中考英語書面表達(dá)寫作訓(xùn)練記敘文寫作課件(35張)

1、記敘文寫作記敘文寫作記敘文是以寫人記事為主的文章 記敘文的要求根據(jù)提供的情景組織語言材料，編寫成文。一般說來記敘文有時間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件、原因和結(jié)果六要素 （五個“w” when，where，who，what，why以及how）。記敘文是以寫人記事為主的文章 記敘文的人稱 一般使用第一人稱和第三人稱第一人稱 親切，身臨其境 自轉(zhuǎn)，本人的經(jīng)歷或耳聞目 睹的事件 第三人稱 客觀 對重大事情的客觀報(bào)道， 以及記敘 他人的經(jīng)歷或事跡。記敘文的人稱記敘文的時態(tài) 因?yàn)閿⑹龅氖录际沁^去發(fā)生的，因此文章的時態(tài)是過去時。根據(jù)實(shí)際需要穿插使用過去進(jìn)行時態(tài)和過去完成時態(tài). （如果介紹人物或單位的現(xiàn)在或?qū)砬闆r，

2、現(xiàn)在和一般將來時態(tài)）記敘文的時態(tài)記敘文的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)： 開頭the beginning-交代必要的背景，如：時間，地點(diǎn)，人物等。中間the middle-交代故事情節(jié)（事情的主體）。如：事件的發(fā)生，發(fā)展和前因后果結(jié)尾the ending-事情的結(jié)果或感想，愿望等（the result or feeling）記敘文的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)： 根據(jù)下列圖畫中 Tom 騎自行車的經(jīng)歷，用英語寫一篇故事。 短文要寫得連貫、完整。Sample 1 根據(jù)下列圖畫中 Tom 騎自行車的經(jīng)歷，用英語寫一篇故事1. 主題 :2. 時態(tài)：3. 人稱:1. Go over the requirementA story （a traf

3、fic accident)past tenseTom , he 1. 主題 :1. Go over the requiremTom /ride a bike Along the street/roadA few days ago/ the other day/ one day2. Go over the pictures（who, what, where, when, why, how)Tom /ride a bike 2. Go over thThe driver/ frightened/ run away 2. Go over the pictures（who, what, where,

4、when, why, how)The driver/ frightened/ run awA woman/ remember the number of the car The police The driver/ catch2. Go over the pictures（who, what, where, when, why, how)A woman/ remember the number oCooperation and discussion Contents:1、討論寫作思路. 1點(diǎn)題（時間、地點(diǎn)）2事件的起因3事件的發(fā)展/過程4事件的結(jié)果5扣題2、交流所需句型、詞匯.Cooperat

5、ion and discussion Con My presentation My presenta The other day, Tom was riding along the street when he saw a car run fast towards him. He turned left quickly but it was too late. The car hit him and he fell off his bike. The driver of the car was so frightened that he ran away as fast as he could

6、. He was soon out of sight, leaving Tom helpless on the spot. Fortunately, a woman happened to see it and remembered the number of the car. She called the policeman and told him what had happened. Finally, the driver was caught and punished for his wrong doing.Passage 13. Writing a passage The other

7、 day, Tom was Key wordssentencesA woman saw the accident and remembered the number of the car. She called the police. The driver was caught.ride a bike /run fast tosee the accident/remember the number /call the police /be caught be frightened /run awayhit him/fall off his bikeWhen Tom was riding alo

8、ng the street. A car ran fast to him. The car hit him. And he fell off his bike.The driver was so frightened that he ran away.Key wordssentencesA woman saw HAVE A TRYHAVE A TRY2004年遼寧下面4幅圖片描述的是星期天上午在中山公園里發(fā)生的一件事。請根據(jù)圖片所提供的信息用英語為你校的“英語園地”寫一篇短文。注意：短文須包括所有圖片的主要內(nèi)容。短文的內(nèi)容要連貫、完整；短文單詞數(shù)：100左右（已給句子中的單詞不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；參

9、考詞匯：貨攤stand (n.) ; 搶奪 snatch (v.) ; 逮捕 arrest (v.)2004年遼寧下面4幅圖片描述的是星期天上午在中山公園里發(fā)生中考英語書面表達(dá)寫作訓(xùn)練記敘文寫作課件(35張PPT)星期天上午，中山公園，冰淇淋貨攤One Sunday morning,；in Zhongshan Park.；At an ice-cream stand年輕婦女的包被搶snatch her handbag away人們追趕搶包者run after the snatcher在附近長排椅上坐著一位老人There be sb. sitting on the bench nearby提綱星期

