河南省信陽市第四高級中學(xué)2014屆高考英語專題訓(xùn)練短文改錯、書面表達(dá)

1、河南省信陽市第四高級中學(xué)2014屆高考英語專題訓(xùn)練： 短文改錯、書面表達(dá)（12） (201*·唐山聯(lián)考)When I was a child, my mom was pushed me to study hard，1._hoping I could get a chance to go to college. I experience2._pressure for the first time. I did that my mom expected3._because I didn't want to let her off. I was born to a poor4._p

2、easant family, but I really knew life was not easy. All the5._things my mother did was the result of her hope that I could6._lead better life in the future. As the saying goes, “No pains7._no gains.”I was finally able to meet my mother expectations and8._have a chance to go to college. Thanks to my

3、mother's push and the 9._pressure, I made it. Now, I no longer think pressure is a good thing.10._答案與解析：1去掉第二個was此處不用被動語態(tài)，故was多余。2experienceexperienced此處應(yīng)用一般過去時態(tài)，與全文時態(tài)保持一致。3thatwhat這里用what引導(dǎo)賓語從句并在從句中作賓語，that沒有這種用法。4offdown結(jié)合上下文可知此處意為“我不想讓她失望”，故應(yīng)用let sb. down表示“讓某人失望”。5butand或so此處應(yīng)為順承關(guān)系而非轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故將b

4、ut改為and或so。6waswere此處主語為all the things，故應(yīng)用were。7better前加alead a better life表示“過一種更好的生活”。8mothermother's此處表示“達(dá)到了媽媽的期望”，故應(yīng)用其所有格形式。910goodbad根據(jù)上文可知此處是指“我不再認(rèn)為壓力是一件壞事”，故應(yīng)將good改為bad。*結(jié)束請你根據(jù)以下提示，結(jié)合你生活中的一個事例，用英語寫一篇短文，談?wù)務(wù)\信(honesty)的作用。Honesty means always telling the truth and never cheating.Honesty is a

5、 kind of courage and responsibility，an invisible power and wealth.Honesty wins trust，respect and friendship.So it pays to be honest.注意：無須寫標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語提示語； 內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合你生活中的一個事例； 文中不得透漏個人姓名和學(xué)校名稱； 詞數(shù)為120左右。_參考范文One possible version：Honesty is a good virtue.If you are honest all the time，you'll be trusted a

6、nd respected by others.I have learned a lot from my experience of dishonesty.When I was in Senior One，I was so eager to get a high score that I cheated in the exam.Although nobody discovered it，I had no sense of success at all.Instead，I felt guilty and it bothered me for a long time.What was worse，I

7、 was afraid that my friends would know about it and trust me no longer.So from then on，I have been determined never to be dishonest.Otherwise I will be looked down upon and lose all my friends.*結(jié)束第一套短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（）。并在其下面寫出修改后的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（/）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞后劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1

8、每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞;2只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不記分。 Im a middle school student name Li Ming. Im writing to tell you something. Recently Inoticed many of my classmates often go to the cyber cafe near our school. I went there too in the other day. I was surprising to see many students playing computer games, watchi

9、ng films or chat. Some students were even talking about love affairs online. On my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place which we can find much useful informations. The Internet should be a window to the outside world rather than place for games. The Internet is good if we make good use of it. Othe

10、rwise, it will give us great harm. So the local government should take measure to make sure that students use cyber cafes positively.參考答案Im a middle school student name Li Ming. Im writing to tell you something. 1namedRecently I noticed many of my classmates often go to the cyber cafe near our schoo

11、l. I went there too in the other day. I was surprising to see many students 2,去掉in 3.surprised playing computer games, watching films or chat. Some students were even 4chattingtalking about love affairs online.5.in On my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place which we can find much useful 5.in 6.whe

12、reinformations. The Internet should be a window to the outside world rather than 7 informationplace for games. The Internet is good if we make good use of it. Otherwise, it 8 a placewill give us great harm. So the local government should take measure to make 9do 10 measuressure that students use cyb

