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雅思議論文@李威廉老師下載《絕殺雅思寫作和閱讀寶典》和《最新8分范文集》雅思圖表作文餅圖柱圖表格流程圖1.Somepeoplebelievethatstudentsshouldalwayslearninagroupratherthanstudyindividually.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?（教育）2.Thenewsreportoncrimesandviolencewillimposenegativeinfluenceonindividualsaswellasthesociety.Whymediacreatethecoverage?Whatmeasuresshouldwetaketodealwiththisproblem?（犯罪）3.Insomebigcities,peopleplantoknockdownoldbuildingsinordertomakespacefornewdevelopment.Isitapositiveoranegativetrend?（社會(huì)）4.Theproportionofagingpopulationinsomecountriesisincreasingcurrently,whichcausesmanyunpredictableeffectsonbothindividualsaswellasthesociety.Whataretheeffectsonbothsides?（社會(huì)）5.Theshortageoffossilfuelswillboostthedevelopmentofnewenergieslikenuclearandsolarsystem.Whataretheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofthisevent?（環(huán)境）6.Thelocalgovernmentshouldinvestmoremoneyinbasicfacilitiessuchashospitalandelementaryschool.However,othersbelievethatgovernmentsshouldfocusonspaceresearchforthefuture.Discussbothsidesandgiveyourownopinion.（社會(huì)）7.Theinventionofnewtechnologywillmakepeople’slifefarmorecomplexratherthansimple.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?（科技）8.Thedevelopmentofprivatecarswillcausemanytrafficproblemsinbigcities.Whatarethoseproblems?Whatmeasuresshouldwetaketodealwiththisissue?(環(huán)境)9.Therelationshipbetweenfamilymembersislessclosethaneverbefore.Whatarethecausesofthischange?Whatmeasuresshouldwetaketodealwiththisproblem?（report）10.Somepeoplebelievethatitisillegaltotakesomemoneyfrompeople’ssalarymonthlybythelocalauthorities.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?（政府）

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李潤生@李威廉老師南京大學(xué)與美國霍普金斯大學(xué)碩士雅思閱讀寫作7分速成專家；作者：《絕殺雅思寫作寶典》《絕殺雅思閱讀寶典》

