高一英語(yǔ)概要寫作材料選編

歡迎下載歡迎下載高一英語(yǔ)故事續(xù)寫訓(xùn)練（1）Gettingridofdirt,intheopinionofmostpeople,isagoodthing.However,thereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirt.Intheearly16thcentury,peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease,asmedicalopinionhaditthatwashingoffdirtwithhotwatercouldopenuptheskinandletillsin.Aparticulardangerwasthoughttolieinpublicbaths.By1538,theFrenchkinghadclosedthebathhousesinhiskingdom.SodidthekingofEnglandin1546.ThusbeganalongtimewhentherichandthepoorinEuropelivedwithdirtinafriendlyway.HenryIV,KingofFrance,wasfamouslydirty.Uponlearningthatanoblemanhadtakenabath,thekingorderedthat,toavoidtheattackofdisease,thenoblemanshouldnotgoout.Thoughthebeliefinthemerit（好處）ofdirtwaslong-lived,dirthasnolongerbeenregardedasaniceneighboreversincethe18century.Scientificallyspeaking,cleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth.Cleanwatersupplyandhandwashingarepracticalmeansofpreventingdisease.Yet,itseemsthatstandardsofcleanlinesshavemovedbeyondsciencesinceWorldWarII.Advertisementsrepeatedlyselltheidea:clothesneedtobewhiterthanwhite,clothseversofter,surfacestoshine.Hasthehatefordirt,however,gonetoofar?Attitudestodirtstilldifferhugelynowadays.Manyfirst-timeparentsnervouslytrytowarntheirchildrenofftouchingdirt,whichmightberesponsibleforthespreadofdisease.Onthecontrary,MaryRuebush,anAmericanimmunologist（免疫學(xué)家）,encourageschildrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmunesystem.Andthelatter（后者）positionisgainingsomeground.Onepossibleversion：Peoplehavemixedopinionstowardsdirtonourskin.（要點(diǎn)1）Foralongtimeinhistory,peopleofsomeEuropeancountries,suchasFrance,believedthatdirtprotectedpeoplefromgettingill.（要點(diǎn)2）However,peoplebegantochangetheirattitudestodirtabout200yearsago.Peoplehavebeentoldthatwashingdirtoffourbodycankeepushealthy.（要點(diǎn)3）However,somescientistsbelievethatexposuretosomedirtmayhelpourimmunesystem.（要點(diǎn)4）【范文點(diǎn)撥】（一）要點(diǎn)分析1.文章第一段就是本篇文章的主題句，亮明了總的觀點(diǎn)：However,thereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirt.換句話說(shuō)：Differentpeoplehavedifferentattitudestowardsdirt.再結(jié)合下文談到的主題可知Differentpeoplehavedifferentattitudestowardsdirtontheskin.范文中的要點(diǎn)1“Peoplehavemixedopinionstowardsdirtonourskin.”概括非常精煉。第二段主要談到了在16世紀(jì)，人們認(rèn)為dirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease，尤以英、法兩國(guó)的貴族為代表。結(jié)合第三段第一句Thoughthebeliefinthemeritofdirtwaslong-lived,dirthasnolongerbeenregardedasaniceneighboreversince18century.可知，直到18世紀(jì)之前，人們都認(rèn)為dirt是很“友好的”，有助于預(yù)防疾病。范文中的要點(diǎn)2“Foralongtimeinhistory,peopleofsomeEuropeancountries,suchasFrance,believedthatdirtprotectedpeoplefromgettingill.”很好地總結(jié)了這些要點(diǎn)。第三段用Though引出人們對(duì)dirt觀點(diǎn)的轉(zhuǎn)變“…巧incethe18thcentury.Scientificallyspeaking,cleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth."再結(jié)合本段最后一部分Advertisementsrepeatedlyselltheidea…可得出要點(diǎn)3“However,peoplebegantochangetheirattitudestodirtabout200yearsago.Peoplehavebeentoldthatwashingdirtoffourbodycankeepushealthy.”文章最后一段第一句指出，現(xiàn)在人們對(duì)于dirt的態(tài)度還是有所不同，Onthecontrary引出專家的觀點(diǎn)，一位免疫學(xué)家認(rèn)為dirt有助于增強(qiáng)免疫系統(tǒng)。