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1、Summary Writing高考新題型之Summary Writing高考新題型之SummaryI helped an old man in rags who had lost his way.I helped an old mandetailsmain pointSummary?A summary is a short statement that gives only the main points of sth, not the details牛津高階英漢雙解詞典讀者在正確理解文章的基礎(chǔ)上, 在不改變?cè)闹行乃枷?、體裁和結(jié)構(gòu)的前提下，省去細(xì)節(jié)，用簡(jiǎn)明、精練的語(yǔ)句高度濃縮文章的主要內(nèi)容和

2、觀點(diǎn)。 How to write a good summary?Steps & Tips Weight loss is most likely to be successful when people change their habits. Here are several ways to make that happen. Regular physical activity burns calories and builds muscles -both of which help you look and feel good and keep weight off. Walking the

3、 family dog, cycling to school, and doing other things that increase your daily level of activity can all make a difference. One reason people get less exercise these days is because of an increase in “screen time”- the amount of time spent watching TV, looking at the computer, or playing video game

4、s. Limit recreational screen time to less than 2 hours per day. When you really get away from “screens”, such as TV, computers, IPad or mobile phones, you will really benefit a lot. Portion sizes are bigger than they used to be, and these extra calories contribute to obesity. Another key factor in w

5、eight gain is that more people drink sugary drinks, such as sodas, juice drinks, and sports drinks. So choose smaller portions (or share restaurant portions) and go for water or low-fat mild instead of soda. People who skip breakfast often feel so hungry that they eat more later on. So they get more

6、 calories than they would have if they ate breakfast. In fact, people who skip breakfast tend to have higher BIMs than people who eat breakfast. If you really put the above into practice at once, you will definitely reduce your weight gradually. And wish you have a good figure.1.2.3.4.5.6.(350words)

7、stepsRead for topic, structure(明確主題及結(jié)構(gòu))2. Find out the key information of each paragraph (劃出每段主題句,或關(guān)鍵詞)3. Rewrite by using your own words(改寫(xiě))4. Polish the passage (改良)Step1 Read for topic and structureTopic： Weight lossStructure:Para1.Para2.Para.6Topic weight lossWays of losing weightConclusionPara4

8、.Para3.Para2.1、我們的市場(chǎng)行為主要的導(dǎo)向因素，第一個(gè)是市場(chǎng)需求的導(dǎo)向，第二個(gè)是技術(shù)進(jìn)步的導(dǎo)向，第三大導(dǎo)向是競(jìng)爭(zhēng)對(duì)手的行為導(dǎo)向。2、市場(chǎng)銷(xiāo)售中最重要的字就是“問(wèn)”。3、現(xiàn)今，每個(gè)人都在談?wù)撝鴦?chuàng)意，坦白講，我害怕我們會(huì)假創(chuàng)意之名犯下一切過(guò)失。4、在購(gòu)買(mǎi)時(shí)，你可以用任何語(yǔ)言；但在銷(xiāo)售時(shí)，你必須使用購(gòu)買(mǎi)者的語(yǔ)言。5、市場(chǎng)營(yíng)銷(xiāo)觀念：目標(biāo)市場(chǎng)，顧客需求，協(xié)調(diào)市場(chǎng)營(yíng)銷(xiāo)，通過(guò)滿足消費(fèi)者需求來(lái)創(chuàng)造利潤(rùn)。22 七月 20222022/7/222022/7/222022/7/226、我就像一個(gè)廚師，喜歡品嘗食物。如果不好吃，我就不要它。七月 222022/7/222022/7/222022/7/227

9、/22/20227、我總是站在顧客的角度看待即將推出的產(chǎn)品或服務(wù)，因?yàn)槲揖褪穷櫩汀?022/7/222022/7/2222 July 20228、利人為利已的根基，市場(chǎng)營(yíng)銷(xiāo)上老是為自己著想，而不顧及到他人，他人也不會(huì)顧及你。2022/7/222022/7/222022/7/222022/7/22概要寫(xiě)作難點(diǎn) 1 How to get the main points quickly and correctly? (如何快速、準(zhǔn)確地捕捉各段要點(diǎn))抓住主題句或關(guān)鍵詞，忽略細(xì)節(jié)和例子Step2 Read for main idea of each paragraghTopic sentence or