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從4.5到5.5，從5.5到6.5，從6.5到7.5#0927最新寫作真題分析#：小作文是表格，Thenumberofcarsmadein3countriesintheyearof2003\2006\2009。去請(qǐng)記住小作文快速7分法則原理：“先總后分，先一般后特殊?！?927大作文是：Insomecountries,manypeoplehavechosentolivebythemselvesinrecentyears.whathascausedthistohappen?Doesithaveapositiveornegativeeffectonthedevelopmentofsociety?該題的問法決定了他的寫法。最佳觀點(diǎn)確定：“年輕人對(duì)于生活態(tài)度的轉(zhuǎn)變以及經(jīng)濟(jì)上的獨(dú)立是導(dǎo)致這個(gè)現(xiàn)象的主要原因。這題的難點(diǎn)在于要寫對(duì)于社會(huì)發(fā)展的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)的分析，而不能寫對(duì)于個(gè)人的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)，而且從這2個(gè)角度寫的思路是完全不同的，對(duì)于社會(huì)來說，這個(gè)是弊大于利的事情。問法決定了寫法。最佳觀點(diǎn)確定：“1，年輕人對(duì)于生活態(tài)度的轉(zhuǎn)變。經(jīng)濟(jì)上的獨(dú)立,包括大量的女性的經(jīng)濟(jì)上的獨(dú)立，導(dǎo)致這個(gè)現(xiàn)象的主要原因。對(duì)于生活的多樣性的要求更高。3，越來越多的人不喜歡住在大家庭里面，甚至結(jié)婚后生活在小家庭里面。他們的家庭觀念有很大的改變，也有部分人是逃避家庭責(zé)任的束縛。對(duì)于社會(huì)來說，總體來說，社會(huì)所需要付出的社會(huì)成本會(huì)更高。雖然人們的生活方式朝著更加多元和個(gè)性化解放自由的思路發(fā)展，但是對(duì)于社會(huì)來說缺點(diǎn)更多一些。甚至可以提高社會(huì)成本，（因?yàn)榻Y(jié)婚是節(jié)約社會(huì)成本的事情），老年之后，單人家庭需要獨(dú)立的房間，社會(huì)公共設(shè)施，養(yǎng)老成本，NURSING的成本會(huì)增大。Menandwomenareincreasinglyindependentasneverbefore.Althoughthemajorityofpeoplestillchoosemarriageandliveinacorefamilywithfamilymemberstogether,wecanseethesoaringpopulationwhodeterminetolivebythemselves,thinkingindependentlyandmanagingtheirdailynecessitiesontheirownhand.Thecontributingfactorstothisphenomenonaremulti-faceted.Tobeginwith,theyounggenerationarehighlydemandingformobility,senseoffreedomandindependentthinking.Itmeansthatthosepeoplearelikelytoliveinahighlymobilizedway,incapableoftoomuchrestrictions.Wecanfindthemwithexcellenteducationbackgroundandcomparablyhigherincome.Theycandealwiththeallthebillsanddealsincludingthehousing,dietary,travellingbythemselves,withoutrelocatingthecostonothers.Foranotherthing,asthefemalesareequallyemployableandalsotakingimportantsocialroles.Theyneverbeattachedwithmalestoaffordtheirdailycost.Wealwaysinterestinglyfindthosefemalesrequiringmorespiritualenjoyment.Therefore,theyprefertolivebythemselves,whentheymeetnomatchedorproperpartners.Otherwise,theyarerestrictedtooearlybymoralcodeandfamilychores.Whenitcomestothewould-beeffectsonthesociety,viewpointsdiffergreatly.Althoughthispracticeisgenerallypositivetotheindividuals,allowingthemtomeettheirpersonaldemandsandcontributingtothediversityoflifestyles,thetotalconsequencesonthesocietyaremainlynegative.Itunexpectedlyaddtoomuchsocialpressureonthelimitedsocialresourcesandbreedmorelivingoutlay.Theexplanationsareobviousascanbeprobedbythefollowingperspectives.0920最新作文深度解析以及范文參考#0920今日作文題解析#小作文又回歸地圖（心塞吧），對(duì)比描述河兩側(cè)1980年和現(xiàn)在變化對(duì)比，圖中顯示主要functional

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Citizensindevelopedcountriesenjoyedhighleveloflivingquality,mobilityandflexibilityinlifestyleswhilethoseindevelopingcountriesevensufferedastarvationandhavenochancetostudyincampus.Thus,governorsintheseareasstrivemanyattemptsincludingintroducingthenewtechnologies,offeringfreeeducationandothereffectiveapproaches,hopingtodevelopquickly.Itwasonceassumedthatpeopleindevelopingcountiesweremoreactivatedinpromotingandintroducingthenewtechnologies.Itmeansthatthosecitizensandmanagerspintheirhopeonthenewly-releasedtechnologiestodrivetheirindustriesespeciallyinthemining,electronicappliance,telecommutingdevicesandsoon.However,thispracticewasextremelycostlyandeasilyoutdated.Thereasonwhyitwassoisthatthesecountriesarenotwell-preparedenoughtalentsandtechniciansinmanagingthenewtechnologies.Ontheotherhand,someotherspointedoutthatofferingthefreeeducationtoallthechildrenoryoungadultsismoreeffectiveanditsfunctionwillbefarreaching.TakeGermanasanexample,thegovernmenttaketheeducationpolicythatofferingthefreeeducationforallthecitizensinthecountryuntilnow.ThispolicygreatlyenhancethecreativityandhelpsthecountryreviveandthrivequicklyaftertheworldwarTwo.Thepoorcountriesachivedgreatprosperitywiththeexecutionofthefree-eductionpolicy.4，第四段，總體來說，只要是能夠幫助發(fā)展的策略都可以使用?？偟膩碚f，實(shí)施免費(fèi)教育的方法更好。0904作文分析9月4號(hào)小作文：

