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1、專題復(fù)習(xí)：專題復(fù)習(xí)：書面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練之一書面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練之一如何使句子優(yōu)美如何使句子優(yōu)美鴉灘中學(xué)鴉灘中學(xué)詞匯詞匯,句型句型 （高級）和（高級）和語法多樣化（較復(fù)雜）語法多樣化（較復(fù)雜） 1.覆蓋了所有的覆蓋了所有的要點(diǎn)要點(diǎn) 2. 應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯和詞匯3. 有效地使用了語句間的連有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊 4. 語言得體語言得體要要點(diǎn)點(diǎn)全全連連接接詞詞語言地道，語言地道，規(guī)范規(guī)范句式多變化句式多變化作文更優(yōu)美作文更優(yōu)美怎樣用不同的表達(dá)方式表示相同的意義怎樣用不同的表達(dá)方式表示相同的意義怎樣通過對句子結(jié)構(gòu)的變化怎樣通過對句子結(jié)構(gòu)的變化

2、,使文章顯得使文章顯得更加豐富多彩更加豐富多彩 怎樣運(yùn)用高級詞匯，給文章增加亮點(diǎn)怎樣運(yùn)用高級詞匯，給文章增加亮點(diǎn)怎樣使句式多變語言優(yōu)美呢？怎樣使句式多變語言優(yōu)美呢？1.What surprised me most was that he didnt know me at all. = surprised me he didnt know me at all.= , he didnt know me at all. ItthatTo my great surprise2.The man didnt know what he should do next. =The man didnt know

3、_ _ _ next. 3.Hurry up, or youll miss the train. =You wont catch the train _ you _ hurry. =You will miss the train _ you hurry.what to do if dont unless4.Too many people to the zoo will cause traffic jam . Too many people to the zoo will _ _ traffic jam . Too many people to the zoo will _ _ traffic

4、jam . lead to result in 5.雖然他是個(gè)孩子，但他懂得很多雖然他是個(gè)孩子，但他懂得很多(一句多譯)1) _ _ 2)_Although/ Though he is a child, he knows a lot. Child as (though) he is , he knows a lot.6.這本書是如此的有趣，以致于我讀了一遍又一遍。這本書是如此的有趣，以致于我讀了一遍又一遍。1)_2)_3)_4)_This book was so interesting that I read it again and again. This was such an inter

5、esting book that I read it again and again.So interesting was this book that I read it again and again.This was so interesting a book that I read it again and again.7.The teacher took a book in his hand and came into the classroom.= The teacher came into the classroom, _ _ _ _ _ _ (用with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)) The t

6、eacher came into the classroom, _ _ _.（用獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)）with a book in his hand book in hand1.把其中一句改為分詞短語把其中一句改為分詞短語He had finished supper.He went out to have a walk then.Having finished supper, he went out to have a walk.A. 合并為簡單句合并為簡單句2. 把其中一句改為介詞短語把其中一句改為介詞短語He was brought in. His hands were tied behind his

7、 back.He was brought in with his hands tied behind his back. B. 合并為復(fù)合句合并為復(fù)合句1. The Chinese artists were to perform here that night.The news cheered everyone of us.The news that the Chinese artists were to perform here that night cheered everyone of us.2 In recent years, Beijing has been advancing ve

8、ry fast.All these make peoples lives convenient, pleasant and colorful. which In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast, makes peoples lives convenient, pleasant With the development of so that Beijing, peoples lives are becoming more and more convenient, pleasant and colorful. Nowadays,

9、 Beijing is developing fast peoples lives are getting more convenient, pleasant and colorful.C. 把復(fù)合句改為簡單句把復(fù)合句改為簡單句She was anxious to find a job after she finished her studies.Having finished her studies, she was anxious to find a job.1. 把從句改為分詞短語把從句改為分詞短語C. 把復(fù)合句改為簡單句把復(fù)合句改為簡單句2. 把從句改為介詞短語把從句改為介詞短語I i

10、nsisted that he should go.I insisted on him going.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一兩個(gè)句式，在整篇文章中，避免只使用一兩個(gè)句式，要靈活運(yùn)用諸如倒裝句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句、主從復(fù)要靈活運(yùn)用諸如倒裝句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句、主從復(fù)合句、分詞狀語等合句、分詞狀語等. Though he is wealthy, he works hard.Wealthy as he is, he works hard.In spite of /Despite his wealth,he works hard.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一兩個(gè)句式，在整篇文章中，避免只使用一兩個(gè)句式，要靈活運(yùn)用諸如倒裝句

11、、強(qiáng)調(diào)句、主從復(fù)要靈活運(yùn)用諸如倒裝句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句、主從復(fù)合句、分詞狀語等合句、分詞狀語等. He didnt get up until 7 oclock.It was not until 7 oclock that he got up.Not until 7 oclock did he get up.As soon as we arrived at the village, we were warmly welcomed by the villagers.On arriving at the village，we were warmly. The moment we arrived at the

12、village, we wereWe were warmly welcomed by thevillagers immediately we arrived at the village.No sooner had we arrived at the village than we Hardly had we arrived at the village when we.句子開頭的變化句子開頭的變化1. The boy was surprised at what he had seen , he stood there and couldnt say a word.= _ _ what he

13、had seen, the boy stood there , _ _ _ a word. (形容詞做狀語形容詞做狀語) Surprised atunable to say2.I didnt realize my mistake until you pointed it out. = _not until you pointed it out _I realized my mistake.(強(qiáng)調(diào)句型）強(qiáng)調(diào)句型） = _you pointed it out _my mistake.（倒裝句）（倒裝句）Not untildid I realizeIt wasthat3You are sure to

14、 succeed by working hard.=_ sure to succeed. (only +狀語提前狀語提前)4. We all know that he is honest.= _ (It做形式主語做形式主語)= .(as引引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句) It is known to us all that he is honest.As is known to all , he is honest Only by working hard are you 5. I passed the physics exam with your help.1).I passed

15、 the exam _ _your help 2).I couldnt have passed the physics exam _ _our help. 3).I couldnt have passed the physics your exam _help. thanks tobut forwithout 1.They believe a public park should be free . They believe a public park should be _ _ _.2. The railway in our county is being built.The railway

16、 in our county is _ _. free of charge under constructionusing complicated / advanced wordsusing complicated / advanced words注意使用詞組、習(xí)語諺語、表強(qiáng)調(diào)的詞來代替注意使用詞組、習(xí)語諺語、表強(qiáng)調(diào)的詞來代替一些單詞，以增加文采。一些單詞，以增加文采。 3. We think the meeting is very important .= We _ _ _ that the meeting is_ _ _.4.The result is not satisfying at

17、all.=The result is _ _ satisfying hold the view of great importancefar from Dont worry about your expensesfor university education, and we will try to help you. and we will make the greatesteffort /do our best / try every meansto help you.At that time the taxi driver had to ask the tourist for help.

18、At that time the taxi driver had no choice but to turn to the tourist.I came up with a good idea.I had a good idea.A good idea occurred to / struck / came to me.Some people claim that reading selectively is more helpful, since they believe that reading without choice is a waste of time.However,some

19、other people argue that we should read extensively, for they hold the view that in such a rapid developing society, we need to enlarge the range of our knowledge instead of restricting it to one or two fields. In my opinion, both sides are going to extremes.欣 賞 一 下欣 賞 一 下Ladies and gentlemen, Welcom

20、e to our school ! Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school! This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978 . People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look. This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 1978 and has been developing very fast. People here live a much better life than before . 書面表達(dá)書面表達(dá)：Now it is taking on a new look. In the past, the school here was very small