13、er cafes positively.*結(jié)束高考英語書面表達(dá)講義：議論文寫作9我國正提倡建設(shè)“節(jié)約型社會”，下圖為某校兩個學(xué)期用水、用電、用紙的情況。請對其進(jìn)行簡要分析，以“How to build an economized society”為題，寫一篇作文，談?wù)勛约旱南敕?。?xiàng)目學(xué)期 用電 用水 用紙上學(xué)期 80萬元 62萬元 11萬元下學(xué)期 95萬元 73萬元 127萬元文章須包括以下要點(diǎn)：節(jié)電：及時關(guān)閉電燈、電腦等用電設(shè)備節(jié)水：隨手關(guān)閉水龍頭；廢水再利用節(jié)紙：紙張再利用補(bǔ)充：自己日常生活所感所為留意：1詞數(shù)：100120詞，短文標(biāo)題、開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。2內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，留意行

14、文貫通。How to build an economized society （東北三校）Our government is aiming to build an economized societyIt is everybody's duty to work hard to achieve this goal including us students*結(jié)束假如你是某英文報刊的通訊員，請根據(jù)下列表格以A Big Forest Fire為題，寫一篇報道。(字?jǐn)?shù)100左右) 起火地點(diǎn)叛國西南部森林起火時間一九九二年十一月末火因一青工姻持續(xù)時間三個多星期參加救火人員數(shù)千名消防隊員及當(dāng)?shù)鼐用?/p>

15、傷亡人數(shù)九人死亡，約八十人傷受經(jīng)濟(jì)損失至少兩千萬美元影響震驚全國參考范文A Big Forest Fire A big forest fire broke out in the forest in the southwest of America at the end of November of 1992. The fire was causedby a young worker's smoking cigarettes. Thousands of firemenand local people tried to put out the fire, but they couldn&#

16、39;t putit out in a short time. The fire lasted more than three weeks and was finally put out. In the fire nine people died and about eighty people werenjured. It caused a loss of at least twenty million US dollars. The fire shocked the whole country.*結(jié)束作文（*） 假如你是高中三年級的學(xué)生李華，你在學(xué)校組織了一項(xiàng)“有煩惱向誰說”的調(diào)查 活動。請

17、用英語給校報編輯寫一封信，反映相關(guān)情況。內(nèi)容包括：調(diào)查結(jié)果(如圖所示)、持相應(yīng)想法的理由及你對調(diào)查結(jié)果的看法。 注意：1詞數(shù)100左右。 2信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Editor， I am a Senior Three studentRecently we have carried out a survey-“To whom do you go when in trouble?” The main findings are as follows_ Yours sincerely， Li HuaOne possible version：Dear Editor, I am

18、a Senior Three studentRecently we have carried out a survey“To whom do you go when in trouble?"The main findings are as follows 61of the students surveyed select friends or schoolmates as their ideal listeners when they have trouble，the reason of which is that they are in the same age group and

19、 have a better understanding of each otherAnother 22choose teachers and parents to talk toThey believe that teachers and parents are rich in life and educational experiences,Nevertheless，there are also 17who dont share their troubles at allThey say that their troubles are none of othersbusinessOther

20、s find it hard to get along with others It is not easy to reach definite conclusions based on such a small surveyHowever，some general comments can be madeIt seems clear from the respome that some students lack communication with others，and teachers and parents need to play a more important role in t

21、heir lives Yours sincerely,Li Hua*結(jié)束高考英語書面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)高考英語書面表達(dá)技巧如何提高書面表達(dá)的檔次,爭取得高分甚至滿分？不少同學(xué)們可能很不理解:考試時,寫出的書面表達(dá)要點(diǎn)齊全,表達(dá)也正確,可就是不知道為什么打不上高分。是啊,為什么呢？今天,我們就來研究如何解決這個問題。首先讓我們來看近年來全國高考英語書面表達(dá)的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn):第五檔（很好）:“覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容;應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯;語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯誤,但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級詞匯所致;應(yīng)用簡單的語句間的連接成分,使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊;達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的?！?可見,高考書面表達(dá)評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)在語言的運(yùn)用

