短文改錯專練

1、短文改錯專練WhenMollysfatherwasabouttowork,hisdaughterMolly,aged8,handhimabag.Thefatherwasinhurrysohedidntknowwhatwasinside.Whilehavinglunch,hetookoutthecontents:aplasticdinosaur,atinyseashellandthreesmallstone.Thebusyfathersmiled,finishedeating,andsweepingthedeskcleanintothedustbinincludeMollysjunk.Thise

2、vening,Mollywantedherbagbackbecauseshehadnotmadeanoteintoit:Iloveyou,Daddy.Thefatherwenttohisofficehurried,carryingthejunkhome.HeaskedMollytotellheraboutthejunk.Itwasturnedoutthateverythinginthebaghadastory.ToMollytheywerenotjunkandtreasures!ALastweekendourschoolholdasportsmeeting.Realizingitwasourl

3、astschoolsportsmeeting,wedecidedtomakeitaunforgettableexperience.Wefirstattendedtheopeningceremony,forwhomourclasshadmadealotofpreparations.Muchforourexcitement,ourperformancewasasuccess.Myclassmatestookpartinvariousevent,suchasrunning,highjumpandlongjump.Duetothehardtraining,theathleteshavedonebefo

4、re,theirperformancewasveryimpressively.Myclassmatesapplaudedandcheeredfortheathletes,someraisingtheircamerastocapturetheexcitedmoments.Theresultwasannounced.Ourclasswonthesecondplaceandoureffortswerepaidoff!Cupinhand,wetookapicturetogetherproudly.Thissportsmeetingwillbeapreciousmemoryforallofthemast

5、imegoesby.BManyofusarefamiliartotheWorldCup,afootballcompetitionwhichispopularamongpeopleinalmostallnation.Doyouknowthereisanotherfootballcompetitionthatwaswellknownworldwide?ItscaBowlandisheldeveryJanuaryintheUSA.Itisverydifferentfromthefootballweknow.However,themoreyouknowaboutthem,thewellyouwilll

6、ikeit.EachyeartheSuperBowlisplayedindifferentAmericancity.Thisisofgreatimportantbecauseithelpsmakesurethatthegameisfair.NowtheSuperBowlisbroadcastonTVallovertheworld.ButifyouwanttoseetheSuperBowllively,youhadbettertohavealotofmoney,sincetheticketforthegameisprettyexpensive.CYesterdaymyEnglishteacher

7、askedeachstudentwriteacompositiontitle“TheGreatestAchieveLife”I.wasnotsurehowtowriteaboutit.Ivtehoughtitoverforalongtime.Idomanythings.ComingtoAmerica,getajobandmeetingnewpeoplewasmyachievements.IthinkmygreatestachievementislearningEnglish.ThoughsometimeIdontaunnddevrestrythingpeoplearesaying,buteac

8、hdayIgetbetterandbetter.Itoldmyteacherthiswasdifficultcompositiontowrite.Aboveall,itishardtomeasureeverythingyouhavedone.DTomisoneofmybestfriendsathighschool.Wespentalotoftimetogethereveryday.Wesharealotcommon.Forexample,webothworkhardlyandlovesports.AlthoughIamnotsosmartasher,webothdoverywellatscho

9、ol.TomsfavoritesubjectsishistoryandChinese,andhealsospeaksexcellentEngalimshu.sIedtobebadatEnglish.Thanktohishelp,Ihavemadeagreatprogressinit.Yesterday,ourEnglishteachersaidshedecidedtoholdanEnglishspeechcontestnextweek.IthinkagoodchancetoimprovemyEnglish.BothTomandIarelookingforwardtoshowourpotenti

10、alinthespeechcontest!EOneday，littleTonywenttoashoppingcenterwithhisparent.Itwasverycrowded.Tonysawatoyonashopwindow.Helikeditsoverymuchthathequicklywalkedintotheshop.Afterlooksatthetoyforsometime，heturnedaroundandfoundwherehisparentsweremissing.Tonywasscaredandbeguntocry.Awomansawhimcryingandtelling

