初中英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)寫(xiě)作技巧指導(dǎo) (2)ppt課件.ppt

1、初中英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá) 寫(xiě)作技巧指導(dǎo),1,brainstorm,Teenagers colorful life,We study .,We like listening to music.,We play computer games for long.,We like reading books.,We often play Sports.,We go to KFC .,Sometimes we travel.,Sometimes we stay up studying.,2,Teenagers healthy life,We study all day.,We like listening to

2、 music.,We play computer games for long.,We like reading books.,We often play Sports.,We go to KFC.,Sometimes we travel.,Sometimes we stay up studying.,colorful,healthy,3,認(rèn)真審題，找出文章要表達(dá)的中心。,寫(xiě)作第一步,審,4,健康很重要。在學(xué)習(xí)和工作的壓力日趨增大的今天，會(huì)休息的人才會(huì)有健康的身體。人們是如何度過(guò)假期的呢？國(guó)際健康組織對(duì)此作了一次調(diào)查，右圖是他們此次的調(diào)查結(jié)果。根據(jù)你所得的信息，請(qǐng)為國(guó)際健康組織寫(xiě)一篇完整的調(diào)查

3、報(bào)告,并提倡大家進(jìn)行假日休閑。,審,travel,stay at home,visit friends or parents,work,5,用簡(jiǎn)單的句子或短語(yǔ)列出文章要點(diǎn)。,列,寫(xiě)作第二步,6,根據(jù)以下關(guān)鍵詞及圖表用簡(jiǎn)單的句子列出文章的要點(diǎn),如何度假 調(diào)查報(bào)告 倡議假日休閑,stay at home,work,visit friends or parents,travel,7,A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people wo

4、rk. Enjoy your vacation.,列,8,A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.,How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report.,Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,a nice hea

5、d,a nice tail,a nice body,9,加,加首尾，使結(jié)構(gòu)完整。 可以采取總分總結(jié)構(gòu)或者總分結(jié)構(gòu)，開(kāi)頭或結(jié)尾的句子應(yīng)注意簡(jiǎn)潔，漂亮。,寫(xiě)作第三步：,10,3 2 1 4 6 5,Second , we should keep quiet in the library. First , we have to wear our uniforms to go to school, though most of us dont like them at all. Every school has its own rules for students. We have many scho

6、ol rules to follow in our daily life. Whats more, we ought to return books on time. Our school rules are good for us, I will try my best to follow them. Third , we must do lots of homework.,11,How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. A lot of people travel

7、. Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. The people who relax well work well.,12,連,恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞句，使得文章層次清晰，各個(gè)部分銜接自然。,寫(xiě)作第四步：,13,1.表示并列或遞進(jìn): and, as well as, bothand, not onlybut also, neithern

8、or; 2.表示選擇: or, eitheror; 3.表示轉(zhuǎn)折: but, however, although, though, after all, 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore 5.表示條件: if , unless 6.表示對(duì)比: instead, notbut, on the one handon the other hand; 7.表示解釋: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words; 8.表示順序: to begin with, firstly, first

9、 (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end; 9.表示強(qiáng)調(diào): also, besides, whats more, actually, in fact, 10.表示結(jié)論: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking,關(guān)聯(lián)詞,14,Lets play the game.,_ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight. He didnt go to movies, he

10、went to the concert _. We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming, running and hiking. _, he stood up. Then he got out. _, he went back. _, he smiled.,15,How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. According to it, most people travel. And some people stay at hom

11、e. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,連,16,We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our survey report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from

12、 the busy world during the holidays . Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,美,17,美,選好詞

13、句，美化文章。在有把握的情況下展示自己的語(yǔ)言功底。,寫(xiě)作第五步：,18,Skill One Make your sentences correct,Good good study, day day up. We should do sports a week once. Save the environment is our duty. There is going to have a meeting today. I hope I can come true my dream.,once a week,Saving,be,achieve,19,Skill Two Express in dif

14、ferent ways,Our parents really wish us to work hard. Our parents really wish us to put our heart into study. The teenagers like the computers. The teenagers are fond of the computers. We shouldnt eat junk food. We should stay away from the junk food. When he spoke, he got more excited. The more he s

15、poke, the more excited he got. We should learn English grammar. Its important to learn English grammar.,20,書(shū)面表達(dá)寫(xiě)作技巧,審,列,加,連,美,21,作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn),第一檔（13-15分） 信息完整，表達(dá)流暢，無(wú)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤或基本無(wú)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。 第二檔（10-12分） 信息基本完整，表達(dá)較流暢，有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，但不影響意思表 達(dá)。 第三檔（7-9分） 能傳達(dá)部分信息，表達(dá)不夠流暢，語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤較多，但句子基本可讀。 第四檔（4-6分） 只能傳達(dá)少量信息，表達(dá)不流暢，語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤多，只有少量句子可讀。 第

16、五檔（1-3分） 只能傳達(dá)個(gè)別信息，表達(dá)不清楚，只有個(gè)別句子可讀。,22,書(shū)面表達(dá),以 “I have a dream”為題寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文， 標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。 Sentence patterns for reference(以下句型供參考） My dream is to be/to do/to go I enjoy /like/prefer To make my dream come true, I If my dream comes true,23,I have a dream Have you ever watched a bike racing? The riders are

17、 cool! Yeah, its my dream to be a professional bike rider. I fell in love with bike rider for the first time I rode. Since that, Ive been riding for 5 years. Some people think its dangerous, I dont think so. During a bike riding, you will be in a high speed and feel the wind rushes quickly. Exciting

18、? That is! To make my dream come true, Ill practice more after middle school. Also, Ill watch more bike racing to learn from the riders. I hope my dream will come true, if so, I can enjoy the life I like best.,Passage One,24,I have a dream Anybody has a dream. But different people have different dre

19、ams. Most people always dream to be popular or rich. But my dream is very special, I just want to be a bird. Why I have such a dream? Just because I admire theyre free, they can do everything they want. When theyre flying in the sky, they look beautiful, even theyre the most beautiful animals. I rea

20、lly want to enjoy the feeling of flying in the sky. However, I know it wont be achieved any more. Its just a dream, in my heart.,Passage Two,25,Passage Three,I have a dream My dream is to be a basketball player. I like it because I think it very interesting. It can make me become very happy and heal

21、thy. To make me dream come true. I need try to do it. And I need take some time to do it. I need practice every day. If my dream come true, I will more thy to do it.,26,Homework,自教育部提倡初中生每天長(zhǎng)跑1500米后，校園里課間可以看到很多學(xué)生跑步的身影。對(duì)于這樣的倡議，你在學(xué)校做了一個(gè)調(diào)查，有些學(xué)生覺(jué)的好，有些學(xué)生覺(jué)的不好。請(qǐng)你把調(diào)查的結(jié)果用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)成短文，并談?wù)勛约旱目捶ǎl(fā)表在學(xué)校的刊物上，開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好。 I did a survey about w