10、key wordsStep2 Read for main idea of each paragragh 1. Weight loss is most likely to be successful when people change their habits. Here are several waysto make that happen.Tip1: The key sentence is usually the first sentenceStep2 Read for main idea of each paragragh 2.Regular physical activity burn

11、s calories and builds muscles -both of which help you look and feel good and keep weight off. Walking the family dog, cycling to school, and doing other things that increase your daily level of activity can all make a difference.Tip2: Ignore the examples or detailsExamples&detailsStep2 Read for main

12、 idea of each paragragh 3. One reason people get less exercise these days Is because of an increase in “screen time”- the amount of time spent watching TV, looking at thecomputer, or playing video games. Limit recreationalscreen time to less than 2 hours per day. When youreally get away from “screen

13、s”, such as TV, IPad ,computers, or mobile phones, you will really benefit a lot.Tip3: Pick out the key words in different sentenceStep2 Read for main idea of each paragragh 4. Portion sizes are bigger than they used to be, andthese extra calories contribute to obesity. Anotherkey factor in weight g

14、ain is that more people drink sugary beverages, such as sodas, juice drinks, andsports drinks. So choose smaller portions (or sharerestaurant portions) and go for water or low-fat milk instead of soda.Tip4: pay attention to the logical connectives(邏輯連詞)So, therefore, as a result, thusStep2 Read for

15、main idea of each paragragh 5. People who skip breakfast often feel so hungry that they eat more later on. They get more caloriesthan they would have if they ate breakfast. In fact, people who skip breakfast tend to have higher BIMsthan people who eat breakfast.Step2 Read for main idea of each parag

16、ragh6. If you really put the above into practice at once, you will definitely reduce your weight gradually. And wish you have a good figure. Weight loss is most likely to be successful when people change their habits. Here are several ways to make that happen. Regular physical activity burns calorie

17、s and builds muscles -both of which help you look and feel good and keep weight off. Walking the family dog, cycling to school, and doing other things that increase your daily level of activity can all make a difference. One reason people get less exercise these days is because of an increase in “sc

18、reen time”- the amount of time spent watching TV, looking at the computer, or playing video games. Limit recreational screen time to less than 2 hours per day. When you really get away from “screens”, such as TV, computers, IPad or mobile phones, you will really benefit a lot. Portion sizes are bigg

19、er than they used to be, and these extra calories contribute to obesity. Another key factor in weight gain is that more people drink sugary drinks, such as sodas, juice drinks, and sports drinks. So choose smaller portions (or share restaurant portions) and go for water or low-fat mild instead of so

20、da. People who skip breakfast often feel so hungry that they eat more later on. So they get more calories than they would have if they ate breakfast. In fact, people who skip breakfast tend to have higher BIMs than people who eat breakfast. If you really put the above into practice at once, you will

21、 definitely reduce your weight gradually. And wish you have a good figure.1.2.3.4.5.6.Step3 rewrite by using your own words概要寫(xiě)作難點(diǎn) 2 How to express the main points by using your own words properly? (如何靈活詮釋?zhuān)?guī)避抄襲的嫌疑)Step3 rewrite by using your own words1. Weight loss is most likely to be successfulwhen

22、 people change their habits.Losing weight Tip1: Use words or phrases of similar meaning （同義替換）ifget into new habitsPeople will succeed in losing weight if they get into new habitsChanging some habits may be a good way to lose weightTip2: Use different sentence structure(改變句子結(jié)構(gòu)，尤其是改變主語(yǔ))Step3 rewrite

23、by using your own words2.Regular physical activity burns calories and builds muscles -both of which help you look and feel good and keep weight off.Tip3: Turn complex sentences into simple ones （壓縮長(zhǎng)句）Leave out unnecessary partsTaking more physical exercise will help you keep healthy.Keep healthyStep

24、3 rewrite by using your own words“screen time”benefit a lot.limitTip4: Combine the key words logically into a sentence （連詞組句）3.We are supposed to reduce “screen time”.Limiting “screen time” will benefit us a lot.Step3 rewrite by using your own wordsChoose smaller portions (or share restaurant portio