22、上對考生提出了更高的要求。也就是說在考查考生語言準(zhǔn)確性的基礎(chǔ)上,進(jìn)一步強(qiáng)調(diào)了用詞的得體性、表達(dá)方式的多樣性。如果同學(xué)們僅運(yùn)用基礎(chǔ)的詞匯和基本的句型,不能體現(xiàn)出較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力,即使要點(diǎn)齊全,表達(dá)沒有語法錯誤,也不能給人一種含金量高的審美享受,因此很難在考試的評分中得到較高檔次。評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)給我們傳遞了另外一個信息,如果有意識地使用較高級詞匯或復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu),即使有些錯誤,也不扣分,仍屬于最高檔次。因此要使一個平淡的文章變得豐富起來,從而提高書面表達(dá)的檔次。我認(rèn)為同學(xué)們應(yīng)著力于從以下三個方面來增強(qiáng)書面表達(dá)的效果。1.學(xué)會使用較高級的詞匯詞匯反映你知識貯存量的多少,也是衡量英語水平的一個重要標(biāo)志。從評分標(biāo)

23、準(zhǔn)可知,運(yùn)用高級的詞匯對提高書面表達(dá)的分?jǐn)?shù)至關(guān)重要。大家先來看下面這些句子:(1)Because the weather was good,our journey was comfortable.Thanks to the good weather,our journey was comfortable.(2)We all think he is a great man.We all think highly of him.(3)Suddenly I thought out a good idea. .came upon.A good idea occurred to me./A good i

24、dea suddenly struck me.(4)The students there neednt pay for their books.Books are free for the students there.(5)As a result the plan was a failure.The plan turned out (to be) a failure.(6)When she heard he had died,she went pale with sorrow.At the news of his death,she went pale with sorrow.(7)She

25、went to Austria in order to study music.She went to Austria for/with the purpose of studying music.(8)When he spoke,he felt more and more excited.The more he spoke,the more excited he felt.2.學(xué)會使用較豐富的句式在整篇文章中,避免只使用一兩個句型,要靈活運(yùn)用各種語法結(jié)構(gòu),運(yùn)用得當(dāng)?shù)木渥咏Y(jié)構(gòu)可以給文章增色不少,從而使整篇文章因此而生輝。例如:(1)When he arrives,please give me

26、an e-mail.（使用v.-ing形式）On his arriving/arrival,please give me an e-mail.(2)To his surprise,the little girl knows so many things.（使用名詞性從句）What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.(That the little girl knows so many things surprises him./It surprises him that the little girl know

27、s so many things.) (3)Though Im weak,Ill make the effort.(使用倒裝句)Weak as I am,Ill make the effort.(4)He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型It was. not until.)It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.Not until

28、he had read the news in the newspaper did he know what had happened.(5)I passed the physics exam because of your help.（使用虛擬語氣）I could not have passed the physics exam but for your help.If you had not helped me,I could not have passed the physics exam.(6)She walked out of the lab and many students fo

29、llowed her.(用過去分詞)Followed by many students,she walked out of the lab.(7)They sang and laughed as they went back to school.(使用v.-ing形式)Singing and laughing,they went back to school.(8)I wont believe what he says.（使用狀語從句）No matter what he says,I wont believe.(9)If you study hard,you will make rapid p

30、rogress.（使用并列句）Study hard and youll make rapid progress.(10)He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.(使用倒裝句)No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.*結(jié)束2. 正文Although the popular belief is that, a current (new / recent) study (survey / poll / investigatio

31、n) indicates (shows / demonstrates) thatCommon sense tells us thatThe increase (change / failure / success) in mainly (largely / partly) results from (arises from / is because of)The increase (change / failure /success) in is due to (owing to / attributable to) the fact thatMany people would claim t

32、hatOne may attribute (ascribe / owe) the increase (decrease / change) to , but is not by itself an adequate explanation.One of the reasons given for is thatWhat is also worth noticing is thatThere are many (different / several / a number of / a variety of) causes (reasons) for this dramatic (marked

33、/ significant) growth (change /decline / increase) in . First, Second, Finally,There is no evidence to suggest thatWhy are (is / do / did) ? For one thing, For another, Another reason why I dispute the above statement is thatIt gives rise to (lead to / bring / create) a host of problems (consequence

34、s).There are numerous reasons why , and I shall here explore only a few of the most important ones.It will exert (have / produce) profound (far-reaching / remarkable / considerable / beneficial / favorable / undesirable / disastrous) effect (influence) onA multitude of factors could account for (contribute to / lead to / result in / influence) the change (increase / decrease / success/ failure / development) inIn 1999, it increased (rose / jumped / shot up) from 5 to 10 percent of the total (to 15 percent / by 15 percent).By comparison