六級寫作經(jīng)典范文及點(diǎn)評欲望

1、欲望與生俱來，人人都有。它可以催人上進(jìn)，使人奮起，創(chuàng)造事業(yè)輝煌；也可以使人得隴望蜀，永不滿足，最終陷于痛苦。如何看待，如何運(yùn)用，不同人的心中有一桿不同的秤AppetiteOne of the major pleasures in life is appetite, and one of our major dutiesshould be to preserve it. Appetite is the kee nn ess of livi ng: it is one of thesen ses that tells you that you are still curious to exist,

2、 that you still have anedge on your longings and want to bite into the world and taste its nu merousflavors and juices. By appetite, of course, I don t mean just the desire for food,but any condition of unsatisfied desire, any burning in the blood that proves you want more than you ve got, and that

3、you haven t used up your life. Wilde said hefelt sorry for those who never got their heart s desire, but sorrier still for thosewho did. For appetite, for me,is this state of wanting, which keeps one sexpectati ons alive.I remember lear ning this less on long ago as a child, whe n treats andin dulge

4、 nee were few, and whe n I discovered that the greatest pitch happ in ess was not in actually eati ng a toffee but in gaz ing at it beforeha nd. True, the first bite was delicious, but once the toffee was gone one was left with nothing, n either toffee nor lust. Besides, the whole toffee ness of tof

5、fees was imperceptibly dimini shed by the gross act of havi ng eati ng it. No, the best was in wan ti ng it, in sitt ing and look ing at it, whe n one tasted an en dless treasure house of flavors. So, for me, one of the kee nest pleasures of appetite rema ins in the wan ti ng, not the satisfacti on.

6、 In wan ti ng a peach, or a whisky, or a particular texture or sound, or to be with a particular friend, for in thosecon diti on, of course, I know that the object of desire is always at its mostflawlessly perfect. For that matter, I don t want three square meals a daywant one huge, delicious, orgia

7、stic, table groa ning blow out, say every four days,and the n not be too sure where the next one is coming from.A day of fast ingis not for me just a device for denying on eself a pleasure, but rather a way ofan ticipat ing a rarer mome nt of supreme enjoyme nt.360 words 行文點(diǎn)評作者開篇點(diǎn)題，指出One of the majo

8、r pleasures in life is appetite。進(jìn)而作者給appetite下了一個(gè)定義，即對任何事物的渴望。接著用王爾德的話引出作者的觀點(diǎn)：Appetite is the state of wanting。在第二段中，作者用 I remember. 講述了自己吃太妃糖的親身經(jīng)歷，描述生動形象，貼近生活，由這段經(jīng)歷作者引出了文章的主題一一欲望最大的樂趣在于對之渴求，而非滿足。作者談的是食欲(appetite)，卻又不僅僅談對食物的熱望。作者由小見大，由食欲談及欲望(desire)，及其滿足(satisfaction)。文章充滿智慧(wits)，是一篇上佳的小品文。讀者應(yīng)能夠體會作

9、者刻意營造的一種輕靈跳躍(staccato) 之感：No, the best was inwanting it, in sitti ng and looki ng at it(不，最重要的是對它的渴望和坐下來盯著它看的感覺)。這句話充分體現(xiàn)了作者有極高的駕馭語言的能力。好文妙譯欲望生活中一項(xiàng)最大的樂趣便是有個(gè)好胃口，而我們的主要職責(zé)之一便是保持這一好胃口。胃口是對生活的一種強(qiáng)烈的愿望，這是一種感覺，它告訴你你仍渴望著，你還有許多渴望尚待實(shí)現(xiàn)，還想繼續(xù)生活在這世界上，品嘗各種風(fēng)味。所謂胃口（欲望），當(dāng)然，我不僅僅指對食物的熱望，而且指任何未滿足的渴望的情形，任何血液的沸騰都證明了你要的不僅僅是這

10、些，你還未好好享受人生。王爾德說他對那些從未得到滿足的人表示遺憾，但對那些已經(jīng)心滿意足的人更感到悲哀。欲望對我來說，是一種渴求的狀態(tài)，它使希望永存。我記得懂得這一點(diǎn)是在很久以前，還是個(gè)孩子的時(shí)候，那時(shí)有人款待和縱酒享樂的機(jī)會很少。而我發(fā)覺最大的幸福不在于吃太妃糖，而在于吃前凝視它的那一段時(shí)間。誠然， 咬第一口時(shí)味道不錯(cuò)，但一旦太妃糖吃完了， 一切皆化為烏有，無論是太妃糖還是欲望全都沒了。 此外，太妃糖的味道也在大口咀嚼中毫無覺察地消失了。不，最棒的是對它的渴望和坐下來盯著它看時(shí)的感覺，仿佛置身于美食寶庫遍嘗天下美味佳肴時(shí)才有的感覺。所以對我而言， 欲望的最大樂趣之一在于對之渴求，而非滿足感。想

11、吃一個(gè)桃子，或喝一杯威士忌，或是期待一個(gè)特別的質(zhì)感或聲音，又或是渴望能和一個(gè)特別的朋友在一起，在這些情況下，我當(dāng)然知道欲望的目的通常在于其無瑕疵的完美。對此，我不想過一天三頓的正常生活，而想每四天來一頓豐富可口的美味佳肴，大吃大喝一頓，接下來不知下一頓從何而來。一天的禁食對我來說并非像是被剝奪了快樂，而是期待更多縱情享樂的時(shí)刻。詞匯斟酌appetite n. 胃口，食欲欲望kee nn ess n. 渴望numerous a. 眾多的，許多的flavor n.味，滋味，味道特色，風(fēng)味in dulge ncen.放任pitchn.程度，強(qiáng)度beforeha ndad. 預(yù)先，事先lustn.渴望

12、，欲望vi.(after, for)對有強(qiáng)烈的欲望imperceptibly ad.察覺不到地，微細(xì)地diminish vi.變少，變小，降低 vt.減少，減小，降低orgiastic a.狂歡的groan vi.呻吟，抱怨發(fā)出呻吟的聲音fast v.禁食，齋戒device n.手段，策略supremea.最高的，至上的極度的，最重要的佳句臨摹【注釋】blow out 減弱；停止；熄滅有人打開了門,【臨摹】 Somebody opened the door and the candle blew out.蠟燭隨之被吹滅了。思如泉涌A sound mind is in a sound body.

13、健全的精神寓于健康的身體中。All progress is based upon a uni versal inn ate desire on the part of everyorga nism to live beyo nd its in come.世人莫不懷著一種與生俱來的欲望，要把支出超過收入，此乃一切進(jìn)步的動力。一個(gè)人只要心存希望，堅(jiān)強(qiáng)堅(jiān)韌，堅(jiān)持不懈，勇往直前地去追尋，去探索，去拼搏，他總有一天會成功。正如鄭板橋所具有的人格和精神:皎定青山不放松，立根原在破巖中。千磨萬清代 紅頂商人”胡雪巖說： 做生意頂要緊的是眼光，看得到一省，就能做一省的生意；看得到天下，就能做天下的生意；看得到外國，就能做外國的生意?！笨梢姡粋€(gè)人的心胸和眼光，決定了他志向的短淺或高遠(yuǎn)；一個(gè)人的希望和夢想，決定了他的人生暗淡或輝煌。人生能有幾回搏，有生不搏待何時(shí)！所有的機(jī)遇和成功，