25、ns) and go for water or low-fat milk instead of soda.Sticking to smaller portions and avoiding sugary drinks contribute to weight loss.Step3 Rewrite by using your own words5. skip breakfastPeople should avoid skipping breakfast.get more calorieStep3 rewrite by using your own words6. If you really pu

26、t the above into practicePeople will have a good figure if they take the above suggestionshave a good figuretake / follow the above suggestions Changing some habits may be a good way to lose weight. Taking more physical exercise will make much difference to peoples health. We are supposed to reduce

27、“screen time”. Sticking to smaller portions and avoiding sugary drinks contribute to weight loss. People should avoid skipping breakfast. People will have a good figure if they take the above suggestions. (58W) First, Meanwhile, Besides FinallyStep4 Polish by using connectivesTip: Polish with connec

28、tives to make it coherent.stepsRead for topic, structure(明確主題及結(jié)構(gòu))2. Find out the key information of each paragraph (劃出每段主題句,找關(guān)鍵信息)3. Rewrite by using your own words(改寫(xiě))4. Polish the passage (改良)Tips The topic sentence is usually the first sentenceIgnore the examples or detailsPick out the key words

29、in different sentencesUse words or phrases of similar meaning （同義替換）Use different sentence structure(改變句子結(jié)構(gòu)，尤其是改變主語(yǔ))Turn complex sentences into simple ones （壓縮長(zhǎng)句）ExerciseRead and write with the steps and tips You may want to offer help if your friend falls into depression(抑郁). Depression is a comple

30、x emotional illness and it is necssary to do adequate(充足) research about the illness. You may access anumber of resources to gain a deep understanding of this emotional condition. You can also find books or magazines in the library. If you still have some questions, you can see a doctor. In the end,

31、 you should havea good idea of what is affecting your friend. People with depression are often very afraid of talking to someone except their doctors. They can easily be ashamed of their condition and consequently they try to hide it. You shouldnt be surprised if a depressed friend wont open up to y

32、ou. However , when he or she does , you should let the words flow. Dont be judgemental and never interrupt!Listening is not an easy skill, as its likely that you cant help voicing your opinion. If your friend shows likely signs of depression, such as the feeling of worthlessness, a lack of interest

33、in daily activities and uncontrolled crying, you should contact a doctor, scheduel an appointment andaccompany him or her on the first visit. If he or she refuses, let several days go by before making another suggestion. You should be able to identify moments when he or she seems to have better mood

34、s. These moments could be the right time to ask him or her to see the doctor. Over time, your friend begins to cooperate and see the doctor. At last, as a caregiver, you also need someone to talk to and perhaps you may join a support group so you can meet other caregivers. You shouldnt sacrifice you

35、r own physical and mental condition when helping people with depression. There are cases when caregivers become depressed. If it happens, there is no shame in seeing a doctor yourself.(320words)Step1 Read for topic and structureTopic： Helping a friend with depressionStructure:Para1.Para2.Para3.Para4

36、.忽略具體事例和細(xì)節(jié)Step2 Read for main idea of each paragraghPara.1:Para.2:Para.3:Para.4:You may want to offer help if your friend falls into depression(抑郁). Depression is a complex emotional illness and it is necessary to do adequate(充足) research about the illness. be afraid of talking(劃主題句,找關(guān)鍵信息)However ,

37、when he or she does (talk)Listening is a helpful skill If your friend shows likely signs of depression, such as the feeling of worthlessness, a lack of interest in daily activities and uncontrolled crying, you should contact a doctor, scheduel an appointment and accompany him or her on the first vis

38、it. As a caregiver, you also need someone to talk to and perhaps you may join a support group to keep healthy. Learn muchStep3 Rewrite by using your own wordsPara.1:You may want to offer help if your friend falls into depression(抑郁). . it is necessary to do adequate research about the illness. Impor

39、tant, helpfulYou need to learn more about depression if you want to assist a friend with depression. Doing enough research about depression is helpful for you to help your depressed friend feels depressesStep3 Rewrite by using your own wordsPara.2: be afraid of talkingHowever , when he or she does (talk to you)ListeningPeople with depression tend to keep silent