11、himtowaitoutsideashop.Fiveminuteslater，Tonysawparents.Momsaid，“Hownicetoseeyouagain！DadandIwereterribleworried.”Tonypromisedherthatthiswouldneverhappenagain.FMysoccercoachretiredinlastweek.Iwantedtodoanythingspecialforhimathisretirementparty.Mymummakesthebetterbiscuitsintheworld，soIdecidetoaskherfor

12、help.Mumtaughtmesomebasicstepofbaking.Iinsistedondoingmostofthebakingmyself.Ithoughtthebiscuitswerereallywell.MyonlymistakewasthatIdroppedsomeonthefloorafterIwaspackingthemup.Ataparty，mycoach，withabiscuitinhismouth，askedsurprisinglywhomadethemandjoked，“Imighthavetoretireagainnextyearjustgetsomemoreo

13、fthesebiscuits.”Myfavoritepictureatthepartyisofmycoachandmeenjoythebiscuitswithhappylaughter!GHi,Janice，ItsbeenamonthsinceIcametothisnewschoolandIreallywantsharewithyousomeoftheproblemsIhavebeenexperiencing.AsItellyoulasttime,Imadethreenewfriendhere.Wehangouttogetherduringlunchandafterschool.Wevebee

14、nspendingalotoftimesinginkaraokebars.ItsbeenthreeSaturdaysnowanditreallycostsmemany.AndIstartedtoseethisasatime-wastingactivity!Infact，Idontliketogoanymore,soImafraidIlllosetheirfriendship.HowdoyouthinkIshoulddo?Ifyouareme，wouldyoutalktohim?Pleasehelpwithmeandgivemesomeadvice.GraceHMyoldclassroomwas

15、interestingbecausethreesideoftheclassroomweremadefromglass.Ienjoyedsitclosetothewindowsandlookingattheview.Ontheleft-handsideoftheclass，Icouldeasyseethefootballfield.Inthemornings，itwasfullofstudentsexercising.Theviewfromthebackoftheclassroomisalsosplendid.Closetotheschooltherewasabeautifulparkwithm

16、anytreesaroundthem.Fartherinthedistance，Icouldnotenjoytheviewofsnowymountains.Ontherightsideoftheclasswastheroad.Iwasalwaysinterestedtoseethedriversinhurryinthemorning.ThepositionoftheclassroomwithitsviewmademefeltlikeIwasdreaming.IfIwasonlyachildwhenIstudiedinthatclassroom，Iwillneverforgetit.IIever

17、workedasatourguide.OnedayIsawadvertisementonthenewspaper.Irangupthecompany,andIwasgiventhejobimmediate.Theyaskedmetotakeatouraroundthecitythenextmorning.ThemanagerjusttoldmetosayanythingthatIcouldthinkaboutthecity.Myfirsttouristerrible.Theoldbuswasnotair-conditioned,becauseitwasthemiddleofsummer.Itw

18、asuncomfortableinsidethebus.Thetouristsoonbecameveryhotandangry.Iownedaveryhardtime.Istayedthereforafewweeks,andthenleftandjoinedinabettercompany.JDearsir,Ihavelearnedfromthenewspaperthatyouareneedofatourguide.IthinkIamtheonewhoarefitforthejobduringtheweekends.ImLiHua,a18-year-oldboy,andIwillgraduat

19、efromGuanghuaMiddleSchool.MyoralEnglishissoexcellentthatIoncewonthefirstprizeinanEnglishcompetition.Beside.Ihaveworkedasatourguideinsenior2andwashighpraisedformygoodservice.YoungalthoughIam,Iamfullofenergy.Bringingupinthiscity.Imfamiliarwithmanyplacesofinterestshere.However,ImsurethatImuptothejobver

20、ywell.IfIcanbehired,IwillbeverygratefulandIwilldevoteallmetothejob.PleaseemailmeatLilei1999.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiLei高考英語沖刺訓練短文改錯專練【答案與解析】A本文是一篇記敘文。主要講述了作者和同學們參加最后一次運動會的情況。全班同學經(jīng)過努力拼搏，最終4/8取得了好成績，這給作者留下了深刻的印象。1.holdtheld【解析】根據(jù)Lastweekend可知，是發(fā)生在過去的事情，故用一般過去時。2. atan【解析】unforgettab

