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給大家寫的新題Fluencyand Avoidhesitation,repetitionandself-Arangeofconnectivesanddiscoursemarkers;Lexicalresources Lesscommon Paraphrase/recementwords(換詞性) ticalrangeandaccuracyNobasicerrorsComplexstructures（）Pronunciationloudclear6-7Syllablesounds音標APP (strongform,weakform)Wordstress obviousfinanceConnectedspeechAnewfriendyouhavemadeHowdoyoungpeoplemakenewfriends?羅列動名詞thereRefercolleagueblinddate相親Basically,today’syoungpeopletendtoexpandtheirsocialcircleinvariousways,likemakingapenpalontheInternet(onlineforum),beingreferredbytheirfamilyorfriends,orknowingnewfriendsinwork,studyortravel.Howdopeoplechoosenewfriends?人意見六邊Thistopicisquitewell-rounded,butIguesssomerequirementsneedtobemettodevelopForinstance,Itisindispensableforthemtoxxx,otherwise,ortherewillbeaclashwhentheygetalong，theyarenotonthesamepage;Plus,Friendsaresupposedtobe/bemeanttobexxx,withoutthem,Idon’tthinktheirfriendshipwillbelasting;someonewillbehurt;Tothatpoint,itistimeforthemtoThefactorsandincentivesofmakingfriendsaremultiple,yetitisindispensableforthemtofindsomeonewhosharessameinterestsorcommongrounds,otherwise,thetimetheyspendtogetherwillnotbefullofjoyandlaughter,inthatcase,theirfriendshipwon’tlastforalongtime.WhataboutoldpeopleDoyouthinktheymakefriendsthesamewayasyoungpeople?老少對比inmanyaspectsIntermsofSpeakingofTalkingaboutWhenitcomestoRegardingto老年人：Getusedtobeused年輕人：Whileforyoungsters,thereisatrendthatIntermsofmakingcomparisonbetweentwoofthem,Idon’tthinkitissimilartoeachother;sincewhileyoungstersarelikelytomakefriendsonsocialnetworksitesorvirtualworldlikeyingonlinegames,seniorsalwayssticktotraditionalmeans,likemeetingnewfriendsinparks,travelorsociallife.WhichdoyouthinkismoreimportantFriendsorfamily(loveandsupport)?個人意見六邊形pathetic的;desperateLikewise/similarly,without/withtheabsenceofxxx/ifthereisnopresenceofIamprettysurethattheimportanceofxxxisasparamountasxxx,sinceifthereisnooffriendsinlife,peoplewillinevitablyfeelxxxandxxx;likewise,ifthereisnopresenceofxxx,oneevencannotxxx,letalonengxxxTruthbetold,twoofthemarenotnecessarilyexclusive,sincefriendscanbeascrucialasfamily;withoutfamily,thereisnowayforustosurviveandthrive,likewise,wewillfeellonelyifthereisnooffriends;that’swhythereismeaninglesstocomparetwoofthem.Whodoyouthinkyoungchildrenneedmore,theirfamilyorIsthereanydifferencesofmakingfriendsbetweencountrysideandcities?個人意見Firstofall,Idon’tconsidergeographiclocationcanbeadeterminant決定因素ofsuchanissue;sincepeopleinbothceswillusesimilarwaysofmakingfriends,likeknowingeachotherontheInternet,orthroughsocialization.Whatcandamagefriendship?舉例Specifically,ifthereisnotrustbetweenthem,itislikelytolosefriendship,sinceitistheMoreover,understandingandpatiencearealsokeyandcentral,otherwise,clashandargumenttendtohappenReasonsofcompromisingfriendshipcanbemanifold;forexample,dishonestywillgreatlyunderminedrelationship,sincetrustisthefoundationofgettingalong;morethanthat,gossicanalsoinfluencefriendship,especiallyforpeoplewhoaresensitiveandWhatkindsofpeoplemay 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Aboveall,itwillbeawesome/terrificiftheycandoxxxlovesupport,特別是在criticalmoments關(guān)鍵時AsfarasIcanconcern,severalactionscanbetakentokeepfriendshipfreshandlasting,forexample,itisworthtryingforthemtospendtimetogether,ngactivitiesliketraveling,shop,walkingorchatting;besides,showingloveandsupporttoeachotherisalsomendable,especiallyduringcriticalmomentsinlife;lastbutnotleast,itisindispensableforthemtobehonestandloyaltoeachother.TonamebutaAkindofvegetableorDopeopleinyourcountrylikegrowingntsbythemselves?個No,Idon’tthinkitisquiteprevalent,mainlyduetotherestrictionofourhousingtype,andmostpeoplefinditquitetroublesomeandtime-consumingforthemtontvegetablesathomes;whileotherswhodohavepropergardenswillbeinterestedinntingvegetablesorfruitsontheirown,sinceitcanbeeconomicalandfun.Wheredopeoplegrownts?羅列名Forthosewhoarecapableandinterestedinngso,Isupposeitiscommonforthemtogrowntsinceslikeagarden,potting,rooftoporafarmland;Whatdoyouthinkisthemostimportantntinyour南北方對Inmycountry,therearequiteanumberofntsthataretreatedasstaplefoodindifferentregions,likerice,wheat,potato,soybeanorsweetcorn;forexample,ricehasbeenthemostcommonlyconsumedstaplefoodformostsouthern,whilewheatisviewedasthemostindispensablentfornorthern,whichisthesourcematerialformakingflourandwheatenfood.WhatisthemainntinyourWhatdoyouthinkbeingafarmerDoyouwanttobeafarmerinthefuture?個人意見，六邊形Surely,farmersareofparamountimportanceforbothindividualsandsociety,sinceprimaryindustryisthepillarofanyotherindustry;itisfarmerswhoprovidethreemealsandsatisfythebasicneedsofeveryone;withoutfarmingornts,wewilllosethefoundationofAndforme,Idon’tintendtobefarmers,sincemyideallifeistoliveincities,whereIcanfindfacilitiesofallkinds;probablyinthefuturewhenIretire,Imayconsiderbuyingafarmtontandhunt;howoftendopeopleinyourcountrybuyclothing?Alslegitimate合理的寫作魚骨Somepeoplearguethattheearlierstudentsstartlearningaforeignlanguage,thebettertheeffectwillbe,whileothersthinksuchanhasdisadvantages,discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.( 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