10、天上午，中山公園，冰淇淋貨攤提綱從老人身旁跑過Run past the old man拿起傘；將傘放在他兩腿之間；pick up his umbrella ; put it between the two legs of the snatcher; 摔一大跟斗fall down on the ground heavily從老人身旁跑過兩名警察來到并逮捕搶劫者Came in a police car; arrest sb.感謝老人的幫助Thank sb. for his help 稱贊老人的機(jī)智Praise the old man for his cleverness兩名警察來到并逮捕搶劫者On

11、e Sunday morning, many people went to Zhongshan Park. As it was very hot, some people got thirsty and were trying to buy some ice-cream. Suddenly a woman at the stand shouted because a young man behind her snatched her handbag away. Seeing this, immediately a few people began to run after him. Howev

12、er, the snatcher ran so fast that it was not easy to catch him. Luckily , there was an old man sitting on a bench nearby. As the snatcher was running past him, the old man quickly picked up his umbrella and put it between the snatchers legs. The young man cried and fell down on the ground hard. At t

13、he end, a police car came and arrested the snatcher. The woman thanked the old man for his help. And all the people Praise the old man for his cleverness.One Sunday morning, many peopGo over the requirement（person, tense, style） Summary : How to write a picture story?Go over the pictures（who, what,

14、where, when, why, how)Write a passage （using connectives and adding details and specific information. )Go over the requirement（personGoodbyeGoodbye基本篇章結(jié)構(gòu) 點(diǎn)題（時間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件） 事件的起因 事件的發(fā)展/過程 事件的結(jié)果 扣題 基本篇章結(jié)構(gòu)記敘文句型優(yōu)化記敘文句型優(yōu)化半個月：half a month 15 days 半年： half a year 6 months兩個禮拜: fortnight開始：at the beginning of

15、 summer 結(jié)束：at the end of winter有時：sometimes at times最后：At last eventually 結(jié)果：as a result consequently期間：Within / during the vocation - in the middle of the night 半個月：half a month 15 days 20年后：in 20 years 有一天：one day the other day 第二天：the following day 現(xiàn)在：Now at the present time 有一次：On one occasion 另

16、一次：On another occasion 一禮拜后：A week later a week passed / went by 晚上：In the evening / in the morning/ in the afternoon/ in towards evening/ morning/ afternoon 20年后：in 20 years 記敘常用鏈接詞時間順序：Early in the morning / In the early morning; In the middle of the day / At noon; Late in the afternoon / In the l

17、ate afternoon; Far / Deep into the night; 記敘常用鏈接詞時間順序：Early in the morn My presentation My presenta審題描述過去個人經(jīng)歷第三人稱4.主題：3.人稱：1.體裁：2.時態(tài)：記敘文體一般過去時審題描述過去第三人稱4.主題：3.人稱：1.體裁：2.時態(tài)：1點(diǎn)題（時間、地點(diǎn)）星期天上午，中山公園，冰淇淋貨攤旁2事件的起因年輕婦女的包被搶3事件的發(fā)展/過程人們追趕搶包者 ；長排椅上坐著一位老人；搶包者從老人身旁跑過，老人用傘將他絆倒4事件的結(jié)果兩名警察逮捕搶劫者：5扣題婦女感謝老人，人們稱贊老人的機(jī)智1點(diǎn)題（

18、時間、地點(diǎn)） 副詞：suddenly, unfortunately, luckily, immediately as a result so/suchthat two hours later, and 中考英語書面表達(dá)寫作訓(xùn)練記敘文寫作課件(35張PPT) 假如昨天下午在你上學(xué)的路上，你目睹了一起交通事故。事故的大體經(jīng)過是這樣的：一輛小汽車突然加速, 把離你不遠(yuǎn)處的婦女撞倒在地，她還抱著一個孩子,肇事車主不但沒有停車反而加速逃跑。最后我把他們送去了醫(yī)院。請就此事件寫篇短文。字?jǐn)?shù)：l00詞左右。 1）體裁格式：記敘文敘事格式 2)中心人稱：第人稱 3)主體時態(tài)：般過去時 4)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn) 一婦女?dāng)y小孩被一輛小汽車幢倒 婦女和小孩都已受傷嚴(yán)重 3）你把傷者送往醫(yī)院搶救，為她們祈禱；并希望肇事司機(jī)受到懲罰 假如昨天下午在你上學(xué)的路上A Car Accident The other day on my way to the school, I happened to involve in a car accident which I would never forget. Some pedestrians /pidestrin/ and I were crossing the street when