21、le首字母的發(fā)音是元音音素，故應用an。3. whomtwhich【解析】這里含有一個非限制性定語從句，先行詞是ceremony，關系詞應用which。4. fortto【解析】toonesexcitement令人興奮的是。5. eventtevents【解析】event是可數(shù)名詞，前面有various修飾，故event應用復數(shù)形式。6. havethad【解析】表示之前做的艱苦的訓練，而且句中有before，所以應用過去完成時。故把have改為had。7. impressivelytimpressive【解析】用形容詞作表語。8. excitedtexciting【解析】表示令人激動的”用e

22、xciting,excited表示感到興奮的”。9. paid前的was去掉【解析】主語是ourefforts，所以不用被動。句意：我們的努力獲得了回報。10. themtus【解析】句意：隨著時間的流逝，這場運動會對于所有我們都是一次寶貴的記憶。根據(jù)句意，故把them改為us。B本文介紹另一種運動theSuperBowl。1. to-with固定詞組：befamiliarsth./sb.對熟悉；befamiliarto為所熟悉。故把to改為with。2. nation-nations句意：在幾乎所有的國家。故把nation改為nations。3. thatwas-thatis根據(jù)句意可知此處

23、講的是普遍情況，用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，故把thatwas改為thatis。4. calling-called句意：被稱作-?？芍靡话氵^去時態(tài)，故把calling改為called。5. them-it此處指代前面的theSuperBowl,故把them改為it。6. well-betterthe+比較級，the+比較級，表示“越-,越-”。故把well改為better。7. 在in和different之間加a【解析】考查冠詞句意：在一個不同的美國城市。故在in和different之間加a考查冠詞。8.important-importanee形容詞修飾名詞，故把important改為importane

24、e。9.lively-live此處指“現(xiàn)場直播”。Live實況轉播的，生動的。故把lively改為live。10.去掉hadbetter后面的to【解析】hadbetterdosth.最好做某事，故去掉hadbetter后面的to。C1. student【解析】后加to考查介詞。此處為固定搭配：asksbtodosth：要求/請求某人做某事。故加to。2. titlettitled【解析】考查非謂語動詞。此處為非謂語動詞，title和邏輯主語composition之間是被動關系，故用過去分詞，titled。3. howtwhat【解析】考查連詞。句意：我不知道該寫什么，故用what。4. do

25、tdid【解析】考查時態(tài)。此文用過去時態(tài)描述，故用did。故改成getting。6.wastwere5. gettgetting【解析】考查動名詞。and連接的為并列結構，根據(jù)前后用詞都是動名詞,WhenlytLitherwasahcnHtuwork*diuRht?rMolly-mfitdhnhelookoutiht?cuntrnlMapktslicdiEiusciurtiny諭kNandihrc?11njTheLufvfnhertsmiJtd-invKcdfand嚴cc兩陰（hedeskiinodue山用丨bininti咖h【川Mullvw.Htirdhur冷只hddehidtnrmddt山

26、餛includincThaiinlitjTkiwymiPDaddvqThefalbrrwtn|Inhi苦ulfirchurrinl事carrring1hrjunkhr*me4Hridl巴訃右川ihrli昏徑iurncdf.hl:ihM紳ryihingnS/h8口h.：M訂畑叫TnMdlylheywerenoiunkbun【解析】考查主謂一致。and連接的有三個主語，是復數(shù)形式，故用were。7. SometimeSometimes】解析】考查副詞。此處表示有時候，用sometimes8. 去掉but【解析】考查連詞。though/although不能和but同時使用，一次只能用一個，故去掉bu

27、t。9. was【解析】后加a考查冠詞。composition是可數(shù)名詞，此處用單數(shù)，故加a。10. AboveAfter【解析】考查固定搭配。aboveall是更重要的是的意思，此處為afterall，意為畢竟的意思。D本文屬于記敘文，講述了我的好朋友Tom幫助我學習英語的事情?！拘☆}1】spent改為spend考查時態(tài)。本句的時間狀語是everyday，這是一般現(xiàn)在時的時間狀語，謂語動詞使用spend.【小題2】lot后加in考查固定搭配。介詞短語incommon共同。句意：我們分享了很多共同之處?！拘☆}3】hardly改為hard考查副詞。動詞短語workhard努力學習，而hardly