這一觀點(diǎn)獲得了一些支持。范文中的要點(diǎn)4“However,somescientistsbelievethatexposuretosomedirtmayhelpourimmunesystem."表達(dá)很恰切。（二）要點(diǎn)連接文章概要，在寫完了要點(diǎn)之后，下一步的工作就是要把這些要點(diǎn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞進(jìn)行連接，使上下句之間具有連貫性。本篇文章整篇結(jié)構(gòu)是總分的結(jié)構(gòu)，要點(diǎn)2和要點(diǎn)3在觀點(diǎn)上截然相反，因此，之間需要表示轉(zhuǎn)折的連接詞，范文用了However恰到好處。要點(diǎn)3和要點(diǎn)4在觀點(diǎn)上又存在不同，因此，還是用表轉(zhuǎn)折的連接詞However。不過(guò)小編認(rèn)為，此處用Nevertheless可以避免三句話內(nèi)出現(xiàn)兩次However。（三）關(guān)鍵詞匯第一段：fixed（確定的；不變的）第二段：means（手段，方法）,blockout（擋?。?openup（打開）,upon（之后；立即）第三段:long-lived（長(zhǎng)期存在的）,selltheidea（說(shuō)服某人接收某個(gè)觀點(diǎn)）第四段：warnoff（警告某人不要靠近）,position（觀點(diǎn)）,gainsomeground（取得優(yōu)勢(shì)）以上這些關(guān)鍵詞對(duì)于整篇文章的理解與轉(zhuǎn)化成自己的語(yǔ)言都很關(guān)鍵，如果不能準(zhǔn)確領(lǐng)會(huì)其用意，語(yǔ)篇理解的效果會(huì)大打折扣。所以，概要寫作的基礎(chǔ)是理解語(yǔ)篇，而讀懂語(yǔ)篇的基礎(chǔ)是詞匯，尤其是對(duì)關(guān)鍵詞匯的掌握與運(yùn)用。在此基礎(chǔ)上，綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)法與句法結(jié)構(gòu)，按照行文邏輯組織語(yǔ)言，形成概要。讀后續(xù)寫訓(xùn)練六篇：一、讀后續(xù)寫（25分）Afarmergrewsomevegetablesinhisgarden.Onedayhiswifewasillandhehadnomoney.Hehadtosellsomecabbagesandcarrotsinthemarket.Thenextmorninghetooktwobasketsofvegetablestotown.Butitwasraininghardthatafternoonandtherewerefewpeopleinthestreet.Whenhisvegetablesweresoldout,itwasdark.Heboughtsomemedicineandhurriedtohisvillage.Onhiswayhomehesawapersonlyingonthesnow.Heplacedhisbasketsonthegroundandwasgoingtohelpthepersontogetup.Atthattimehefounditwasadeadmanandtherewasmuchbloodonhisbody.Hewassoafraidthatheranawayquickly,withouttakingthebasketswithhim.Thenextafternoonthefarmerwassenttothepolicestation.Havingshownthebaskets,anofficerasked,“Aretheseyours”“Yes,sir.”thefarmeransweredtimidly（膽怯地）.“Haveyoukilledtheman”“No,no,sir.”thefarmersaidinahurry.“Whendidyouseethedeadman”“Aboutsevenlastevening.”“Didyouseewhokilledtheman”“No,sir.”Theofficerbroughtoutaknifeandasked,“Haveyouseenityet”“No,sir.”Theofficerbecameangryandtoldthepolicementobeathimupandsenthimintoprison.theofficerwantedtotrapthefarmerintotheconfession（供認(rèn)），butthefarmerdidn'tadmithewasthemurderer.、:I.注意：所續(xù)寫的短文詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；續(xù)寫部分分為二段，每段的開頭語(yǔ)已經(jīng)為你寫好；續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Paragraph1:Theofficerwassoangrythatheaskedthepolicemantobeathimupagain.Thefarmerwaslucky.Afewdayslater,參考范文:Paragraph1Theofficerwassoangrythatheaskedthepolicemantobeathimupagain.Thefarmerwasveryafraid,hethoughthewouldbesentencedtodeathbykillingpeople,buthedidn't,hewasinnocent.Hemusttellpeoplethetruth,butnoonecouldhearhisvoice.hehopedthatsomeonecouldcomeandsavehim.Paragraph2Thefarmerwaslucky.Afewdayslater,ayoungmancametothepolicestationwithalotofjournalists,sayingthathesawthemurderer.Itwasthepoliceofficerwhokilledthemanonthesnow!Hesawthepoliceofficeusedaknifekillingthemanlateintheevening.hewassofrightenedandranaway.Buttheyoungmanthoughtthefarmerwasinnocent.Sohetookthegreatcouragetoexposetherealcriminal.Aftertheinvestigation,theyoungmanwasright.Thepoliceofficerwassentintoprisonandthepolicemanwhobeatupthefarmerwasfired,andthebraveyoungmanwasregardedastheherobythevillagers二、讀后續(xù)寫（25分）Iwasrespondingtoacallfromasmallbrickflatinaquietpartoftown.IassumedIwasbeingsenttopickupsomeparty-goers，orsomeonewhohadjusthadafightwithalover，oraworkerheadingtoanearlyshiftatsomefactoryfortheindustrialpartoftown.WhenIarrivedat2：30a.m.