2022屆高考英語寫作備考之讀后續(xù)寫：奶奶親手織的毛衣、寒夜中的溫暖（word版 有范文 無聽力原文、音頻）

1、2022高考英語寫作備考之讀后續(xù)寫：奶奶親手織的毛衣、寒夜中的溫暖讀后續(xù)寫：奶奶親手織的毛衣原題閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。It was Christmas morning. Mark received a gift from his grandma. It must be the video game she promised! Mark thought. However, when he opened the gift, he discovered it was a red thick woolen sweater,w

2、hichwas a bit too big for him. And its sleeves werent even the same size.Then Mark said，I hate the ugly sweater. You shouldnt say that! his momexplained. Do you know. Suddenly, the phone rang and Marks mom went topick it up. It was Marks grandma, and she wanted to speak to Mark.Hi, Grandma, Mark sai

3、d. Do you like the sweater? I chose red because I thought it would look lovely on you, his grandma said. Honestly, it looks terrible, Mark replied andhung up the phone. His grandma was so sad and cried after hearing Mark”s hurtful comments.Little did Mark knowthe sweaters real value. His grandma had

4、 knitted(編織) the sweater by hand though she waslegally blind. She had created the sweater by loverather thansight. This year, Marks parents were unable to travel to Philadelphia to meet his grandma for the holidays, so she decided to send a gift to Mark because she wasmissing him terribly.Days later

5、, Marks parents planned a short ski trip. Before leaving home, Marks mom forced Mark to wear the sweater because it was cold that day. Due to the heavy snow, Marks father drove slowly. When they finally reached their destination, it was late in the evening. Unable to ski that day, Mark wanted at lea

6、st to go and look around. His mom asked him not to go too far. Mark nodded and raced off to a nearby place.However, when Mark was playing, he accidentallyfell,injuredhis head, andwas unconscious. Later, finding Mark missing, his parents were worried and looked for him. Mark， come back now! they shou

7、ted, but there was no reply. They asked a few passers-by whether they had seen a child, but no one knew anything.Paragraph 1: Then they called the police and reached out to the hotel workers.Paragraph 2: Boy, the sweater saved your life. It kept the majority of your body warm, the doctor said.寫作思路分析

8、從原文可知，圣誕節(jié)這天Mark收到了奶奶的禮物一件奶奶親手織的毛衣。這并不是他想要的禮物，并且在電話里對奶奶非常不禮貌。一家人要去滑雪，天氣很冷，媽媽強(qiáng)迫Mark穿上這件毛衣來保暖。Mark獨(dú)自在滑雪的地方玩耍時，不小心摔倒受傷，失去了知覺，命懸一線。根據(jù)給出來的續(xù)寫第一段首句可知，第一段要寫Mark的父母，酒店工作人員，警察在努力尋找Mark。根據(jù)給出來的續(xù)寫第二段首句可知，第一段結(jié)尾大家成功找到了Mark，并把他送到了醫(yī)院。第二段醫(yī)生向Mark解釋，是毛衣救了他的性命。第二段可以寫Mark對奶奶的感謝，對自己之前粗魯行為的懺悔。參考范文Paragraph 1:Then they calle

9、d the police andreached out tothe hotel workers. With the help of a few workers, they began looking for Mark. Soon the police arrived and joined them. Suddenly, one worker found a shoe behind a tree. He immediately informed the police and Marks parents, and theyhurried tothe location. There they dis

10、covered Mark, who wasunconsciousandcovered withsnow.Hurriedly, Mark was taken to hospital, but he didnt wake up until a few hours later.Paragraph 2:Boy, the sweater saved your life. It kept the majority of your body warm, the doctor said. Knowingit wasdue to the sweaterthathe was saved, Mark was sor

11、ry for being rude to his grandma. When Marks parents told himwhatgreat efforts his grandma had taken to create the sweater, Mark finally understood its true value. He called his grandma, thanked her andapologizedfor those hurtful comments.HearingMarks words, his grandma felta sense of relief.Now,man

12、y years have passed, and Mark still likes the sweater best.讀后續(xù)寫：寒夜中的溫暖閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。I was working in San Diego, California in the fall of 1981. Ireceived a big operationin a hospital there due to an illness. The doctors had to put a steel stick in my body, which m

13、ade breathing and moving around quite difficult.After I felt much better and left the hospital,I was given two months leave by my boss. I decided to go back to my home in Peoria, Illinois to recover. Knowing that, some of my colleagues kindly offered toaccompany(陪同) me home. I thanked them butdeclin

14、ed,for I didnt want totroublethem. I usually went home in summer, so I didnt think to dress for the fall weather Illinois was having. A windbreaker(風(fēng)衣) was the warmest piece of clothing I wore when I started my journey home without telling my parents about my visit.Arriving in Chicago just minutes a

15、fter the last bus to Peoria had left, I couldeithersleep in the cold, wet bus stoportake a bus that would pass by a bus station in Bloomington, just 30 miles from Peoria. Finally, I decided to go to Bloomington, thinking that it would be a short ride home the next morning.As the bus moved towards Bl

16、oomington, it started snowing andthe temperature began to drop, which greatly affected the traffic. Finally, when the busdropped me off, I found the whole town was dark and that everything was closed.There I was, in pain at three in the morning, and it was snowing andextremely cold. My windbreaker d

17、idntsave me fromthe bad weather at all. I should have worn a thick coat! I thought, butit was no use regretting. I held my arms and legs close to my body in the doorway of the bus station, not having any idea what to do. The metal stick in my body and the cold air were making it almost impossible fo

18、r me to breathe. I started tolose consciousness(意識).Paragraph 1:Then I heard a gentle voice and saw a hand pulling me up.Paragraph 2:After getting home and resting for some days, I drove to Bloomington to find the man.參考范文Paragraph 1:Then I heard a gentle voice and saw a hand pulling me up. He halfcarriedand halfpulledme until we reached adesertedhouse near the bus station. Helaid me downon an old sofa and covered me with his coat immediately to keep me warm. Then he sat next to me and looked after me until I felt better. I thanked him