十句話搞定讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)2課件高一下學(xué)期英語(yǔ)作文復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)1

十句話搞定讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)2

十句五定法讀一、讀什么：讀材料（一般是記敘文）＋讀提示句（讀關(guān)鍵詞）。

時(shí)間不夠讀首尾段二、怎么讀：1.找信息——who/where/when/what/why/how2.思考——readforcharacters人物/plot情節(jié)/conflict沖突/emotionalchange情感變化/theme主題3.讀的過(guò)程中圈畫(huà)關(guān)鍵信息，重要細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容（用以細(xì)節(jié)呼應(yīng)），好的句式（用以仿寫(xiě)）三、讀完之后要明白：文章主人公是誰(shuí)，文章主要情節(jié)，待解決的問(wèn)題，人物情緒變化與文章主題。第二節(jié)(滿分25分)閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。WhenIwasinGrade11,myfamilyhadatoughtime.MyparentslosttheirjobsduringtheDepression.Dadwastooilltoworkoutside,whileMumhadahardtimeraisinguskidsonherowninoursmallcommunity.Wereliedonourcommunityassistancetokeepusclothed,andalthoughourclothesweresecond-hand,wethoughttheywerebeautiful.Lookingback,IrealisewhatMumwentthroughforsendinguskidstoschool.Everymorningshewouldputanewpieceofcardboardinourshoes,becauseourshoeswerewornout.Constantmovingwastypicalformyfamilyinthesetimes.Rentwastwenty－fivedollarsamonth,butMumcouldn'tpayit.Thesewerehardandsadyears,butwenevercomplained.NewYearwasapproaching,andwewereentitled(享有)toatwenty－fivedollarfundforsocialservices.Mumsaidthatinsteadofbuyingfood,shewouldusethemoneytopaybackrent,assuringusallhadaroofoverourheadsforalittlewhilelonger.ShetoldusthentherewouldbenothingfortheNewYear.UnknowntoMum,Ihadbeenshovellingsnowanddoingoddjobstoearnenoughmoneytobuyanewpairofshoes.IknewexactlywhichshoesIwanted.Theyweremadeofgenuineleatherandtheyhadapriceoftwenty－threedollars.Well,thebigdaycameonthelastdayofthatyear.Iwasveryexcited,asIwashurryinguptocatchthebus.Itwasonlyahalf－a－milewalk,butonthewayInoticedahousewithlightsanddecorations.ItwasthenthatIrealisedinourhouse,wehadnolights,nodecorations,noranymoneyforgoodies(好吃的東西).IknewthenthatwewouldhavenodeliciousfoodfortheNewYear,andIfeltsad.AsIcontinuedwalking,Ibegantofeelconfused.Iwassixteenyearsold,andIwasfeelingastrangesenseofguilt.HereIwasgoingtobuyanewpairofshoeswhileMumwashomeintears.Shewouldbetryingtoexplaintouswhytherewerenopresents.注意：1．續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2．請(qǐng)按如下格式作答。IthoughtabouthowIoughttousethemoneyIhadearned.

SoonIgottomyhousewiththegroceries(食品雜貨).

[前文大意]本文以人物為線索展開(kāi)，講述了在作者11年級(jí)的時(shí)候，她的家里經(jīng)歷了一段艱難時(shí)期，經(jīng)濟(jì)大蕭條使她的父母失業(yè)了，而且父親病得太重?zé)o法工作，他們一家要依靠社區(qū)的援助才有衣服穿。新年臨近，家里可以得到一筆25美元的社會(huì)服務(wù)基金，母親說(shuō)要用這筆錢(qián)付房租，不能給孩子們買(mǎi)新年禮物了。作者通過(guò)鏟雪和做零工賺到了一些錢(qián)，她想要為自己買(mǎi)一雙皮鞋。在去買(mǎi)鞋的路上，作者突然意識(shí)到應(yīng)該用賺到的錢(qián)為家里買(mǎi)點(diǎn)東西。[續(xù)寫(xiě)思路]1．段落續(xù)寫(xiě)：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“我想了想我應(yīng)該怎樣使用我掙來(lái)的錢(qián)”可知，第一段可描寫(xiě)作者用自己賺的錢(qián)為家里買(mǎi)了很多東西。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“很快我就帶著食品雜貨回到了家”可知，第二段可描寫(xiě)作者解釋這些食品雜貨是怎么來(lái)的以及母親的反應(yīng)。2．續(xù)寫(xiě)線索：進(jìn)商店買(mǎi)食品雜貨——男孩幫忙送食品雜貨回家——母親的反應(yīng)——作者的解釋——作者的感悟十句五定法paragraph11銜接para1提示句（接著para1首句往下寫(xiě)）2345銜接para2提示句（根據(jù)para2首句倒推寫(xiě)）paragraph26銜接para2提示句（接著para2首句往下寫(xiě)）789

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升華主題寫(xiě)剩余五句補(bǔ)齊細(xì)節(jié)情緒動(dòng)作心理語(yǔ)言環(huán)境描寫(xiě)Para1.Para2.定

句1:銜接提示句--心理/動(dòng)作鏈定句6:銜接提示句--心理/動(dòng)作鏈句2:句7:句3:句8：句4:定句9:緊貼原文，交代結(jié)局定句5:過(guò)渡到P2首句定句10:點(diǎn)睛兩段十句五定法的思路其中第一段中的句1與句5，第二段中的句1，句4和句5共五句話基本是固定的，其他的句子安排根據(jù)具體情況可作輕微調(diào)整。para1：IthoughtabouthowIoughttousethemoneyIhadearned.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________para2:SoonIgottomyhousewiththegroceries(食品雜貨).

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________我如何用掙來(lái)的這筆錢(qián)，我會(huì)去買(mǎi)什么？

根據(jù)第二段提示句可知作者買(mǎi)了很多groceries（食品雜貨）媽媽看見(jiàn)之后會(huì)有什么反應(yīng)？

我的解釋以及感悟。第一句話：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第二句話：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________材料倒數(shù)第二段提到“我要去趕公交車”，我坐上公交車了嗎？沒(méi)有坐上公交車，那我去了哪里？Thebusdroveoffwithoutme.十句五定法：Acrossthestreetfromthebusstopwasabiggrocerystore.第三句話：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第四句話：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________看著這么多東西，考慮怎么搬回家？Ilookedatthegroceriespackinguplikeamountainandthoughthowtocarrythemhomebymyself.具體寫(xiě)在雜貨店買(mǎi)了些什么，錢(qián)花得怎么樣了?Iwentintothestoreandboughtaturkey,aham,sandwiches,orangesandothergoodies.Ispenteverydollarofmyhard-earnedmoney.第五句話：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第六句話：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________到底怎么做的？Tomyrelief,theownerofthegrocerystoreaskedhissontohelpmerunthemtomyhousewithhisbicycle.（我到家之后）媽媽看見(jiàn)這么多東西的反應(yīng)WhenMumopenedthedoor,shesurprisinglyfoundthatthegrocerieshadpiledupinfrontofher.第七句話：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第八句話：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________我的回應(yīng)和解釋聽(tīng)完解釋之后媽媽的反應(yīng)Holdingbacktears,Isaidtomymum,“HappyNewYear!Abigsurprise!”Ihadalotofexplanationasweunpackedallthefoodandputitaway.Mumwassoexcitedthatshecriedout.ThatdayIgotenoughhugsandkissesfrommum.第九句話：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________