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ononehand,anumberofbenefitscanbeacquired.Themostglaringmeritisthatmultiplecareerchoiceandconstantchangeofresidencemeansabroadrangeofworkingexperienceandconstantrefreshment.Itmeansthatonecanbecomemoreversatileandwell-informedbyembarkingonmanifoldjobsorlivingindifferentcities.Hence,onecanembracebrightercareerandenjoypreciousmemoryinthefuture.Moreexcitingly，totakeupjobsindiversecitiesenablesonetoenlargehisorhercircleoffriendssothatonecouldestablishwell-connectedinterpersonalnetwork.Residenceinmorecities,tosomeextent,meansmoreexcitinglivingexperienceviacommunicatingwithdifferentneighborsandappreciatingdifferentcultures.Nonetheless,someproblemsmightensue.Initially,thedecompositionoffamilybondsisaninevitableriskduetothespatialseparation.Imaginably,theface-to-faceopportunitiesofcommunicatingwithfamilyandfriendswillbediminishedifpeoplelivetoofar.Besides,everyindividualshouldassumetheobligationofgettingmarriedandstartingtheircareer,itismightbehardforpeopletoobtainthesenseofhappinessandsecurestablelifeiftheychangeplaceofworkingtooquickly.Overall,mystandpointisthatyoungpeoplearesupposedtoexpandtheirminds.Thatisthebestapproachforthemtodeepentheirinsightintowhattheyarehopingtodowiththeirlives.Landingjobsandexploringlifeindiversecitiesexertmanypositiveimpactsonmanypeople,especiallyforthosewhodaretochallengethemselves.關(guān)于總是跑題的魔咒第一組：（討論型）Advertisingishavingabiggerinfluenceonourdailylives.Somepeoplebelievethenegativeeffectsofadvertisingoutweighthepositiveeffects.What’syouropinion?（辯論型）Today,thehighsalesofpopularconsumergoodsreflectthepowerofadvertisingandnottherealneedsofthesocietyinwhichtheyaresold.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?Givereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourownknowledgeorexperience.（辯論型）Iftheproductisofgoodqualityandmeetspeople’sneeds,peoplewillbuyit.Therefore,advertisingisunnecessaryandisnomorethanatypeofentertainment.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?0821最新作文題分析21號(hào)大作文：Duringthe20thcentury,contactsbetweendifferentpartsoftheworlddevelopedquickly,thankstoairtravelandtelecommunication.Towhatextentdoyouthinksocietiesbenefitfromthecontactandcloserrelationshipwithforeignersbroughtaboutbyinternationalbusinessandtourism?Openingupthecountrytowelcomemerchantsandtouristsbenefitsbothindustriesanditspeopletoagreatextent.Insomesmallislandcountries,suchasFiji,internationaltradeandtourismarethemajorsourceofrevenuefortheireconomicsinceFiji,acountrywithdeficiencyofnaturalresources,wouldbedraggedinastruggletosustainitselfitisnotgettingfoodsuppliesandcommoditiesfromtheouterworld.Additionally,inlargecountriessuchaschinaandAmerica,thesetwonationsaretwolargesttradepartnersandrelyheavilyoneachotherforprosperity.Thiscanbeillustratedbytheglobalfinancialcrisisin2008thatAmericacuttheimports,whichaffectsalotofChineseexportfirmstobankrupt.Ontheotherhand,internationaltourismfavorsthesocietyinwhichpeoplefromdifferentculturesincreasinglyaccepteachotheranddiminishtheprejudice.Inotherwords,internationaltourismpromotesthedevelopmentofworldpeace.Duringtheworldcupinthisyear,ahugeclusteroffootballfansallovertheworldcongregatedandturnedupthespectacleinBrazilwheretheyimmersedthemselvesinthecheerfulatmosphere..Ironically,ArgentinaconfrontedBritaininafiercematch.Asitisknowntoall,theyhadmilitaryconflictsafewdecadesagothatisstillfreshintoday’smemory.Thankstofootballthatplaysthemagicfunctionstosuccessfullyreleasethetenserelation,theyareabletocooloffwhenfacingeachother.很多同學(xué)反映寫作沒有觀點(diǎn)，李老師想應(yīng)該是腦洞不夠大的問題。為開發(fā)大家的腦洞，特出一題，請(qǐng)各位思考：＂有一個(gè)男人，多年以后故地重游海灘，路過一家餐廳，點(diǎn)了一份信天翁，吃完之后，跳海自殺了?。枮槭裁?？4分和5分作文是如何實(shí)現(xiàn)的？

十組語法錯(cuò)誤第一組：1，Althoughthecrimerateisfallinginmanypartsoftheworld,butviolentcri