，thebuildingwasdarkexceptforasinglelightinagroundfloorwindow.Undersuchcircumstances,manydriversjusthonk（按喇叭）onceortwice，waitaminute，thendriveaway.ButIhadseentoomanyweakpeoplewhodependedontaxisastheironlymeansoftransportation.Unlessasituationsmelledofdanger，Ialwayswenttothedoor.Thispassengermightbesomeonewhoneedsmyassistance，Ireasonedtomyself.SoIwalkedtothedoorandknocked.“Justaminute，”answeredafrail，elderlyvoice.Icouldhearsomethingbeingdraggedacrossthefloor.Afteralongpause，thedooropened.Asmallwomaninher80sstoodbeforeme.Shewaswearingaprintdressandapillboxhat，likesomebodyoutofa1940smovie.Byhersidewasasmallnylonsuitcase.Theapartmentlookedasifnoonehadlivedinitforyears.Allthefurniturewascoveredwithsheets.Therewerenoclocksonthewalls，noequipmentonthecounters.Inthecornerwasacardboardboxfilledwithphotosandglassware.“Wouldyoucarrymybagouttothecar？”shesaid.Itookthesuitcasetothecab，thenreturnedtoassistthewoman.Shetookmyarm，andwewalkedslowlytowardthecab.Shekeptthankingmeformykindness.“It'snothing,”Itoldher.“IjusttrytotreatmypassengersthewayIwouldwantmymothertreated.”、:I.注意：所續(xù)寫的短文詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；續(xù)寫部分分為二段，每段的開頭語(yǔ)已經(jīng)為你寫好；4續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Paragraph1:Havinggivenmeanaddress,ahospice,sheasked.“Couldyoudrivethroughdowntown?”Paragraph2:wedroveinsileneetotheaddressshehadgivenme,andit…參考范文：Paragraph1:Havinggivenmeanaddress,ahospice,sheasked.“Couldyoudrivethroughdowntown?”Askedwhywedidn'ttaketheshortestway,thesmallwomantoldmeitwasthelastchanceforhertovisitthecity.Wedrovethroughtheneighborhoodwheresheandherhusbandhadlived.Besides,sheaskedmetoslowinfrontofaparticularbuildingorcornerandwouldsitstaringintothedarkness,sayingnothing.Atlast,shesaidshewastiredandwantedtogotothehospice.Paragraph2:wedroveinsilencetotheaddressshehadgivenme,anditwasalowbuilding,wheretheoldladywouldlivetherestofherlife.Twonurseswhomusthavebeenexpectinghercameouttothecabassoonaswepulledup.Iopenedthetrunkandtookthesuitcasetothedoorandthewomanwasalreadyseatedinawheelchair.Whensheaskedhowmuchsheowedme,withoutthinking,Isaidnothingandbenttogiveherabug.Itwasmyassistancethathelpedoneofweakpeoplerealizeherwish.三、讀后續(xù)寫（25分）Myfiance（未婚夫）andIwereexcitedaboutshoppingforourfirsthome.Butourfundswerelimited,andnoneofthehousesinourpricerangeseemedsatisfactory.Oneagentrecommendedahouseinparticular.Althoughherdescriptionsoundedwonderful,thepricewasbeyondourrange,sowedeclined.Butshekepturgingustohavealookatleast.Wefinallydidanditwasloveatfirstsight.ItwasOurHome,smallandcharming,overlookingaquietlake.Walkingthroughtheroomsandtalkingwiththeowners,aniceelderlycouple,wefeltthewarmthandhappinessofthemarriagewithinthathome.Asperfectasitwas,thepriceremainedtoohighforus.Buteveryday,wewouldsitbythelake,lookingatthehouseanddreamingofwhatitwouldbeliketolivethere.Dayslater,wemadea（n）offer—farbelowtheaskingprice.Surprisingly,theydidn'tlaughatus.Theyrenewedtheirofferinstead.Itwasalsomuchmorethanwecouldafford,butfarlessthantheoriginalaskingprice.Thenextday,wegotadisappointingmessagethatanotherbuyerhadofferedamuchhigherprice.Evenso,wedecidedtotalkwiththeownersdirectly.Wemadeourfinaloffer,whichstillwasthousandsofdollarslessthantheotherbuyer'sbid.Weknewit,butwehadtotry.Nobodyknewifwecouldgetit.注意：所續(xù)寫的短文詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；續(xù)寫部分分為二段，每段的開頭語(yǔ)已經(jīng)為你寫好；4續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Paragraph1:Paragraph2:參考范文：Paragraph1Wewenttotheowners'homeafterwemadeourfinaloffer,theotherbuyercametovisittheowners,hesaidthepriceheofferedwasmuchhigherthanours,hebeggedtheownerstosellittohim,thentheowneraskedthebuyer,“whydoyouwantthishouse?”thebuyersaid,”becauseitisnearthecity,Iwanttobuyitforinvestment.Icanrentittoearnmoney…”theownerthoughtforawhileandthenlookedathimandsaid,I'msorry,sir,Ican'tsellmyhousetoyou,becauseIamlookingforsomeonewhotrulylovesmyhouse,notjustformoney.”Paragraph2:Theownerlookedatusandsaid,“Iwanttosellmyhousetoyou!”thenheexplained:He'dseenussittingbythelakeallthosetimes;heknewhowmuchwelovedtheplaceandthatwe'dappreciatetheyearsofworktheyhadputintotheirhome;herealizedhewouldtakealossbysellingittous,butitwasworthwhile;wewerethepeopletheywantedtolivethere.Hetoldustoconsiderthedifferenceintheprice“anearlyweddingpresent.”That'showwefoundourhomeandhowIlearnedthatwhenpeoplearekindtheyarenotstrangers,onlyfriendswehaven'tyetmet.四、讀后續(xù)寫（25分）Afriendofmine,namedJack,receivedanexpensivecarfromhisbrotherasaChristmaspresent.OnChristmasEvewhenJackcameoutofhisoffice,astreeturchin（頑童）waswalkingaroundtheshiningcar."Isthisyourcar,sir?"heasked.Jackanswered,“Yes,mybrothergaveittomeforChristmas.”Theboywassurprised."Youmeanyourbrothergaveittoyouanditdidcostyounothing?Sir,Iwish??"Hehesitated（猶豫）,Jackthoughtofcourseheknewwhattheboywanted,butwhattheboysaidsurprisedhimgreatly.“Iwish,"theboywenton,“thatIcouldbeabrotherlikethat."Jacklookedattheboyinsurprise,andthenhesaidagain,“Wouldyouliketotakearideinmycar?"“Ohyes,I'dloveto,"theboyanswered.Afterashortride,theboyturnedandwithhiseyesshining,said,“Sir,wouldyouminddrivinginfrontofmyhouse?"Jacksmiledalittle.Hethoughtheknewwhattheboywanted.Hewantedtoshowhisneighborsthathecouldridehomeinabigcar.ButJackwaswrongagain.“Willyoustopwherethosetwostepsare?"theboyasked.、:I.注意：所續(xù)寫的短文詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；續(xù)寫部分分為二段，每段的開頭語(yǔ)已經(jīng)為你寫好；4續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Paragraph1Hegotoutandranuptothesteps.Paragraph2Jackgotoutandliftedtheboytothefrontseatofhiscar.參考范文：Paragraph1Hegotoutandranuptothesteps.TheninashortwhileJackheardhimcomingback,buthewasnotcomingfast.Hewascarryinghislittlecrippled（殘疾的）brother.Hesatdownonthestepandpointedtothecar.