讀后續(xù)寫“潮汐島脫險”高三英語二輪復習寫作專項

SurvivedfromthetidalislandIwasbornandgrewupintheNorthofScotland,whichwasnotfarfromthesea.WhenIwaslittle,Ienjoyedtheseasidesceneryverymuch.Ioftensatontherockbytheseaandwatchedtheviewofthesea.Iwasfondofplayingwiththesandonthebeachandchasedthewaveswithmyeldersister,Alastair.Acrossthebeachtherewasatidal(潮汐)island,whichmeansthatwhenthetidegoesout,youcanwalktoit,butwhenthetidecomesinagain,youcan'tgettoit.MomandDadneverletusgothere.Theytoldusthatitwasdangerous.However，thetidalislandwasfullofmysterytome.Isaidtomyself."Theremustbesomefascinatingsceneryworthexploring.HowIwishIhadachancetolandonit!"

OnalittlecolddayinOctober,whilemyparentswereawayforafriend'swedding.Mysisterwasdeterminedtotakemetothebeachnearthehouse,wherewewouldhaveagoodtime.Iwantedtobuildsandcastles.Whenwearrivedatthebeach,thetidewasout.Weranonthebeachbackandforthandenjoyedourselvesverymuch.Withthehelpofmysister,Imadeseveralsandcastlesofdifferentshapes.Feelingalittletired,Isatonthebeachforabreak.Isawthetidalislandopposite,whichlookedveryniceintheautumnsunshine."Let'sgotoexplorethetidleisland,Alastair."Isaidtomysister."That'sagoodidea.Butmomanddadsaidwecouldn't.Maybewewon'treturnsafely!"Alastairsaid."Don'tworry!Wewilltrytoreturnbeforethetidecomesinagain."IbeggedAlastair.Finally,sheagreed.Wereturnedhomeandbroughtsomepeanutbuttersandwichesandabottleofmilkwithus.

Thenwesetoffforthetidalisland.___________________________________________________________Thetidecameinandcoveredthebeachandthewaterwastoodeepandcoldforme.________________________________________________________________problem?gottrappedinthetidalislandemotion?excited/thrilled/joyfulscared/frightened/relievedThenwesetoffforthetidalisland.1.2.3.4.Thetidecameinandcoveredthebeachandthewaterwastoodeepandcoldforme.1.2.3.4.Wecouldn’tfindourwayhome/thewayhomewasfloodedbytheseawater.Whatdidwedo?ranto,played,chased,made/built,ate/enjoyedHowdidwefeel?excited,happy,relaxed,thrilled,joyfulWhatdidwesee?fascinatingscenery(sunshine,beach,trees,shells,crabs,seebirds,clouds,waves...)Whatdidwedo?I:swam,cried,shouted...Sister:comforted,helped...waitedforrescueHowdidwefeel?scared,helpless,frightened...calm,Howwerewerescued?Parentssavedus,self-rescuedEnding?promised,lookbeforeweleap心理描寫快樂（p2）Iwasoverflowingwithhappiness,hummingandskippinglikeabird.(明喻)我開心得像小鳥一樣哼唱跳躍。Iaminagoodmoodatthemoment,justlikethewhitecloudsinthebluesky.(明喻)我此刻心情舒暢，就像藍天白云那樣自在。心理描寫恐懼（p29）Afloodoffearwelledupin/sweptover/swallowed/overwhelmedme.Mythroattightenedandmykneesfelfweak.我驚恐不已，喉嚨發(fā)緊，膝蓋發(fā)軟。Iwasshakinglikealeaf.Ihadneverbeensoscaredinallmylife.(比喻)我瑟瑟發(fā)抖。我一輩子從未這么害怕過。環(huán)境描寫太陽（p119）Thesunwasbeginingtoset,glitteringredthroughtheleaves.太陽開始西落，

樹葉里映射出紅色斜暉。Thesunsetglowtintedtheskyred.（擬人）夕陽染紅了天空。環(huán)境描寫大海（p119）Theseashonelikeglassinthesettingsunandlookedwonderful.海水在落日的余暉下閃亮如鏡，景色迷人。Theseawasstillquietasifithadfallenasleep,withoutwindorwaves.大海依舊風平浪靜，好像睡著了一樣。環(huán)境描寫沙灘、椰樹、螃蟹、貝殼、海鳥Onthebeach,therewererowsofcoconuttrees,underwhichwerecrabscrawlingaroundandcolorfulshellsshiningwithdazzlinglight.Thecrystalseareflectedthereddishskyandflyingseabirds,whosesongsbrokethesilenceofthequietbeach.海灘上有一排排的椰子樹，樹下爬滿了螃蟹，五顏六色的貝殼閃耀著耀眼的光芒。晶瑩的大海映照著微紅的天空和飛翔的海鳥，它們的歌聲打破了海灘的寂靜。動作描寫歡快地跑（p84）Wemadearushforthedreamingislandwithgreatjoy.我們快樂地沖向夢中之島。Ipulledoffmyshoesandran,barefootandfastonthesoftsand.我脫下鞋子光著腳飛快地在柔軟的沙地上跑著。動作描寫姐姐安慰我（p75）Mysisterpattedmeontheshoulder,heldmyhandsgentlyandcomfortedmenottoworry.姐姐輕拍我的肩膀，輕輕地握著我的手，安慰我不用擔心。Mysisterwrapped/putherarmsaroundme/gatheredmeintoherarmsandwhisperedtocomfortme.姐姐把我摟進懷里，小聲安慰我。動作描寫跑向高處的巖石（p83）Frighteded/Scaredtodeath,Idashedtowardsthebigrockasquicklyasmyshakinglegscouldmanage.嚇得要死，我趕緊拖著顫抖的雙腿以最快的速度沖向那塊大巖石。結尾升華看到父母如釋重負（p104）Reliefsweptovermybodyandtearsstreameddownmyface.HuggingMumtightly,Ipomisednevertoriskmylifeagain.我如釋重負，淚水從臉上流了下來。緊緊地抱著媽媽，我保證以后再也不拿我的生命來冒險。Lookbeforeleap.（122）三思而后行。Thenwesetoffforthetidalisland.Myheartquickenedaswegotcloser.Themomentwesetourfootontheisland,IfeltlikeIcameintoaparadiseofcolorfulflowers,variousbirdsandsplendidscenery.

Excitedandcheerful,webuiltavarietyofsandcastles,feelingsatisfiedwithourworks.Afterseveralhours,wewereexhaustedandourstomachsstartedtoprotest.Bathinginthesunsetglow,withthegentlebreezekissingourcheeks,weenjoyedpeanutbutterbreadandmilktogetheronthebeach.However,weweretooimmersedinthefascinatingviews,notknowingthedangerwascoming.Afterwehadfunasmuchaswecould,wedecidedtocomebackhome,butfoundnoway!T