlimpedawayintears.Neithershenorherfriendsthoughtaboutmovingthestoneoutoft

33、heroad.Themayorwatchedalldayasmanypeoplepassingtoandfrocomplainedaboutthestonebuthefoundnobodymakinganattempttomoveitandhavetheroadclearedoftheobstacle.Themayorwasdisappointedandevenindespair."Istherenooneinthisvillagewhofeelsanyresponsibilitytokeeptheirneighborsfromharm?"注意:1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為15

34、0左右；續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語己為你寫好。Justthen,themayorsawayounggirlcomingalong.Atthatmoment,themayorsteppedoutfrombehindthetree.44, 閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。Onespringmorningmanyyearsago,IhadbeensearchingforgoldalongCohoCreekonsoutheasternAlaska'sKupreanofIsland,andasIemergedfromaforestofspruce（云杉）andhe

35、mlocktree,Ifrozeinmytracks.Nomorethan20pacesinthebog（沼澤）wasahugeAlaskantimberwolf-caughtinoneofTrapperGeorge'straps.OldGeorgehaddiedthepreviousweekofaheartattack,sothewolfwaslucky.Confusedandfrightenedatmyapproach,thewolfbackedaway.ThenInoticedsomethingelse:Itwasafemale,andherteatswerefullofmilk

36、.Somewheretherewasadenofhungrypups（|、才良）waitingfortheirmother.Fromherappearance,Iguessedthatshehadbeentrappedonlyafewdays.Thatmeantherpupswereprobablystillalive.ButIsuspectedthatifItriedtoreleasethewolf,shewouldturnaggressiveandtrytotearmetopieces.SoIdecidedtosearchforherpupsinsteadandbegantolookfor

37、tracksthatmightleadmetoherden.Fortunately,therewerestillafewremainingofsnow.Afterseveralmoments,Ispottedpups'marksonatrail.Thetracksledahalfmilethroughtheforest,thenupaslopecoveredwithmanyrocks.Ifinallyspottedthedenatthebaseofanenormousspruce,Therewasn'tasoundinside.Wolfpupsareshyandcautious

38、,andIdidn'thavemuchhopeofinvitingthemoutside,ButIhadtotry.SoIbeganimitatingthehigh-pitched（聲音很尖銳的）soundofamotherwolfcallingheryoung.Noresponse.Afewmomentslater,afterItriedanothercall,fourtinypupsappeared.Theycouldn'thavebeenmorethanafewweeksold.注意：1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為15。左右；續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好。Para

39、graph1:Iextendedmyhands.Paragraph2:Withheryoungtoprotect,shewasbecomingaggressive.55. 閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。SeptemberismostbeautifulinStrathroy,wherepeoplewholeheartedlyenjoythesimplepleasuresoflifeandnature.Rolandwasnoexception.HewasamagnificentGermanShepherd（德國牧羊犬）,alittlelazyandove

40、r-weightthough.Helovedtodozeinthebackyard.HeyawnedandstretchedhisbodyasheheardtheslowlyapproachingfootstepsofMrs.Proudfoot."Comehaveyourlunchdear!"saidMrs.Proudfootwithherusualfondnessforhimandhewaggedhistailaffectionatelyinreturn.Rolandwaslickingthelastpieceofmeatinhisplatewhenthedoorbell

41、burstintomusic.Mrs.Proudfoothurriedtoanswerthedoor.Rolandstoodalertbyherside."GoodnoonMrs.Proudfoot".ItwasSam,herteenageneighbor."My!My!Youlookpale!Whathappened?"askedMrs.Proudfootwithgenuineworry.Sheimmediatelywavedhiminandclosedthedoorbehind.Mrs.Proudfootwasalonelywidow,butwasw

42、elllovedinherneighborhoodespeciallybykids,thoughshehadnokidstocallherown.Onceencouraged,Samdisclosedhisdilemma."MyfriendBarrylostararebookofschoollibrary.Itcosts150dollars,buthehasonly55dollarsandhispoorparentscan'taffordtopaytherest.Barryisworkingparttimebutthat'sfarfromenough."Wi

43、thadramaticsighhecontinued,“Ifhedidn'trefundthelossbeforetheendofterm,hewillbedismissedfromfinalexams.Thatwillruinhisfuture!Ihavetohelphim,whateverittakes.Heismybestfriend.”"Don'tworry,Sammy.Youwantmetopay.butMrs.Proudfootwasinterrupted.“No,No,Mrs.Proudfoot.ThisisnotwhatIcameherefor.Til

44、workforyou.Wouldyoufavormetowalkyourdogplease?For2dollarsaday."Helookedupwithbeggingeyes.Mrs.Proudfootclappedherhandsinagreement,“Thatcan'tbebetter!I'vebeenworriedaboutRolandlately.Hedoesneedsomeexercise!It'sniceofyoutomakesuchanoffer."Samthankedheroverandover,"Iwillstartt

45、omorrowmorning."注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好。Paragraph1:Samarrivedveryearlythenextmorning.Paragraph2:Amonthlater,Mrs.ProudfootwasdelightedtofindRolandfitandenergetic.答案與解析1【參考范文】Lookingovermyshoulder,Istaredintotheflashinglightsofatruck.ItwasJoe!Icouldn'thelpburstingintotears

46、.Joeshoutedtomenottobefrightened.ThenhethrewathickropesothatIcouldhangontoitandwalkstraighttowardhim.Iopenedthedoor,grabbeditandinchedout.However,asuddenfallleftmeintherushingwater.Istruggledtomyfeet,onlytofindabranchblockingthewayrightinfrontofme.IscreamedthatIcouldn'tmakeit.Joe,however,remaine

47、dcalm!HeurgedmetotakeonestepatatimeandassuredmeIcouldmakeit.ImovedforwardslowlyandcautiouslybeforeIfellintohisarms.Sobbingagainsthischest,IapologizedthatIshouldn'thavetakentheshortcut.Joepattedmesayinghisprimaryconcernwasmysafety.OnlythendidIrealizeJoeactuallyunderstoodhowtotakecareofmedespitehistroublewiththehousework.【寫作分析】這是一篇記敘文。文章主要講敘了十一月的一個(gè)早晨，下著大雨，作者的丈夫Joe叮囑作者不要抄近路去上班，而作者沒有聽丈夫的話，還是走了近路，結(jié)果車被困在了積滿雨水的道路上。1. 段落續(xù)寫： 由第一段首句內(nèi)容“我回過頭，盯著一輛卡車閃爍的燈光。”可知，第一段可描寫作者發(fā)現(xiàn)是丈夫來解救自己，以及丈夫解救作者的經(jīng)過，最后作者被一根樹枝攔住了。 由第二段首句內(nèi)容“我尖叫著說我過去不了。