28、幾乎不，表示否定含義?！拘☆}4】her改為him考查代詞。Tom是男性，所以使用代詞him指代他，而her指代女性。【小題5】is改為are考查主謂一致。本句主語是Tomsfavoritesubjects，這是復數(shù)名詞，謂語動詞也要使用復數(shù)形式are.【小題6】去掉am考查固定結構。句式usedtodosth過去常常做某事；beusedtodosth被用來來做某事；句意：我過去不擅長英語?！拘☆}7】Thank改為Thanks考查固定搭配。短語thanksto多虧；表示原因。句意：多虧他的幫助，我在英語方面取得了很大進步?！拘☆}8】去掉a考查名詞。本句中名詞progress進步”是不可數(shù)名詞，不

29、能使用a修飾。【小題9】think后加it考查句子結構。本句中it是賓語，指代前句中的出現(xiàn)的名詞短語anEnglishspeechcontest?！拘☆}10】show改為showing考查動名詞。動詞短語lookforwardto期待.；其中to是介詞，后面要接名詞或動名詞做賓語。本句使用動名詞showing作為to的賓語。E第一處：parentparents由下文的hisparentswere.以及倒數(shù)第二句中的媽媽說的話中可知托尼是和爸爸、媽媽一起去的，所以應該用復數(shù)形式parents。第二處：onin表示在商店的櫥窗里，用介詞in。第三處：去掉very句中使用了so.that.結構，ve

30、ry多余，故將其去掉。第四處：lookslooking該動詞位于介詞after后，要用動詞的-ing形式，故把looks改為looking。第五處：wherefthat或去掉wherefound后是一個賓語從句，句子意思和成分完整，應該用只起連接作用的that引導，也可以省略。故把where改為that或去掉where。第六處：begunfbegan本文描述的是過去的經(jīng)歷，and連接的兩個并列成分應當時態(tài)一致，故此處用一般過去時，把begun改為began。第七處：tellingftold由and可知，此處和謂語動詞saw并列，故用過去式。第八處：afthe這里指的是前文提到的shop，所以用

31、定冠詞the修飾，表特指。第九處：saw后加his這里特指托尼的父母親，所以用物主代詞his修飾parents。第十處：terriblefterribly修飾形容詞worried要用副詞形式。F第一處：去掉in用last，next等表示的時間狀語前不用介詞，故去掉in。第二處：anythingfsomethinganything用于疑問句和否定句中，something用于肯定句中，故將anything改為something。第三處：betterfbest表示比較的范圍是intheworld，故改為最高級。第四處：decidefdecideddecide意為“決定”，此處時態(tài)應與全文時態(tài)一致，故

32、改為decided。第五處：stepfstepsstep是可數(shù)名詞，前面有some修飾，故用復數(shù)形式。第六處：wellfgood系動詞be后接形容詞作表語，副詞不能充當表語，故改well為good。第七處：afterfwhen/while句意為：我唯一的錯誤就是當我正在打包的時候掉地上了一些。根據(jù)句意可知將after改為when或while。第八處：afthe第一段第二句中有提到party，此處為第二次提到，故用the表特指。故將a改為the。第九處：just后加to分析句子結構可知，mighthaveto是謂語部分，從而get不再是謂語動詞，故只能是非謂語動詞。此處表示目的，故用不定式。第十

33、處：enjoyfenjoying此處mycoachandme作介詞of的賓語，enjoy與mycoachandme之間是主動關系，應用現(xiàn)在分詞形式。G第一處：want后加towanttodosth.為固定搭配，意為“想要做某事”。第二處：tellftold根據(jù)從句中的時間狀語lasttime可知該動作發(fā)生在過去，故應用一般過去時。第三處：friendffriendsfriend為可數(shù)名詞，根據(jù)前面的數(shù)詞three可知此處應用復數(shù)形式。故將friend改為friends。第四處：singfsingingspendsometime(in)doingsth.是固定搭配，意為花時間做某事”。故將sing改為singing。第五處：manyfmuch此處說的是在卡拉0K唱歌這件事讓作者花費了很多錢，浪費了很多時間。many指代可數(shù)名詞，much指代不可數(shù)名詞。故將many改為much。第六處：sofbut逗號前說不想再去了，而后面又說害怕失去友誼，由此可知逗號前后為轉折關系，而非因果關系。故將so改為but