“Thereheis,Buddy,justlikeItoldyouupstairs.HisbrothergaveittohimforChristmasanditdidn'tcosthimacent.AndsomedayI'mgoingtogiveyouonejustlikeit???thenyoucanseeforyourselfallthenicethingsintheChristmaswindowsthatI'vebeentryingtotellyouabout”Paragraph2Jackgotoutandliftedtheboytothefrontseatofhiscar.Theshining-eyedelderbrotherclimbedinbesidehimandthethreebegananunforgettableholidayride.,lookingatallthosebeautifulthings.ThatChristmasEve,Jacklearnedtherealmeaningofthewords:“It'smoreblessedtogivethantoreceive.”Healsolearnedwhatitmeanstobe“anelderbrotherlikethat.”五、讀后續(xù)寫（25分）Twentyyearsago,Idroveataxiforaliving.OnenightIwenttopickupapassengerat2:30a.m.WhenIarrivedtocollect,Ifoundthebuildingwasdarkexceptforasinglelightinagroundfloorwindow.Iwalkedtothedoorandknocked,"Justaminute,"answeredaweak,elderlyvoice.Afteralongtime,thedooropened.Asmallwomaninhereightiesstoodbeforeme.Byhersidewasasmallsuitcase.Itookthesuitcasetothecar,andthenreturnedtohelpthewoman.Shetookmyarmandwewalkedslowlytowardsthecar.Shekeptthankingmeformykindness."It'snothing,"Itoldher."IjusttrytotreatmypassengersthewayIwouldwantmymothertreated.""Oh,you'resuchagoodman."Shesaid.Whenwegotintothetaxi,shegavemeanaddress,andthenasked,"Couldyoudrivethroughdowntown?""It'snottheshortestway,"Iansweredquickly."Oh,I'minnohurry,"shesaid."I'monmywaytoahospice（臨終醫(yī)院）.Idon'thaveanyfamilyleft.ThedoctorsaysIdon'thaveverylong."Iquietlyreachedoverandshutoffthemeter（計(jì)價(jià)器）.Forthenexttwohours,wedrovethroughthecity.Sheshowedmethebuildingwhereshehadonceworked,theneighborhoodwhereshehadlived,andthefurnitureshopthathadoncebeenaballroomwhereshehadgonedancingasagirl.Sometimesshe'daskmetoslowdowninfrontofaparticularbuildingandwouldsitstaringintothedarkness,sayingnothing.Atdawn,shesuddenlysaid,"I'mtired.Let'sgonow."WedroveinsilenceLotheaddressshehadgivenme."HowmuchdoIoweyou?"sheasked."Nothing."Isaid."Youhavetomakealiving,"sheanswered."Oh,thereareotherpassengers,"Ianswered.Shesaidthankstome,butshelookedsosad.、:I.注意：所續(xù)寫的短文詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；續(xù)寫部分分為二段，每段的開頭語(yǔ)已經(jīng)為你寫好；4續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)Paragraph1Almostwithoutthinking,Ibentandgaveherahug.Paragraph2Iwasonmywaytovisither.參考范文:Almostwithoutthinking,Ibentandgaveherahug.Sheheldontometightly.Beforethewomanleft,Isaidtoher,“Mymothertreatedeveryonekindly,sheisagreatperson,butshepassedawayyearsago.youarelikemymother,”thewomansaid,“thankyou.Ifyouwanttovisitme,I'lltellyoumystory.”Thenthewomanleft.Afteralongpause,Idrovethetaxitogohome.Paragraph2Thenextday,Iwasonmywaytovisither.Theoldwomantoldmethatsheusedtobeamillionaire.Shebecameimmersedinmakingmoney.Shewastheownerofaparticularbuildingwesawlastnight.Butsheneglectedherfamily.heronlysondiedoneyearagobecauseofcancer.Shesoldeverythingtosavehim,butfailed.Howsad！Atlast,theoldwomansaidtome,“Lifeisshort,butpleasebeinnohurry.Thougheveryonehastoearnmoneytomakealiving,alwaysrememberthatfamilyisthemostimportantthingtoyou,”Isaidnothingbutnoddedhard.六、讀后續(xù)寫（25分）Manyyearsago,whenIwasfreshoutofschoolandworkinginDenver,Iwasdrivingtomyparents'homeinMissouriforChristmas.Istoppedatagasstation（加油站）about50milesfromOklahomaCity,whereIwasplanningtostopandvisitafriend.WhileIwasstandinginlineatthecashregister（收款臺(tái)），Isaidhellotoano